The Torch be Ours
The 24th Pegasus
The pegasus stared at her rifle. Ugly was what it was. Not in its maple stock, which was covered in mud and dirt she’d grown tired of cleaning day after day. Not in its mechanisms, which could only be polished so much with spit and whatever oil they had left on the front. Truth be told, it was a beautiful weapon, designed by unicorn engineers and built so anypony could stand on two legs and fire it. What made it ugly was its purpose, its intent. What made it ugly was that it had to be made in the first place.
What made it ugly was that it was supposed to kill other ponies.
The ground shook around her, and she shielded her face as dirt and stone tumbled off the wall above her head and pinged off her helmet. Those dirt walls had become her world; the artillery the sickening pulse of a dying land. Her shoulders trembled and she licked parched lips. Even as a veteran, she still shook before attacks. It both embarrassed her and reminded her she was still alive.
Still alive… she looked around her. Terrified ponies of all kinds clutched their weapons and pressed their bodies as close to the trench walls as they could get. Their once-proud blue uniforms had long ago adopted the gray of the land, and their colorful coats were all plastered with mud, some of it dry, most of it wet. The pegasus knew that these colts and fillies were hardly more than that; colts and fillies. The war had dragged on for years, and the replacements were younger and younger every day.
Rainbow Dash leaned back and stared at the cracked wood of her rifle stock, the scratches and dents that covered the barrel, and, like so many other days, thought back to the day she signed the paper that claimed her youth.
Terror. Hatred. Greed. That’s what the news claimed started the secession of the eastern territories five years ago. A large group of ponies, in the state of Germaneigh and its surrounding provinces in the east, began to riot and protest for their freedom. Culturally distinct from the ponies of central Equestria and dissatisfied with the Princesses’ rule, they attempted to separate from Equestria and form their own independent state. A state founded on the idea of equality, the elimination of classism, nobility, and royalty. On paper, it sounded perfect. An ideal utopia for all to enjoy. No princesses, no rulers. A nation run by councils and grounded in order. Just one big community of ponies living in harmony.
Of course, Rainbow Dash knew it was all a lie. She’d seen as much a long time ago. And so it was her and her friends who came to Celestia to tell the princess that she couldn’t let it happen. Warnings were issued, followed by threats. The Free States, as they called themselves, responded in kind. Tensions rose between Equestria and the Free States. The former claimed that this was an internal dispute; the latter claimed that it was a dispute between two nations.
Back then, some still thought there was a chance to reconcile. Twilight had hoped as much. She’d spent weeks preparing a special emissary mission to the Free States to try and invite their leaders to have peaceful talks with the royalty of Equestria. With an optimistic outlook and the other princesses at her side, Twilight departed for the Free States in the middle of spring, five years ago.
The war began less than a week later.
The princesses never came back. Twilight never came back. As the Equestrian delegation entered the Free States, they were attacked and taken captive by the secessionists. The Free States and their leaders demanded their unchallenged secession and large swaths of land from Equestria in return for Equestria’s rulers, and as a further threat, the alicorns were stripped of their cutie marks. The moon and the sun ceased moving, instead hanging high above the land and shrouding it in perpetual twilight. They would not move again until the secessionist demands were met, they claimed.
Equestria was outraged. Equestria was terrified. Equestria looked for a response. They found it when Prince Shining Armor took control of the nation. With Equestria’s finest at his sides, Shining Armor told the stunned and grieving nation that such aggression could never be forgiven, and that Equestria would fight to free their princesses and put an end to the Free States once and for all.
That was five years ago.
Rainbow Dash, like so many other young mares and stallions, had been eager to enlist and fight to rescue the princesses. For her, it was personal. The Free States were holding one of her best friends; how could she not fight? The very first day that enlistments were open, she said goodbye to her friends and family, flew to the nearest recruiting station, and signed her life away.
The artillery shook the earth once more around her, and she looked up towards the sky. That same otherworldly glow still bathed the land, not quite day yet not quite night. There were no more natural clouds overhead; they’d all been replaced by smoke and supercharged thunderclouds that’d strike at anypony who flew too close. It was the reason Rainbow was stuck in a trench on the front lines instead of soaring high above the battlefields below. She’d much rather be flying high than be stuck fighting and dying in the mud. But nopony flew these days; it was too dangerous.
Rainbow remembered her first battle. Back then, she was what the drill sergeants called a greenhoof; the only combat she’d ever seen was between her and wooden targets at the other end of a field. Her unit was offloaded at the front, and like giddy schoolchildren, they’d spent the day in the trenches buzzing with excitement at what was to come in the following weeks. The veterans who’d been on the front lines for a few months had only looked at them and slowly shook their heads. Whenever Rainbow had tried to be friendly with them and ask them how they were doing, they turned away and talked bitterly amongst themselves. It was the same up and down the trenches. Nopony talked to the greenhooves.
She found out later that it was because the greenhooves were the most likely to die. No sense getting attached to something you’ll lose the next day.
The artillery early that next morning had woken Rainbow from her sleep. There was no sergeant ringing bells to rally his soldiers. The pounding of magically-charged cannons for a solid hour against the enemy trenches did that for him. Eager and raring to go, Rainbow had been the first to hop from bed, to slither into her uniform, and to grab her gun and meet the sergeant at the rally point. The rest of the greenhooves followed her. The veterans only wandered out ten minutes before the whistle was blown. When the artillery finally fell silent, and that whistle finally did blow, Rainbow had spread her wings and hopped out of the trenches, turning around only long enough to see that some of her boot camp buddies were with her.
That was when she saw her first death. A bullet struck a stallion under the jaw, went into his helmet, bounced around the curved interior, and exited from a different direction entirely. He fell like a sack of meat, rifle and blood spilling into the muck around him.
For the first time ever, Rainbow truly understood what fear was.
The rest of the day was a blur in her memory. She vaguely remembered running, screaming, shooting, crying. Bits of flesh caught in barbed wire. The wounded begging for help. Vivid scenes, without rhyme or reason, stood out to her, but she hardly remembered how it ended. In all likelihood, it ended with a retreat and then the defense against a counterattack, like so many of the battles she’d seen since.
There was always one scene that resurfaced whenever she thought of that first battle. Her first kill.
Rainbow turned her rifle over and found the notches on the side. Thirty-seven of them in all, across five years of fighting. The first and oldest one was nearly completely worn away from years in the trenches. Greenhooves that sought her out always commented on how great of a soldier she was to have survived so long and gotten so many kills. To Rainbow, however, the notches only made her sick. Each line carved into the stock of the rifle was another reminder of a sin to ask Celestia forgiveness for. A crime that she’d beg Twilight to not hold against her when it was all over.
