Mustic is many things; a father, a husband, a farmer and a Changeling. To do their part in helping the Changeling race find acceptance in pony society, he and his wife move into a small farm on the edge of Ponyville to raise their newborn child there. Will they be accepted by the ponies’ population? Or will they be pushed over because they are different?
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Editors: Izanagi and Blueswat
Artist: Ladykochou
Each Chapter come with a picture made by her.
Chapters (2)
i like it and Silver Fang please make more chapters for this story
I see you use Quarian tongue to add the story....I approve.like and will continue reading this.
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I will! The next two chapter are already planned.
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Can you find what else was inspired by ME in this chapter?
6323566 ok
this should be fun
It's really good Silver Fang!
Are you sure the art is yours?
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If you mean the cover art then no. If you're talking about the one in the chapters then yes. Like I said I'm commissioning Ladykochou to obtain those picture for this story.
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Magic? I don't know why the total is 0
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Thank you spiritwolf13
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Of course.
6324513 Aren't the characters the same as the cover tho? Can you do that?
An interesting concept, I must admit, with a take on changelings we sadly don't see often on this site or in changeling fanfiction in general. I'll be keeping my eye on it to see where it goes.
And also, ha ha, if that isn't the changeling picture I had commissioned some time back. I'm glad someone finally chose to make use of it for a story.
I like this one. Another!
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It was you! *get on knee* Thank you to have provided us such a masterpiece.
oh do you want me to take down the cover picture since it yours?
6324916 Well, I had the commission done by mr-tiaa on Deviantart.com. I don't really mind myself, although ideally I would've preferred if you asked me first, but just in case, it probably wouldn't hurt just to run it over with mr-tiaa.
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I would have asked if I knew who draw it or for who it was ^^ I found this pic quite a bit of time ago. Sorry. I'll go ask him.
infltrating?
A moment for the dead Queen's sacrifice....
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Now that that's over is it bad for her soul to attach itself to every new subject?
6324965 It's interesting sure.
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*facepalm* I just realized you were the author of the Fanfic with the Japanese Changeling (which I adore!)
Liking the premise. I will continue to observe. Tracking for now.
Me like and this is good so far
Nice....please continue
Wow For Something I Worked On To Be So Popular.... Thank You People
I'm trying to give you a thumbs up with the hope it will inspire you to post an update. But looks like I already did...
Come on... update!
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Chapter almost done
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YEAH!!
LOL!!
6472610 YOU LIE!!!!
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Nope, It is almost done just did not have the time to finish what left
6534750 I UNDERSTAND!
i want more backstory on the changeling culture etc.
hi hi
Are we getting an unreliable narrator here? How is it that "their precious Sun leader," "almost annihilated a complete species," when Celestia was incapacitated almost immediately after Chrysalis revealed herself?
>Kyoto
So... Changelings are Japanese?
neat
6552827 I do use Japanese culture as a base for the Changeling society. Heh I'm happy someone got the reference.
6552824 Let's say you invade a country but it fail. Will you blame soldier number 65 because he killed one of your best general leading to you losing your attack or will you blame the ruler of said country. At that time Cadance and Shining Armor were not the ruler of another country and were only resources that Celestia could use. Blame the leader, not the soldier.
proofread prior to posting, please.
6552881 I'm confused ^^ The story have been proofread. Would you mind telling me what wrong?
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Well, I was hoping to get some insight into the point of view of the narrator, but since you asked, I can tell you that I would not think it is an either-or situation like that. It may be true that initiating a war of aggression is "the supreme international crime differing only from other war crimes in that it contains within itself the accumulated evil of the whole." (Robert H. Jackson)
But I would suggest that if Equestria does not have a Chain of Command, and/or Line of Succession for situations where their commander is incapacitated, killed, or otherwise unable to lead; then each fractured segment of the official hierarchy is responsible for its own decisions. If Equestria does have a Chain of Command, and/or Line of succession, (like in the US, with its Vice President, Speaker of the House, President pro tempore of the Senate, Secretary of State, Secretary of the Treasury, etc. etc.) then it is the individual who is actually in charge at the time that shoulders the greatest responsibility for the actions of themselves and, to a point, the actions of their subordinates.
Also, when I look throughout history, I do not generally see chief executives receiving credit or blame for campaigns where they did not take a commanding role. It was Admiral Isoroku Yamamoto, not Emperor Hirohito, who is generally viewed as responsible at the Battle of Midway; and rather than any Cartheginian Suffete or the Hundred and Four, it was Hannibal Barca who was generally credited during the Second Punic War.
6553140 You seem to know a lot more than me on the subject. I stand corrected. You have all my respect for showing the wrong in my point of view.
That was very well written and I loved the story!!! Great job once again Silver Fang. Waiting patiently(impatiently) for the next chapter.
AW! But a little back-story doesn't hurt, after all, if that story was real...why are they working on the farm right now?
6323569 You mean that the whole Idea of the changeling language being a 'song' like the Rachni?
6553455 We have a winner.
6553402 Glad you liked the backstory and it will be explained later why
6553283 <3
6553489 Mkay.
Hey man, great story, I like the concept and I would like to know more about the changeling culture. You just need to fix some mistakes here and there. For instance, in this chapter you referred the male foal as 'filly', which is a term used for a female foal. There were also a few minor mistakes but overall not as bad as my first story. Keep up the good work
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Haha thank. I intend to write more about their culture using the imperial Japanese as it base. I'll probably add some western culture in the mix. ^.^ Inbred royal family are so fun to write about
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keelah se'lai
6553602 By the homeworld we wish to see one day. - Tali translation of Mass Effect 3.
Love it!