Pirates come in many forms, some seek fame, some adventure, some to live as they please and others soully for the lust of gold. From five worlds five vary different pirates are brought to equestria. But they all have two things in common. They are pirates and the fate of the world rests on them.
"Names Edward Kenway, will you sign on lads?"
"I'm Monkey D.Luffy. I'm king of the Pirates!"
"I am Don Karnage! The most feared air pirate to ever fly the skies!"
"When you get to the ground tell them Naithan Zackery sent you!"
"Why I'm Captain Jack Sparrow. I'm sure you heard of me."
Equestria is in trouble....
And these five are its only hope. Join them as they set sail to rescue the princess of equestria from a evil villain bent on destroying the world...
Edited by iliekstuff
I feel like when I get to the Edward Kenny parts all I'm going to think is "gentle push gentle push".
6313513 thanks and I'm looking for a editor as well.
Who's Naithan Zackery?
i like this
6313612 the main character in the Crimson Skies video games.
Do I like this story? Yes I do.
6313662 Thanks, was wondering about that and since you're already looking to the editor, I can not say anything there.
Of the pirates that I know of, you've done a very good job of writing them! Though Luffy MIGHT be a touch more reserved than in the show but that is a very narrow margin on the "might". None the less, GOOD start! Looking forward to more!
I'd offer to help with the editing but I'd probably make things worse
6314325 Luffy just woke up from nearly droning, and is hungry. He gets more silly, also he gets serious when friends or innocents are in danger.
6313525 Oh don't think it is your writing that will make me think of gentle push, StephenPlays made me think of gentle push every time I play an ass creed game.
Awesome!
6316249 thanks love the name by the way Dragon ball villain and the great conquering Buda combined clever.
6316262 Thanks Yours is Awesome to.
6316276 thanks if you like gundam look at my Zeon story. Also I have a Ghostbusters story I'm writing with a co writer, who has three stories on his page that we work on together.
Like I said before, an awesome start, looks interesting, needs some editing.
Awesome job on this, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Nice story is there going to be more
...whut........
6316747 Yes just need editor.
more plz
6359695 have it no editor.
That's copypaste all over, and should be changed up a bit but eh, still a good chapter.
Trixie as Captain... I approve of this. like, full on
hehehe. Ooooh Jacky boy, will you ever get your rum?
Nice chapter, and I hope this gets edited soon, might be a better read then.
Awesome job, and keep it up.
6365105 true but then again it's Jack and Luffy...
6365145 Nice
6365145 Eh, I just feel like something else would be said, but whateves.
God show.
At lest there is rum.
6366542 Not much .
NICE!
But please do edit. There are spelling errors all over and they are enough to be annoying. Not deal breaking, I have a strong stomach, but annoying. If you want I'll point them out.
6382553 yeah that is my editing skills.
more plz
Well... You got me, MORE!!!
before I read this I only have one thing to say.
Why is the Rum always gone?
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More is coming I'm fighting writers block but more is coming.
While you wait please check my other stories.
Great chapter
7693793 yeah original plan was a fight but the whole friendship idea came in last minute
Great to see this story isn't dead. It has such a fun premise.
more
7697844 don't worry there is more to come
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Well this is an adventure
7693793 thanks
Why is it that everyone spells "Definitely" as "Defiantly"? Its two different words with different bloody meanings! And yet everybody seems to confuse them!
Defiantly - is an adverb that is linked to the noun defiance which is defined as "bold disobedience." It defies, or openly goes against an order or rule.
Definitely - without doubt (used for emphasis).
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Auto correct
Classic jack!
He may be drunk and a fool, but he's one of the best Pirates in the seven seas and one of the nine pirate lords. All he ever needs to save the day is rum, his compass, his sword, treasure with mystical properties, a crew, and most important: his hat. So tease him a little less, but only a little.
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You have to remember Jack is from 1750s, Nathan is from 1940s and Don is from 1940s or 1950s in his world. The two air pirates the most advanced and well educated pirates on the ship.
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That's cause no one knows how to spell them and autocorrect only gives one of them as the fix.
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I don't realy know who any of the pirates are except jack an kennway, but yer right.
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Luffy is from one piece a shoin jump anime and manga and is actually the strongest of them
Nathan is the mane character in crimson skies games.
Don Carnage is from tailspin a Disney cartoon
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Ah, thanks.