When she was still a greenhoof herself, she always thought her first kill was going to be something exciting. Some dramatic moment in her life that’d make her heart pound. But it really wasn’t. In her first battle, when she’d finally dropped into the trench on the other side, she’d come face to face with a Free States soldier. He raised his rifle to shoot her. She raised hers faster. One shot and he fell to the ground dead, motionless. At that moment, Rainbow felt… nothing. She’d taken her first life, but she didn’t have the time to dwell on it. Almost immediately after, somepony took a shot at her, and she felt the trench wall behind her explode as the bullet barely missed her shoulder. She lowered her bayonet and charged, screaming, terrified, into the vicious hoof-to-hoof fighting that followed, and before she knew it, Rainbow was flying back to her own trench as fast as she could.
It was such a whirlwind of events that it all blurred together. In the years of fighting since, she’d seen many more vicious fights than her first, and many, many more boring days of sitting and listening to artillery thunder up and down the front. On those days, she grew restless, and her wings endlessly fidgeted at her sides. In the desperate search for something to do, she’d taken up drawing. It was something she’d never imagined herself doing in peacetime, but in the boredom between battles, she found it took her mind off of things. She’d even gotten pretty good at it over the years—so long as there was paper she could use. There was always a shortage of paper on the front; on the other hoof, it wasn’t too hard to make makeshift ink or charcoal with the mud from the trenches.
Did she ever show her friends her sketches? She couldn’t remember. It’d been so long since she’d gone back on leave. She went back for a rotation in the beginning after several months of bloody, brutal fighting. A chance to see home after so many days spent in hell was like a dream come true. Like so many other survivors, she’d loaded on the train that morning full of excitement and relief, and spent the rest of the journey sleeping the soundest sleep she’d had in months. The tolling bell of the train when it pulled into Ponyville woke her immediately, and she’d broken out in a cold sweat before realizing where she was and that she wasn’t under a laughing gas attack.
She’d gotten off the train and immediately regretted it. Ponyville wasn’t the same anymore. It was duller, sadder, grayer. There wasn’t even a ‘welcome home’ party for the soldiers like Rainbow had been expecting. There was only the grimness of a town pouring all its resources into the war effort. As her brothers and sisters in arms wandered off to their own families, Rainbow was left alone at the train station.
Still, that hadn’t completely put her down. The first thing she did was swing by Sweet Apple Acres. The fragrance of the apple blossoms in the breeze was probably the first thing to really make her feel like she was home. She’d found Applejack out back tending to the crops as if nothing was different about the world. Rainbow called out Applejack’s name, and the orange earth pony did a double take, as if not really believing what she was seeing. When Rainbow fluttered over to her friend, however, Applejack took her Stetson off her head and collapsed into Rainbow’s forelegs, holding her friend in a tight and desperate embrace as she hiccupped and let months of stress decompress from her shoulders. Rainbow Dash, hardened as she was, couldn’t help but sniffle a little too.
When they’d gotten the tearful reunion out of the way, the two mares went back to the porch and shared some cider. Applejack told Rainbow everything that’d happened in Ponyville since she’d left. Most of the stallions had left to go fight, Big Macintosh included, and that left the mares to try to keep up the daily routine as best they could. Applejack was stuck in the fields every day, toiling under the perpetual twilight almost without rest, and the Equestrian government had commandeered nearly the entirety of her fields and orchard to send food to the front. Rainbow remembered making some little joke about how the food reminded her of home. She couldn’t quite remember what it was, though. All she remembered was how happy she felt to see Applejack laugh.
Applejack had then asked her about the war, and Rainbow got real silent. No matter how she tried, it wasn’t something she could bring herself to talk about. After several failed attempts to answer her friend’s question, the pegasus had hung her head and started crying. Applejack never asked about the war again.
She’d quickly caught up with her other friends in Ponyville as well while she was back. She found Rarity making uniforms for the soldiers at the front and experimenting with different fabrics and stitches to try to find something to stand up to the punishment of trench warfare. The unicorn gladly took any suggestions Rainbow had to offer, and every other second she’d comment on how worried she was for Rainbow’s safety at the front. Rainbow had done her best to try to brush it off and prove to Rarity that she was okay, while inside, she knew she’d never be the same after everything she’d seen and done.
Later she’d found out Fluttershy volunteered at the hospital to take care of the wounded that’d come back home, and what she’d seen served only to make the quiet yellow mare somehow quieter. Still, Fluttershy had been the only pony who Rainbow felt she could talk to about the war. After the blue mare had bawled to Fluttershy for an hour straight about the front, about what she’d done, about everything, Fluttershy had held her close and gently rocked her back and forth, whispering that everything would be okay. Somehow, her soothing, melodic voice had convinced Rainbow that things would get better when she went back to the front, and it took a great deal of pressure off of Rainbow’s soul, even if deep down both mares knew it was a lie.
The only pony she hadn’t really talked to when on leave was Pinkie Pie. She’d been on her way to Sugarcube Corner when she overheard conversation about how Pinkie Pie helped invent laughing gas for the war effort. Rainbow had seen what laughing gas did on the front lines. It was one of the great terrors of trench warfare. Once a pony inhaled a lungful, there was no way to save them. The only thing they could do was laugh, which made them inhale more of the gas, which only amplified the effect. Giggling became hysteria; hysteria became bloodcurdling screaming as the victim slowly laughed themselves to death. Suffocated by laughter. A cruel, cruel joke to bring to the front lines, especially when the Free States had captured a shipment and figured out how to make it themselves.
Rainbow Dash pointedly didn’t see Pinkie the remainder of her leave.
That first rotation back home had been Rainbow’s only rotation back home. Ponyville held too many painful memories and painful questions to answer. She couldn’t bear to see the war slowly squeeze the life out of her town as ponies left to fight and never came back. Whenever she went on leave again, she opted instead to go to Cloudsdale, or Manehattan, or some other city where she could lose herself in drinking, dancing, and gambling. Still, all it did was make her sick to see ponies who had no idea what she was going through dance and gallivant like nothing was wrong with the world. During her last rotation, just before the holidays, she’d flat-out refused to leave the trenches, and military command instead stuck her in an extended stay at the reserve lines. As terrible as it was, the front was the only place where she could be with ponies who understood her, and at least in the reserve lines, it was quiet enough for her to sketch all day without interruptions. She just wished it wasn’t so damn cold in the winter.
