You are what you eat? I say you are as what you dress up as! And let's get one thing straight. I was a normal person before all of this magic shit, but now... I’m Malus and this world is just waiting for the taking.
I liked the guy's past and it seems that he's becoming a kinder version of Darth Vulcan. In other news, I'm happy that he acknowledges how messed up it is when his body tries to act based on the personality of the disguise he chose and I'm amused that the article depicting Malus made a jab about RD and Rarity being gay. Wonder how Rarity will react when everybody in Ponyville read the report.
6693237 Well now I feel bad for them. The reporters are gonna follow them everywhere like the paparazzi. Jk, I want to see Malus thwart Celestia's plans to capture him.
6693258 Their ponies and he's not. What else can you expect from them?
Editor other than that, waiting for more!
Also, most of those down votes are probably just because this story is a displaced. IF we're lucky, five will because they didn't like the story so far. Liked how he was using the spells he knew in non-standard ways. FAR to many of these stories have they people relying on what their costumes knew and leave it at that. PLEASE, round out this guys repertoire!!!!!
6694426 Well the thing is that he didn't go as anything from any movie, game, ect. So he became a mixture of things. The two mysterious black magic book for example are what gave him those power in the first place and those are not in the game. So he got his powers from the two "magic books", not what he dressed up as. Just thought I'll point that out because I'm trying to aim for making unique displaced stories.
Not like those overpowered Mary Sue wannabes. No offence to those that make those, but I'm just trying to make my stories have different flow if you get what I mean. Like my Prepare For Titanfall story having no ponies showing in until latter chapters and in this story, Malus has magicka limits and call nearly die from a stab wound like any normal human being.
6693539 Maybe something more menacing or shocking? Who knows? The chapters will unfold their magnificence of the story of Malus to us mortals some time in the future.
6694426 On an unrelated note if you stick Malus in google translator and put it through latin if you forget to capitalize it google translate will tell you it means apple, but translates to bad if you remember to capitalize it.
6709247 I highly doubt that a signal parented family with two kids could afford something that is bulletproof. Hell, a full body suit of Kevlar comes around to 4-2 thousand in U.S.A dollar. And that stuff people sell is not even close to what the military has. Even though it's cheaper to buy the materials and stuff, but you need a full decked out lab just to make it as good. And even if he had his robes bulletproof, he still can die just from a bullet impact that can break bones or rupture internal organs or both. People have known to die not just from a bullet, but from the force of the bullet. So making his Halloween costume of blacked dyed Kevlar or something bulletproof is really unrealistic. Even though this is a pony fanfic, it is really unrealistic to have something that is worth in the thousands for a character the lives with his family and is in his teens. Your point sir, is....
Here is a thought. In skyrim there are three flesh spell oak-flesh, stone-flesh, and ebony-flesh. Or was it skin...meh. anyway each one turn the body into that particular element. You could have him fake being stone like
They be like "Stone him!" And you be like "stone-flesh" Friendship cannon ex machina is confused is it suppose turn this stone statue into stone?
6897435 Use the Elements of Harmony! The wha? The Elements! Hmmm.... no clue... Friendship beam? Uhhh..... *sigh* Orbital Friendship Cannon? OHHHHHHH.... okay :D
"What the hell was with the free the innocent and eradicate the evil shit. I didn't even mean to say that! And why of all people did I quote Light Yagami?"
it was then that i knew i had fucked up, for laughter stole my precious air
"What the hell was with the free the innocent and eradicate the evil shit. I didn't even mean to say that! And why of all people did I quote Light Yagami?" I groaned angrily as I walked through the woods, turning another tree into small, yet smoldering ash size chunks with another lightning bolt.
I just really hate the whole character’s personality I don’t wish they weren’t evil I just wish the GUY was in control instead of using the bullshit excuse that he is being controlled.
9585696 I gave a warning in the description about how bad of a story this is. And plus all the obviously edgy bad fanfic vibes from just glancing at this story. You reading this is at your own stupid closure. And no, I'm not touching up or improving this garbage. It is an example of my first time writing and how far I've come from being such... Cringe!
I liked the guy's past and it seems that he's becoming a kinder version of Darth Vulcan. In other news, I'm happy that he acknowledges how messed up it is when his body tries to act based on the personality of the disguise he chose and I'm amused that the article depicting Malus made a jab about RD and Rarity being gay. Wonder how Rarity will react when everybody in Ponyville read the report.
This story gets better and better.
That really isn't surprising anymore considering most fics ship the Elements with each other.
