What happens when an angry, drunk Twilight Sparkle creates a portal to an alternate Equestria? Well bad things really, and a very awkward conversation ensues.
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I've had my own version of this sitting on a notepad text for a long time now. I've got about a full chapter done, but I never feel motivation to try anymore lately.
Therefore, I had to read this. Truthfully it is very minimalist, nothing much happens. It's not overly offensive though, so there is that. Sequel might be good to show actual mane6 interaction with the different Twilights.
6249344 eh, it was a concept. And to tell the truth I just wanted to get the idea out there, I hope you enjoyed it. I personally don't think I'm qualified to write this kind of story, but if I'm lucky someone more talented will take up the reins and write something wonderful. XD
Absolutely beautiful idea. Too bad their actual collaboration didn't work out. That would've been amazing.
6249354 I suddenly feel the need to see Princess Twilight meet FiW Celestia. It will probably be a pretty funny time.
That... seems a lot like what Twilight from MAS might do. It seemed more off for the FiW one. Plus the FiW one would have been a TON more confused after a talk with MAS Fluttershy. MAS Shy is *SO* different from Cult Leader Fluttershy it is not funny.
Which Voice should I give her? Mentally Advanced or FiW?
Eyup! That answers that question.
Hahaha...
Nothing wrong with that.
Goddamn it.
Goddamn it!
You've created Essence of FiW into a single paragraph. Bravo.
No, NO! Where's my brain bleach?
Hubris, and pretty much the direction Hasbro is going in.
How do you do this so well?
Oh. I thought they already knew each other.
Good idea.
100% Project Horizons approved.
Maybe if you told her about what you learned about friendship instead of what three fillies she's never heard of she wouldn't flip out on you.
Thank. You.
Whined. Perfect ending.
I was skeptical by how short this was, but you did damn well with it. Great job.
6263755 wow, thank you very much. XD
I was very much worried that people wouldn't like it, or that I'd messed up seriously. I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much.
6260911 lol, when I read your comment for some reason I thought that MAS meant , Ministry of Arcane Sciences... I've read to much Fallout Equestria. I'm glad to hear that I was at least half way correct.
6263853 Too much Fallout Equestria? Are you suggesting such a condition exists?
Wow. This is a good start to a fic I really wanted to see someone write for a long-
....Wait...
*reads COMPLETE tag*
Nooo!!! Please let that be a mistake! I really wanted Sweetie Bot to meet Thrackerzod!
6278627 you know with the decent reception that this has gotten I might just do a sequel, or a longer story at some point. Right now I have my plate busy, but that won't be true forever. I am really glad that you liked it though. XD
Hay, I had an idea for a crossover, but I was wondering if I can use the whole, MA Twilight tries to still another versions life idea. If not, don't worry I could just think of something else .
6278866 this would maybe fit drunk twilight
This is true art👌👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
yada yada, generic "THIS NEEDS TO BE A FULL STORY" comment, yada yada
I wonder how MAS Twilight will process the "We're not biologically related" tid bit.
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after everything MAS celestia and luna put her through, its probably a minor annoyance lol
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Please do.