An undercharged shell struck no-mare’s land about twenty meters away from Rainbow’s head, showering her in dirt and detritus and making the greenhooves jump in alarm. Rainbow just grimly shook her head and stood up straighter. Magical artillery was notoriously unreliable and shot only as far as the unicorn gunners charged the shells; she was used to such mishaps by now. Once, a shell landed no more than a fifty meters further down the trench from her, right on top of a rally point, and completely obliterated everypony standing there. That was the tragic end of the Baker Company. They were one of the more storied units of the 32nd Division, and Rainbow was proud to know a few veterans from it. Now the company itself was just a story…
Rainbow’s own company, Easy Company of the 54th Division, once had a hundred ponies to its name. As a newly formed division, they’d all entered the war with a chip on their shoulder and something to prove. As greenhooves, they’d been placed in some of the thickest and toughest fighting there was all along the front, and it showed in the numbers. Out of a hundred fresh recruits in Easy Company, only seventeen were still alive five years later. Only one of those seventeen was left on the front lines; wounds had taken the other sixteen out of action, permanently.
For the longest time, there were only two ponies from Easy Company on the front; Rainbow and her bunkmate in boot camp, Lightning Dust. The two slept together, ate together, climbed the trenches together, and shot together. There were a few more activities they did together in their free time that made Rainbow blush just thinking about them. That lasted until seven months ago when a grenade landed right between the two of them as they cowered in a foxhole. Both stared at it in surprise for a second, then both opened their wings and lunged forward. Lightning Dust had been faster, leaving Rainbow to scream and cry as the explosion coated her with her marefriend’s blood and gore.
Then there was only one, and a company of one pony is no company at all.
With the 54th Division utterly destroyed and disbanded from fighting, Rainbow had been reassigned as a sergeant to the 89th Division, another greenhoof regiment in desperate need of somepony with experience to be a leader. Even still, Rainbow still wore the patch of the 54th, and hardly talked to the greenhooves under her command. She’d already suffered enough pain watching ponies she knew and love die; no sense getting attached to something you’ll lose the next day. Still, she made her rounds to make sure that her soldiers were well prepared and equipped for a fight, whenever the next one would happen to break out.
Rainbow turned her eyes upwards, and she could see the glowing shells arc through the smoke and clouds before landing somewhere behind her and out of sight, shaking the earth with each thunderous boom. The artillery following the offensive was the newest in the Equestrian military, with a much longer operational range and the capacity to deliver a heavier payload than anything that had come before. The generals were saying that it’d help bring an end to the war before winter. Rainbow could only hope so. The Equestrian advance into the Free States was losing steam, and she wasn’t too keen on spending another winter scraping ice from her rifle. It was late March right now, but she was hopeful the fighting would be over in nine months. On the bright side, the Free States were starting to lose the will to fight. Despite owning nearly half of Equestria’s industry and ponypower, five years of vicious and bitter warfare were finally wearing them down.
The shattered alarm clock nailed to the wooden post of a bunker began to ring. Instinctively, every soldier checked their rifles and stood up a little straighter. They all knew what that alarm meant: five minutes until the whistle. The artillery several kilometers to the west seemed to redouble their bombardment, almost with a sense of urgency, trying to send as many shells downrange as they could before their soldiers climbed the ladders. Again Rainbow licked her parched lips and idly scratched at some dried mud caked to her cheek with an even muddier hoof. At least it meant plenty of foxholes to hide in. Free States machine gunners could put bullets downrange faster than anything Equestria had. Her greenhooves would need all the cover they could get.
“Alright, greenhooves, listen up!” Rainbow Dash shouted. Her voice sounded like sandpaper; her throat felt like a desert. Too many years screaming over artillery shells, too many nights drinking the memories away, too many afternoons with a cigarette between her lips had robbed it of its youth. She used her rifle like a cane to help her stand, and she looked up and down the line at her soldiers. “It’s a hundred kilometers from here to their capital! This is the closest Equestria’s been to ending this war in five years! We’re on their doorstep now; if we secure these fortifications here today, then we’ve already got a hoof in the door!”
She turned left and right to inspect her greenhooves. They were all shaking and either looking at her with fear or looking at their rifles... with fear. She already knew the latter would be dead before the week was over; experience had shown her as much. Those who were looking at her at least had the tiniest of sparks in them, that nearly invincible desire to stay alive. She smirked to herself; there seemed to be more of them than usual for once. She’d grown tired of having to take new replacements under her wings.
“At the sound of the whistle, we’re going over the ladders,” Rainbow reminded them. A particularly loud volley made her wince, and several of the more jittery greenhooves jumped in surprise. “Check your guns, check your ammo, and make damn sure your helmets are securely fastened! Now… fix bayonets!”
The clattering of bayonets being drawn and attached to the end of rifles echoed up and down the trench. Rainbow watched and waited until all of her shaking greenhooves had fixed the blades with trembling hooves and chattering teeth. Somepony fumbled and dropped his in the mud, and Rainbow shot him an annoyed glare as he tried to dig it out. With one smooth, fluid motion, she drew her own bayonet and fixed the notched blade to the end of her own rifle. Like her weapon, she’d had that bayonet since day one. The only equipment she’d ever had to replace was her helmet after it stopped a sniper’s bullet and her canteen after it’d been shot clean through. She’d given up on trying to replace her uniform; it was much easier to roll the sleeves up and clean her fetlocks than try and scrub mud out of coarse fabric.
Rainbow turned and peeked over the edge of the trench behind her. In the middle of a bombardment was the only time she didn’t have to worry about a sniper taking her head off for doing so. Plumes of dirt and mud shot into the air with each shell impact at the enemy trenches. She had to admit, the new artillery did seem much more powerful than last year’s. From the size of some of those explosions, she wasn’t sure how anypony could survive it. Then again, she didn’t know how she managed to survive five years huddled in bunkers while the very earth shook and trembled around her. At least the bombardment had flattened most of the barbed wire in front of the enemy trenches.
A strange feeling settled in Rainbow’s gut, and one last time, she decided to walk among her greenhooves. They all watched her with wide and terrified eyes, unable to understand how she could remain so calm with the sounds of death all around her. Rainbow in turn gave them each a small nod, but never a smile. Now wasn’t the time for smiles.
Halfway down the line, Rainbow did a double-take and stopped in her tracks. She turned around and eyed the small orange pegasus curled in the fetal position, shivering and trembling at the bottom of the trench. The little orange mare noticed Rainbow’s hooves stop in front of her, and with a squeak, she looked up, letting Rainbow see the pony’s face.
