10/10

This story feels interesting, though Malus can be quite an asshole. Spike seems to have brazen balls when he confronted Malus about his actions prior to Malus revealing that he could escape...then again it might have been frustration/heartbroken anger at the fact that he found out that Rarity had a one night stand with RD. Still, I hope to see more of this story as he seems to be interested in taking the path of Light Yagami. Also, I wonder how Rarity will react to the fact that Spike knocked her out and her reaction, along with RD's, when she finds out that Spike overheard her little confession?

And here I was thinking we were done with this little fad.

6670109 ?

6669908 Thanks

6669957 All in the next chapter and throughout the story. Also... Death Note fan?

6670138 A bit, I loved the L arc and the final arc wasn't as strong as when L was alive, but overall it was a great anime/manga. Hope to see the next chapter soon.

6670145 Agreed. If you don't mind me asking, but what do you like/dislike about the story?

6669908 What made it 10/10?

6670148 Well, one thing I like is that the guy, while having evil powers, doesn't want to randomly kill people and, if his motivations are true rather than delusions, strives to make the world better by acting like Light rather than be an omnicidal asshole like other evil Displaced. The one thing I dislike, however, is that the guy got really absorbed into his character of Malus, as nearly every Displaced that comes disguised as a bad guy tends to forget about morality and immediately try to destroy/conquer the ponies out of dislike for the show or wanting to be in character with the villain disguise. It certainly doesn't help his point when he starts insulting everybody from RD's hypocrisy and "gayness" and mocking Rarity for experimenting with RD. I don't mind if his disguise makes him more temperamental, but I don't want him to become a deuce with an overinflated ego. Still, this story seems to be have potential. If I happened to offend you, then I apologize, but know that I like the story so far and hope that the next chapter comes soon.

6670193 Well I'll tell you that he will not be a everyday displaced or psychopathic killer. A lot of those answer will have some light showed in the next chapter and more to come. And don't worry about his ego, he won't become a all hail me the o mighty and powerful kind of guy. That is all can say for now... But thanks for your input! And no, you did not hurt my feelings, I like to hear everybody's opinions. Even if their being a jerk or not, criticism helps me make this story better. I mean, I can't do it alone you know.

i like it.
it has some flaws but i am pretty sure you'l improve along the way.

I will see where this goes.

Pretty good so far. Finally, I've found a fic where somebody does something about Rainbow and her fucking ego.

6670607 Thank you! I've been waiting for an author to do that too! So I did it myself.

EDITOR! Other than that, MOAR darn it MOAR!

6670607 6670617 There HAVE been authors that have taken Rainbow to task for her over inflated ego but it's quick and forgotten in the story and it's also written so that she just blows it off as someone that just doesn't like just how "awesome" she is.

6670809 What do you mean by MC?

6671762 I see.

6672781 Thanks for the input. If you don't mind me asking, what do you think about Malus? Good and bad are appreciated very much. Also, do you see anything else or anything that is bugging you to ask any other questions?
(As you can see I am a bit board and would like to talk to someone.)

6670644 If it helps, I've just written over two thousand words under 24 hours for the next chapter. But I'll do my best to update chapters.

Good so far, few spelling errors here and there, but I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. seemed to be a bit of a quick jump from the negotiating with spike to "I have a Evil name now, and I'm leaving to go sulk in the Everfree forest and take over the world". But I'm just being nit-picky.

humans: only the stars can judge us and limit our strength no?
humans sint superiores!!!!!!!!!!!

Good story.

6674147 Thanks

my jaw is on the floor right now

6674472 A lot of shit happens in that chapter.

6674477 it's the perfact ammount to not be too much

6674483 Thanks.

I go by many titles, Master of Destruction, Master of Restoration, Dragon Slayer, Reaper of Soul, and so on. But you may call me by my most dreaded and respected name, Malus.

Clever with the latin.

6682045 Thank you.

6673808 Fuck ponies, we have humanity! Who needs alicorn ponies?

6741509 THE ALICORNS ARE TAKING THE MOON AND SUN HOSTAGE! THATS WHY THEY RAISE THE SUN AND MOON!!!! ILUMINATI! CONFIRMED

Nice duel personality disorder. Like it so far

P.S. How many references do you see?

Over 9000 !!!!!!

7738799 my reference-counter is off the charts

I think I know who wrote this story an anti-brony yes he does have a few points but your character is an ass and is just plain evil. The ponies are NOT corrupt!

really? his name is literally "bad"?

8101686
Look at the season 8 they are very corrupted and have been for years.

This motherfucker is promising the same shit as Jesus.

8101686
you're throwing out some REALLY strong accusations there. This is obviously not a hatefic at all. This is an alternate look at equestria from the perspective of an outsider with a different viewpoint and different philosophy from the ponies.

(0_0) . . . . . Woooow.