6693215 Well when Rarity basically screamed in Ponyville, it was confirmed. Also this is the pony new paper after all...
hmmm looking goo, some typos but still good
Dang yellow journalist ponies slandering his good name.
6693237 Well now I feel bad for them. The reporters are gonna follow them everywhere like the paparazzi. Jk, I want to see Malus thwart Celestia's plans to capture him.
6693306 Duly noted friend.
6693258 Their ponies and he's not. What else can you expect from them?
Editor other than that, waiting for more!
Also, most of those down votes are probably just because this story is a displaced. IF we're lucky, five will because they didn't like the story so far. Liked how he was using the spells he knew in non-standard ways. FAR to many of these stories have they people relying on what their costumes knew and leave it at that. PLEASE, round out this guys repertoire!!!!!
6694251 Glad someone found that amusing.
6694426 Well the thing is that he didn't go as anything from any movie, game, ect. So he became a mixture of things. The two mysterious black magic book for example are what gave him those power in the first place and those are not in the game. So he got his powers from the two "magic books", not what he dressed up as. Just thought I'll point that out because I'm trying to aim for making unique displaced stories.
Not like those overpowered Mary Sue wannabes. No offence to those that make those, but I'm just trying to make my stories have different flow if you get what I mean. Like my Prepare For Titanfall story having no ponies showing in until latter chapters and in this story, Malus has magicka limits and call nearly die from a stab wound like any normal human being.
6693539 Maybe something more menacing or shocking? Who knows? The chapters will unfold their magnificence of the story of Malus to us mortals some time in the future.
6694426 On an unrelated note if you stick Malus in google translator and put it through latin if you forget to capitalize it google translate will tell you it means apple, but translates to bad if you remember to capitalize it.
6700316 Okay... Didn't really understand that but okay.
6702083 Indeed.
6709247 I highly doubt that a signal parented family with two kids could afford something that is bulletproof. Hell, a full body suit of Kevlar comes around to 4-2 thousand in U.S.A dollar. And that stuff people sell is not even close to what the military has. Even though it's cheaper to buy the materials and stuff, but you need a full decked out lab just to make it as good. And even if he had his robes bulletproof, he still can die just from a bullet impact that can break bones or rupture internal organs or both. People have known to die not just from a bullet, but from the force of the bullet. So making his Halloween costume of blacked dyed Kevlar or something bulletproof is really unrealistic. Even though this is a pony fanfic, it is really unrealistic to have something that is worth in the thousands for a character the lives with his family and is in his teens. Your point sir, is....
invalid!
6709432 Agreed.
6713109 how his robes where and what he may later encounter that the robe saves him from shows a mothers love knows no bounds.
6736788 Of course. Star wars is the best.
6741509 True that.
Anti-heroes, anti-heroes everywhere...
Btw, is this still alive?
6749419 Yes. Just been busy as hell and unable to write. Anti-hero? No way!
6750780 ...
We greatly enjoyed reading this and desire more chapters
6766171 Trying my best. I been having writer's block a lot lately.
This is some bucked up Shit
I LOVEE IT *squee*
Here is a thought. In skyrim there are three flesh spell oak-flesh, stone-flesh, and ebony-flesh. Or was it skin...meh. anyway each one turn the body into that particular element. You could have him fake being stone like
They be like "Stone him!"
And you be like "stone-flesh"
Friendship cannon ex machina is confused is it suppose turn this stone statue into stone?
6897435
*Elements of Harmony grabs the weed*
6897435
Use the Elements of Harmony!
The wha?
The Elements!
Hmmm.... no clue...
Friendship beam?
Uhhh.....
*sigh* Orbital Friendship Cannon?
OHHHHHHH.... okay :D
"What the hell was with the free the innocent and eradicate the evil shit. I didn't even mean to say that! And why of all people did I quote Light Yagami?"
it was then that i knew i had fucked up, for laughter stole my precious air
That line made my day!
7651953 hopefully they are then this will be much easier.
This whole persona taking over stuff is irritating.
8101692 well It did kinda screw over his relations with the ponies
6754279 Ya don't say?
Death note is awesome
I just really hate the whole character’s personality I don’t wish they weren’t evil I just wish the GUY was in control instead of using the bullshit excuse that he is being controlled.
9585696
I gave a warning in the description about how bad of a story this is. And plus all the obviously edgy bad fanfic vibes from just glancing at this story. You reading this is at your own stupid closure. And no, I'm not touching up or improving this garbage. It is an example of my first time writing and how far I've come from being such... Cringe!