“…Scoots?”
Scootaloo stopped trembling and her eyes widened as she saw Rainbow Dash. She swallowed hard and did her best to scramble into a sitting position. The sudden movement made her drop her rifle in the mud, and wincing, Scootaloo picked it back up and wiped it off on her wing. “R-Rainbow D-Dash?”
Rainbow opened her mouth but no words came out. Completely at a loss, she blinked several times and shook her head. “What are you doing here? Shouldn’t you be in school? This is no place for you!”
Scootaloo winced and curled up a little tighter. “I-I’m sorry, R-Rainbow! I-I-I just wanted to help! You’ve been g-gone for so long, I was hoping… was hoping…” Her ears flattened as another undercharged shell fell close to their trenches and showered the two with dirt.
“For Celestia’s sake, Scootaloo, you’re only fifteen!” Rainbow exclaimed. “How in Tartarus did you even get in the army? Only ponies eighteen and older are allowed to serve!”
“N-no, not anymore,” Scootaloo said, shaking her head. “They lowered the standard to sixteen. They said they needed everypony they could get! I wanted to help, Rainbow, just like you!”
Rainbow shut her eyes and grit her teeth. At her sides, her muddy and ragged wings flexed and relaxed, the twisted and dirty feathers sticking to each other with each motion. “So you lied about your age,” she muttered, nearly inaudible over the sounds of the barrage. She opened her eyes and kneeled down to Scootaloo’s level. “How long have you been at the front? Have you fought in any battles yet?”
Scootaloo shook her head. “N-no, Rainbow. I just got to the front a few days ago. I don’t know anything about fighting! I’m scared, Rainbow Dash!” She lunged forward and wrapped her forelegs around Rainbow’s shoulders. “I don’t want to die!”
Rainbow jolted and stood stiff as a board at the surprise contact. Scootaloo felt the blue mare’s muscles tense, and she immediately let go. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m—”
“Scootaloo,” Rainbow said, her voice as tender as she could make it. “Don’t. There’s nothing you can do now. You were an idiot…” The older mare sighed and brushed Scootaloo’s plastered mane out of her face. “But I admire your courage, kid. You remind me of… well, me.”
The trembling orange filly brightened and looked at Rainbow with wondrous awe in her eyes. “Really?”
“Yeah,” Rainbow said with a smirk. “It takes guts to come out here and fight. Double for you; I didn’t break the law to be out here.” Scootaloo blushed, and Rainbow helped her stand back up. As she did, the older mare caught a glimpse of something colorful on Scootaloo’s flank, just below the mud plastered to her coat. Blinking a few times, Rainbow reached forward with her hoof and lifted the folds of Scootaloo’s uniform up to reveal the large purple butterfly on the filly’s flank.
“Well, would you look at that,” Rainbow murmured, a small grin on her face. Scootaloo shifted in anxiety and excitement as her idol saw her new cutie mark for the first time. “That’s pretty awesome, Scoots. Wish I could’ve been there to see it you get it!”
“You really mean it?!” Scootaloo shouted, her wings buzzing her forward onto her forehooves. Her fellow soldiers glanced at her outburst, but she paid them no mind; her attention was solely focused on the blue mare in front of her.
“Of course I mean it! It looks great!” Rainbow replied in her raspy voice. “And I bet you did something pretty rad to get it. I’ll have to hear the whole story after the fight.”
Rainbow’s ears twitched at a shrill whistle, and she quickly raised a wing to block the shower of dirt from an undercharged shell. When the rain of mud and dirt finally stopped, Rainbow slowly withdrew her wing and shook what she could out of her mane. Scootaloo, meanwhile, had fallen against the wall of the trench.
“Friggin’ magic artillery, I swear,” Rainbow muttered. Glancing towards Scootaloo, she bent over and slapped the filly’s helmet. “We’re gonna get you out of here, kid. Just stick with me and you’ll get through things okay.” She smirked and brushed some mud off of her old company’s emblem. “I’m pretty much a good luck charm if you think about it.”
Scootaloo smiled just the faintest bit. Then that smile fell away and she looked towards the sky. Rainbow Dash did the same, and her ears flicked back and forth. The artillery had stopped firing.
The orange filly started shaking again, and Rainbow bit her lip. Reaching a hoof into her uniform, she pulled out a worn and muddy pocketbook and dropped it in Scootaloo’s lap. Scootaloo looked at it with awe, afraid that if she touched it it’d turn into dust. Rainbow only gestured to it with a wingtip. “Take it,” she said. “Give it a look when the battle’s over. I’d love to hear what you think of it.”
Scootaloo only nodded and clutched the book between shaking hooves. She stared at it with reverent worship for a moment before she stuffed it in her uniform. Rainbow smiled at her, and she smiled back.
Then, with grim resolve, Rainbow stood up straight and waved her hooves. “Alright, greenhooves, get ready!” She was answered by the clattering of rifles into hooves and bayonets bouncing off of helmet brims. Up and down the line, her ponies stared at her with wide eyes; more accurately, they stared at the tin whistle hanging from Rainbow’s neck.
Rainbow took a deep breath, closed her eyes, and muttered a quick prayer. She’d never been religious before the war, but there was an old saying that there were no atheists in foxholes. Rainbow Dash had been in plenty of foxholes.
She dug her hoof into her uniform and pressed the second pair of dog tags she wore against her heart. They felt warmer and closer to her than they ever had in the last seven months. Rainbow could almost see the aquamarine mare’s face, and that made her smile just a little bit.
The first shrill whistle echoed across the barren and dead plains to the north. It was followed by another, then a third, a fourth, a fifth. Spreading her wings, Rainbow grabbed her whistle, stuck it between her lips, and blew it as loudly as she could. Almost immediately she jumped halfway up the wall and frantically waved her hooves. “Come on, Equestrians! Let’s bring the fight to them! For the princesses!”
The ponies around her screamed a battle cry that was more fueled by terror than valor, but up and over the trench they went. Machine guns a hundred meters away opened fire, cutting many down where they stood, and the spotty flashes of rifles lit up the entirety of the enemy trench. Still the Equestrians charged on into the face of death, and soon the trenches were empty except for one or two stragglers. Rainbow Dash paused long enough to make sure everypony was out, and she happened to catch Scootaloo shaking and staring up at her with fear.
“C’mon, Scoots!” Rainbow said, waving one last time. “We got a job to do!”
Then the blue mare turned and disappeared into the hail of machine gun fire. Scootaloo clutched her rifle, stunned, before swallowing hard, spreading her wings, and jumping out of the trenches after her.
