This story is a sequel to My Little Pony: The Element of Time
CAUTION: STORY IS CURRENTLY UNDER EDITING. PLEASE DO NOT RATE UNTIL STORY IS COMPLETE. COMMENTS MADE BY READERS OFFERING SUGGESTIONS AND IDEAS IS GLADLY APPRECIATED. IN THE MEANTIME, TO BETTER UNDERSTAND THIS STORY (AND ITS TRILOGY) PLEASE READ THE FIRST STORY OF THE TRILOGY.
Xenxus' raid on Equestria was by far the costliest, leaving a trail of fire and destruction. However, a previous enemy returns to recapture what was once under his control, but this time it will be a power that will change the way Twilight will view such things. Even if that means unleashing a deep power within her. With the assistance of another guardian, another ally comes to aid only this one may hold the key into defeating this enemy. Join Twilight as they hurry to defeat this familar foe before time repeats itself.
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CREDITS:
Show and Characters by Hasbro/DHX/Lauren Faust
Story Writer, OC's, Ideas, & Locations: Thunderwing250 (Me, of course)
Story Editor: COMING SOON
Story Proofreader: COMING SOON
Character Design (Khaoios): Foreshadow
Vector Drawing and Digital Painting (Cover Art): COMING SOON
Wouldn't it just make a lot more sense to not post it at all until editing is finished?
6253928 True, yet wat I was thinking is post what I have. Then ask readers if something should be altered or changed so I can make notes of it then after a week or so, edit the entire thing. Basically, set up a rough draft, have folks look into it then provide a feedback on what could be changed, then edit and post final. Tends to help me a lot, :D.