You are what you eat? I say you are as what you dress up as! And let's get one thing straight. I was a normal person before all of this magic shit, but now... I’m Malus and this world is just waiting for the taking.
Wasn't he just dressing up in a costume at the beginning?
So far not bad, there is some minor agreement issues and word confusion, but they aren't bad enough to make it unintelligible. The plot is decently thought out and has some room to expand.
I feel sorry for Celestia.
Her sister is in pain AND she's gonna get her ass kicked.
what hes telling luna sounds similar to the opening to Metro 2033 (book)
I keep imagining malus as reaper. Please don't hate, just been playing the overwatch free weekend thing.
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Thanks :P
*darth vader voice* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
ON THE BEST MOMENT!!! :,(
7736196 I don't go around hating.
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7736660 Umm..., Grave Walker? sir? Did you forget about the pistols Malus has?
*Cough* Umm what just happened ?
Wasn't he just dressing up in a costume at the beginning?
So far not bad, there is some minor agreement issues and word confusion, but they aren't bad enough to make it unintelligible. The plot is decently thought out and has some room to expand.
7738799 Really?
7736436 Do you want to read the next chapter? It seems that you love my writing.
7736191 YAY! Someone noticed!
7736233 Your welcome. Would you like another?
7743945 Yessssssssss........ GIMME ALL OF IT........
7743947 your welcome, also you have no idea how hard it was to find those books in English, the cheapest was 50 bucks.
7738256 No. I didn't. Malus has had no need to use them... Yet.
7743951 Really? Are you sure?
7743953 I love both the books and the games. Though I've only play Metro: Last Light.
7743955 yasssssssssss..... (plis:3)
7743958 Hmmmm.... I think such a loyal servant of deserves something. Well...
HERE YA GO!
LINK!?!
7743964 *grabs andnoms the cookie* thanks, cookie is delicious! GIMME MOAR >:3
7743971 Fine. I'll post a new chapter.
7743974 *blows up with joy* YAHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!*realizes he's not on earth anymore*well shit, that sucks...
7741049 Agreed, context is needed here.
so... split personalities from different realities? One from our modern world and one from the Fallout franchise? ok...
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Honestly, I have no idea of what I was doing when I wrote this garbage...