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The Siege of Marebeuge was one of the bloodiest battles in the Spring Offensive towards the capital of the Free States, claiming more than a hundred thousand lives over several protracted battles. It took several months of bloody, bitter fighting, but the Equestrian army finally pierced the inner ring of defenses in the seceded territories. The success of the brave mares and stallions that gave their lives in the battles made the unconditional surrender of the Free States and the safe return of the princesses nine months later a reality.
That was five years ago.
Scootaloo limped along the cobblestone roads of Ponyville, her left hind leg supported by a brace. Today, like every Armistice Day, she wore her army uniform proudly. Even though she was only twenty, she carried herself with the air of a pony twice her age, and the citizens of Ponyville respected her as such. Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle usually were by her sides for much of the Armistice Day celebrations every year, but for now, Scootaloo had asked them for some time to herself. They of course understood and left her to wander the town alone.
The orange mare smiled to herself around the flowers she held in her teeth. When she’d left to fight five years ago, she was so worried that her friends would have changed while she was away. But when she came back at the end of the war, she found that their time apart had only drawn them closer, not made them more distant. Scootaloo was infinitely grateful for that. Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle were always there for her. They never asked her about the war, but they would always sit and listen whenever she felt she had to get something about it off her chest... even if she happened to tell them the same story three or four times in a row.
The town that Scootaloo had grown up in ten years ago was nearly gone, but not quite. While Ponyville had modernized itself during the war as a central rail hub for handling trains full of soldiers and materiel heading to the front, there were still little bits here and there that reminded her of how things used to be. The occasional thatched roof cottage and bridges with delicate woodwork over small rivers reminded her of her adventures as a little filly. The edge of the Everfree Forest was still wild and untamed, and the newest generation of colts and fillies still stared at it in awe, wonder, and a little bit of worry, just like how Scootaloo had done ten years ago. In a town that had evolved ugly brick buildings and rail yards, whatever memories from before the war that she could hold onto were infinitely precious.
Ponies waved to Scootaloo, and she nodded back. It felt nice to be honored and appreciated for what she’d done all those years ago, and she was happy that the colts and fillies that stared at her crippled leg would never have to go through what she did. Some days she’d still break down into hysterical laughter when she remembered that she was only a stupid fifteen year-old filly when she left to fight and follow her idol to war. She would have been in the fighting until the very end if an artillery shell hadn’t filled her leg with shrapnel three months before the war ended. Still, six months of fighting had been enough hell to last a lifetime. She had no idea how Rainbow Dash did it for five years. It was something she asked the mare every year on Armistice Day.
The modernized cobblestone road took her to the center of town, right outside Princess Twilight’s shiny castle. An enormous, larger than life monument dominated the center of the square, with a foundation made from chiseled marble and a dozen different statues cast from brass. Benches ringed the perimeter of the square, and finding one facing the front of the monument, Scootaloo sat down. She set the flowers in her mouth to her side for now and stretched out, letting her crippled leg relax. Even walking a mile was painful, but she went on long walks every day to try and keep it from atrophying. It never hurt like it did when it was still full of hot shrapnel, anyway.
The square was busier than normal, yet much quieter. The war memorial made it a particularly reverent place, especially today. Scootaloo let her eyes wander over the memorial as she sat back with a solemn smile. It depicted twelve ponies, three of each race: earth, unicorn, pegasus, and crystal, each carrying a rifle and moving in unison towards the viewer’s right, towards the east. Each race had one member lying in the dirt and mud, wounded; another stopping to help them up or administer first aid; and the last member continued onwards, leading the charge. Princess Twilight had designed it after her rescue and the end of the war. It showed sacrifice, it showed compassion, and it showed determination. More important than that was the overarching feeling of unity, watching each race work together, fight together, and die together in a grand struggle to reunify the nation.
Not only that, but the movement in the piece drew the eye on to the unicorn holding the flag at the front, and then to the pegasus flying just in front of him and holding her rifle in two hooves, leading the charge. Even though her colorful mane couldn’t be conveyed in the single color of brass, everypony recognized Rainbow Dash by the sheer determination in her eyes and the two patches on her shoulder; one for the 54th Division, the second for the 89th. Scootaloo even made sure that the rifle in the haggard mare’s grip looked like the real thing now on display at the Ponyville War Museum, down to the last of its thirty-seven marks in the stock.
Scootaloo sighed and leaned back on the bench, a contented smile on her face. Today, just like the previous four Armistice Days, she’d simply sit on the bench and talk to the colts and fillies who always came up to her and asked her about the war. They’d ask her about her first battle, and she’d tell them about the Siege of Marebeuge, or at least as much as she could without getting too graphic or touching on matters that hit too close to home. But no matter what they asked, she always, always told them about Rainbow Dash, Ponyville’s greatest soldier and a true war hero.
The day dragged on, and soon the colts and fillies headed off to their houses for a solemn dinner with their families. Scootaloo knew that Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom would be looking for her soon enough, and so she sat up straighter and pulled out a worn and mud stained pocketbook from the folds of her uniform. The spine of the pocketbook had all but fallen apart and been reinforced a few times with masking tape, so Scootaloo opened it incredibly carefully and gently flipped through its pages. The sketches in the beginning almost always made her laugh because of how bad they were; ponies were little more than round and flat figures, trees consisted entirely of random scratches and scribbles for branches and leaves. But as the images went on, they slowly grew more and more refined, and the subjects widened. Beautiful sketches of birds appeared, in stark contrast to the desolate emptiness of the front lines during winter. Rainbow Dash had even drawn up an incredibly lifelike sketch of Lightning Dust, her last surviving squadmate in the 54th, looking out over a trench, rifle at her side and her weary face plastered with mud.
Scootaloo turned to the very last sketch in the pocketbook, and almost immediately she sniffled. It showed a much younger Rainbow Dash, possibly from before the war, holding a filly Scootaloo in a headlock and mussing her mane with a hoof. There were smiles on both ponies’ faces, and not a trace of the war could be seen. If it weren’t for the war, Scootaloo liked to imagine that that was how life would’ve been like. Of course, life wasn’t fair.
She gently closed the pocketbook and slid it back into her uniform. Once more she looked at the determined likeness of Rainbow Dash, and after several seconds, smiled softly. She stood up with a groan and winced as she put pressure on her crippled leg. Then, taking the flowers in her mouth, she slowly limped over to the statue. Adorning the front of the marble were almost two hundred little brass nameplates, each one with a name, two dates, and a location. Above them all, cut into the marble and painted in black to help it stand out, was a short little epitaph:
WENT THE DAY WELL?
WE DIED AND NEVER KNEW.
BUT, WELL OR ILL,
HARMONY, WE DIED FOR YOU.
Scootaloo’s shoulders shook as she looked over the names. Many she recognized, some she didn’t. They were all from Ponyville, all ponies who left to fight and never came back. Thankfully there were some names that she didn’t see on the monument, like Big Macintosh. Others, though, she couldn’t remove with no amount of willing. Her eyes traced the right side of the monument until they settled on a name about halfway down:
Sgt. Rainbow Dash
19/6/1433 – 22/3/1457
Marebeuge, Germaneigh, Eastern Equestria
That was it. Nothing more was written. No kind words about the mare who’d willingly given the best years of her life to save her friend. No heroic retelling of all of her battles, no count of all the medals she’d earned in life and in death. Just a name, two dates, and a location. Of course there was more on her tombstone just outside of the town, but Scootaloo could almost feel her idol shaking her head with a small but amused frown. A larger than life monument was all she got? Well, it would have to make do, she supposed.
It made the orange mare smile.
With a deep breath, Scootaloo set her flowers down beneath Rainbow Dash’s nameplate, adding to the beautiful and colorful bouquet that’d been left there by ponies throughout the day. She took a hobbled step backwards and looked up at Dash’s likeness, still staring into the east with the setting sun at its back. The statue was so lifelike, so real. It somehow managed to capture everything about the mare in life, down to the cocksure half-grin on her face.
Scootaloo felt her lip tremble and her eyes water. Hiccupping, she pulled her hat down over her face and sat on her flank in front of the memorial.
“Why…” she croaked. It was a question she’d asked too many times. “Why’d you have to go?”
Some foalish part of her hoped that one day the statue would give her an answer. She asked it the same question every year, but it was always silent. Rainbow never gave her an answer. She didn’t have to. Scootaloo already knew it.
“Scootaloo?”
Scootaloo turned her head at Sweetie Belle’s voice. Sweetie and Apple Bloom were standing several yards away, giving the veteran her space. Seeing Scootaloo turn towards them, Sweetie smiled softly and gestured over her shoulder. “How about we get dinner, huh, Scootaloo? It’s getting late.”
“Yeah, we could use your veteran’s discount,” Apple Bloom teased.
Scootaloo couldn’t help but smile lightly. With a few grunts and groans, she managed to stand on aching limbs and get her crippled leg back underneath her. Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle watched from the sidelines, knowing fully well to let the pegasus stand on her own. The orange pegasus coughed once into her hoof and wiped away the tears in her eyes. “Yeah, yeah, I’m coming. You guys should be paying for me, anyway! I fought for your rights, you hear?” She made no effort to hide the grin on her face.
As Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom giggled, Scootaloo turned one last time to Rainbow Dash. Her hoof touched the rectangular lump under her uniform and she let one last tear fall from her eyelashes. “Thank you, Rainbow,” she whispered, smiling at the brass mare towering above her head. “For being there.”
The statue didn’t respond. Rainbow Dash continued to stare into the east, determined, willing, and ready to die.
With one last nod, Scootaloo turned away and rejoined her friends, and together, the three went into town, leaving the sun to finally set on the monument behind them.
Great job 24. Managed to portray the war respectfully. "Tips hat"
I cried for about half of this. The kind of crying where you're not exactly sad, and not exactly happy, but somewhere in between, and crying seems the only appropriate response to what you're being told. Excellently written, 24.
Uhm... the pony rebels should be exterminated. They gave up a perfect paradise for.... basically WWII Europe... That's a level of retardation that only god-mode punishment can fix.
How did they get so many ponies to go along with their idiotic plans? I can understand some crazy ponies exist, but it's very tough to convince fat, happy people to do anything that upsets their fat happy lives.
Seems every story of this sort ignores basic common sense things here.
This would have made much more sense had the ponies been forced to fight Tirek's race if Tirek went back after escaping Tartarus and rallied his taur kin to combat. Or, perhaps a competent changeling force.
But ponies suddenly deciding they need 'eqality'? Why? WHAT'S THE MOTIVATION?! You're throwing this in our faces while telling us this is the same Equestria as the show's. That would not happen.
As it is, trying to force a parallel between our history and Equestria's is insensible. There are no parallel conditions to trigger the events.
..... I didn't tear up when you were describing the statue, no way. Anyway, great story, quite touching.
6256134 Considering if you read in you'll notice that the princesses cutie marks were stolen. Meaning that the Equalists were led by Starlight Glimmer, thus likely brainwashed.
Good work capturing the sadness and tragedy of war.
Words are incapable of adequately explaining how perfect of a job you did with this story. Well done 24, well done indeed.
That was pretty good, I'd prefer it to be longer, but that's just me.
I give you a round of applause to your portrayal of war.
Even the story description is intense.
I guess I should read the story.
Excellently gritty.
I mean, the implied RDxLD was a bit of a speed bump, but still. And the ending was exactly as I expected it. Bittersweet.
I guess I'm used to war stories.
6254591 >respecting war
for what pvrpose
In Flanders fields the poppies blow
Between the crosses, row on row,
That mark our place; and in the sky
The larks, still bravely singing, fly
Scarce heard amid the guns below.
We are the Dead. Short days ago
We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,
Loved and were loved, and now we lie
In Flanders fields.
Take up our quarrel with the foe:
To you from failing hands we throw
The torch; be yours to hold it high.
If ye break faith with us who die
We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
In Flanders fields.
Am I right about this reference? Only looked at the title and thought of it :)
Well done.
I hope we see something along the lines of a "Secessionist Guilt Thesis" where Equestria makes the areas monetarily pay for every cost of the war, turning them into shades of their former selves.
Applejack's family could use the bits for all the apples sent to the Front.
6257877 Last time the western world tried doing that, we got Nazis.
Just saying.
6257896 That's the point. Sequel bait.
Honestly, the writer did an amazing job with this and I would adore more.
You have have Celestia and Luna come down on Neighpon in code-named personas of, "Fat Mare" and "Little Filly".
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6257865 You would be correct, good sir.
6257718 Glad to hear it. The RDxLD thing came to me on a spur of the moment sort of idea... eh, it was only a little bit of the story.
6257486 I didn't want to write a long story; I didn't think it needed to be any longer to say what it needed to say. Otherwise I would feel I'm just dragging it out.
6256473 *nonchalantly slides a box of tissues across the table*
6255745 ...
*chops the box of tissues in half and gives you the other half*
And thank you to everyone else so far who has expressed their support for the story. It means a lot.
6257921 Reference to the atomic bombs. Because if it ever came to a World War II scenario, you KNOW the Princesses wouldn't let themselves be captured again but would be loathe to actually use their powers against their little ponies. Eventually the need would arise to such heights that the WOULD have to intervene... which means coming down as incognito as they could.
We saw what Twilight could do with the power of four Alicorns. Just half of that power unleashed, even at only quarter-strength could do a lot of damage.
Again, this was an excellent story you wrote so far, so perhaps it's just wishful thinking on my part to want to see more. Still, you deserve major kudos.
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Someone wants WWII.
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It was just a bit... strange. An interesting touch though, and I think it added to the story well.
Oddly enough, relevant to this entire comment, I've written a WWII story that also has an RD and LD comradeship. They do fit quite well together in these types of stories due to LD's only appearance in the show (pls bring her in S5 back she's cool). Oh, and LD isn't very lucky in said story either... It's less on the grit and more on the action.
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I greatly approve the reference :) (Though it's Ma'am, actually :P)
I'll probably read this another time when I'm more up for something depressing. IT's so good to see fanfiction come along that shows your feelings on something and holds a deeper meaning. (Not that it doesn't exist, but can't think of ever seeing any do something like a real-world war.)
This is just beautiful in a sad, dark way...I usually dislike things where everything can be explained through flashbacks or pony's thourhgts to give exposition on past events but this one was done well. Perhaps it's because of the emotion it conveyed. I really hope you haven't been through a war like so, 24th.
Well done.
Oh Celestia this was a heart ripping read. It really touched me. It touches deeper to know that stories like this are true. The way you paint this picture is so beautiful, and makes me cry. Damnit, hehe, I'm really crying now. Harmony, we fight for you.
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6256767 PROBLEM: The Equalists SUCK AT EVERYTHING. They're Harrison Bergeron-level mediocre!
How do you think the ponies we saw in Equal Town could EVER fight a war when they couldn't even manage to bake a decent muffin?
War requires, REQUIRES that people EXCELL at cerrtain tasks. They could not be equal. They could not have their talents stripped and be brainwashed dullards who'd be curbstomped even by the generally-incompetent Royal Guard.
Really, is applying readily available information so difficult? This story could NOT happen in canon Equestria, and there's not enough information about the war to explain the discontinuity away.
So either this is alt-universe where the 'equality' is a farce that they're all buying into, or this story would not happen.
But to be alt-universe, the stoy MUSt define the alternate universe to some degree. It fails to do so. It sets up a for essentially one goal: war death. But why did it need to create a scenario of an entire alternate universe for a theme that didn't require it? All that does is leave a very unfulfilling experience with a world fragment no one recognizes.
Couldn't this war have happened with, say, Yakyakistat? You know, just a teensy mention that Twi's party failed, and the yaks joined forces with Tirek's race and the changelings?
Just one sentance to set that up covers all the bases, explains the entire alt-world set-up, and requires very little head-scratching. We know the changelings and Tirek's race are powerful, so we have no need to question the legitimacy of the war being exceedingly difficult, nor that the Princesses could be caught by them.
Now, in a proper story, this fan familiarity would not work at all since all proper literature must be self-contained. But for the purposes of fanfiction, it's somewhat acceptable. At least it's better than leaving out the background of the war for no reason. Honestly, why be vague? There's no twist or surprises to set up. Why deny the reader a reason to at least consider this scenario as plausible?
Unfortunately, I know my TVTropes. As soon as I saw that...
Well, I hope they have good times in pony heaven.
On a side note, could we get the story of Pinkie Pie as well? THAT sounds like an emotionally charged tale, like the life of Fritz Haber. Laughing gas can also be used as an anesthetic, similar to...how ammonium nitrate can be used as a fertilizer, instead of bombs.
I can almost see Pinkie arguing with herself now...talking with Fluttershy, watching officers examine her work with a gleam in their eyes...the horrifying realization of what she had created...
It almost makes me wonder if there's room for two in the cell of Screw Loose.
6259046 Oh I'm not disagreeing with you there (As you raise a good many points), I was just stating the likeliest reason for why they would suddenly want to rebel based on the information provided within the story itself.
Also now I'm curious where the weather came from during the battle, was Cloudsdale still tossing ice and snow down onto the battlefields despite the fact that Weather Ponies adding problems to your own forces would be a bad idea.
Unbelievable beautiful, it made cry, it is incredibly sad that dash didn't survive to tell the story. And I can only imagine how scoots feels that she, who was there for 6 months, survived while dash didn't. But if it was the other way round dash would feel the same way, but you, what ever the details that not everyone will agree about, you did an awesome job. There are no thousand words that can describe the feelings and thruth in this story.
The feels is felt
Wow. That story was awesome. I could stop thinking about the Veterans Museum I had been to a little while before reading this. Once again another great story by the 24th Pegasus!!!!!!!
the feels are real
6259046 Honestly, when it comes to short stories a whole lot of background isn't too necessary. I know you have a bit of a hard-on for the idea of them fighting Tirek's race, but what the author was very clearly trying to set up was a somewhat equal playing field of war, which would mean ponies vs. ponies. The equalist movement could have been a trigger, but it's likely that not everybody was a full on equalist as we saw in the season 5 premiere. Meaning that these ponies likely adapted some of the philosophies of Starlight GIimmer into more of a marxist perspective. This would make sense as it's clearly explained that this area is not only culturally different from the rest of Equestria, but also is a large industrial center; in other words, most ponies living here are workers from a proletariat background. It may not have been as much of a "paradise" for them, especially given that Equestria is largely an aristocracy with a ruling elite. The further off provinces may not have gotten as good of treatment as places like Ponyville.
So basically, the equalist philosophies were likely adapted to fit an economic standpoint in an area that is almost entirely work force. They see and hear of how easy things are for ponies in Canterlot and the closer areas, and it's not too appealing that their lives are so easy and contribute so little. They've also got significant cultural differences from the rest of Equestria. SO being different and not liking the system, they want to secede. Simple as that.
Could the author have put more detail into how it all happened? Sure, it certainly would not have hurt. But that's not the point of the story. The point of the story is to show the effects of war on a certain character, her friends, and her hometown.
6259776 you're still making the parallel exist between our world and Equestria. Even the worst of the Canterlot nobles are nothing like humanity's robber barons. And I do not see Celestia allowing such cruelty to exist.
Heck, they could even have fought the damned caribou from all those gory porn stories. It'd be nice to see those disgraceful things lose in a story for once. I've grown weary ripping the usually abysmal stories about them merely on the lack of writing skill put into them. A new sort of vengeance is required.
Hmmm... perhaps I should take the time with my current illness to construct a nasty little tale of my own... caribou are rather tasty...
Ah, but back to the point. We do need more of a setup for a story like this, since the Equestria we know is so radically different. Setting is very important to a story, among all the other important things. Otherwise the audience is lost and without direction from the start in an unfamiliar place.
6259855 Honestly I see what you mean, a bit more background wouldn't hurt. Could it be that Celestia turned a blind eye to workers being taken advantage of in the further-east provinces, or were people in those areas merely lying for power? The story does imply a bit of the latter that the equalist leaders were lying for power. It's very skeletal, and a bit more meat wouldn't hurt.
That being said, it really didn't distract because the story still met its goal of conveying war through the experience of a single soldier. The lack of background could be because it's from a 3rd person perspective solely focused on Rainbow Dash as opposed to an omniscient POV, and she wouldn't care too much. Yes, it's not first person and it's not ultra apparent, but the story does seem to be told through her understanding of events until the third act where it's all on Scootaloo.
Having this perspective around Rainbow Dash made it easy for mostly everyone: It's her experience in the war. She trains and gets shipped off to a hellish battlefield. The story works because it's the experience of one soldier, and does not try to convey the entire conflict in-depth.
Really good story,although I do wish one of these stories that people cry at,I might finally cry with them as in stories i think i am imune to the crying feels
I don't think a story's hit me harder than when Scootaloo showed up.
Is it weird that pony fanfiction is my primary source of respect for the military?
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Fluttershy had not been surprised when the Cake's had asked her to visit Pinkie Pie when she had a chance. Applejack was busier than ever since Mac left. Rarity was so busy the soldier's uniforms, her thoughts, for probably the first time ever, on function instead of form. Rainbow had signed up before War Declared newspaper ink had a chance to dry. Fluttershy prayed for her every day. And Twilight...Fluttershy prayed harder.
The reason for her visit was her usually bubbly friend had been more lethargic as of late, her once overwhelming personality fading as the war had dragged on into almost endless weeks. It was understandable and at this point sadly expected. She herself could only barely drum up the motivation to go to the hospital day after day. Just seeing ponies, laying on their beds, mutilated and in agony had nearly been the end of her volunteer efforts the first time.
Yet, she could tell that volunteer work had the hardest on Pinkie, who tired her best to raise patient's spirits. But how do you make a stallion smile after he's been told that he'll never walk again? Or a mare who is beyond medical or magical help?
But still she tried her hardest. Fluttershy could tell that Ponyville's party pony put her heart and soul into every celebration.
So when she opened Pinkie's bedroom door what she saw rocked her to her core. Pinkie's mane was flat. Her eyes squeezed shut and her voice sobbing into the pillow. All around her were shredded papers of chemical formulas.
When she asked what was wrong, the answer confused her at first.
"They took it."
"Who took what?"
"The military took the laughing gas." Another sob. "For use on the front. Were watching when we did trials last week. Tried to stop them. Threatened to charge me with treason."
Everything that Pinkie said at thrown Fluttershy for a loop but threatening to charge Pinkie with treason, for pain medication?
"That doesn't make sense. It's meant as an anesthetic, nothing more."
Pinkie Pie finally raised her head from the pillow, guilt and pain unlike any she had ever seen swirling in her friends eyes, and said four words that sent a frozen pike of horror through the pegasus' chest. "Only in small doses."
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I think you win, good sir. Now I don't have to write it
Ouch, stop hurting me with your words.
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Nice.
An excellent piece of work. Bravo.
I cried at the end.Did Rainbow have to die?!
6261193 Dude. Fucking spoilers, man. A small excessive scroll down and the whole story is ruined. Use the spoiler tag next time, it's there for a reason.
>>Obsidian Rose
Whoopsies My bad.
No sir, I don't like it.
It was well-written, flowed smoothly, it didn't seem rushed. From a literary standpoint, this is a good story and I applaud you for writing it.
It gave me feels I thought I buried and memories I'd tried to forget. I don't like the way this story makes me feel. But damn, do I love that you wrote it, that SOMEONE wrote it. Thank you.
I think I needed to read this today.
title origin
in flanders feilds the poppies blow between the crosses,row on row, that markour places and in the sky a lark still singing bravely flys scarce heard amid the guns below.
we are the dead short days ago we lived felt dawn saw sunset glow loved and were lovedand now we lie in flanders fields
take up our quarrel with the foe the torch be yours to hold it high and if yea break daith wwith us who die we shall not sleep though poppies blow in flanders feilds.
-John Mcreae ww1 feild medic 1917
title origin
in flanders feilds the poppies blow between the crosses,row on row, that markour places and in the sky a lark still singing bravely flys scarce heard amid the guns below.
we are the dead short days ago we lived felt dawn saw sunset glow loved and were lovedand now we lie in flanders fields
take up our quarrel with the foe to you from failing hands we throw the torch be yours to hold it high and if yea break daith wwith us who die we shall not sleep though poppies blow in flanders feilds.
-John Mcreae ww1 feild medic 1917
title origin
in flanders feilds the poppies blow between the crosses,row on row, that markour places and in the sky a lark still singing bravely flys scarce heard amid the guns below.
we are the dead short days ago we lived felt dawn saw sunset glow loved and were lovedand now we lie in flanders fields
take up our quarrel with the foe to you from failing hands we throw the torch be yours to hold it high and if yea break daith wwith us who die we shall not sleep though poppies blow in flanders feilds.
-John Mcreae ww1 feild medic 1917
Beautiful. Simply so. Still, it was kinda predictable that rainbow would die. At least with all the clues. Kinda cliché, was expecting you to subvert it and make her survive, maimed or otherwise. But that would mean you'd have to write the rescue scene, though.
No matter, it was still a beautifully written story with feels aplenty, worth of my like. I would give you a fave, but I can't risk such a dose of feels every time I open them.
But you did get the follow!
This literally had me in tears by the end
I now truly understand what war is like. And... All I can say is, thank you, veterans. Thank you for fighting for you country, and for defending people's rights. I could never, ever be as brave as you guys. You risk life and limb fighting for your cause. You see and do unspeakable things that nobody should have to see or do, all in the name of your country. You endure, while other brave men and women die. You are strong. Thank you for being so brave.