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Sombra is dead, everypony is happy. Everypony except Fluttershy that is. For she has rather mixed feelings about her father's demise. She knew he was a tyrant, Tartarus after her mother died he wasn't even nice to her anymore. But he was still her father. How is she supposed to feel? And can she tell her friends that she inherited her father's dark magic?
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Short and to the point in the first chapter, so far I'm finding no faults in this, it's well executed. I like this, I really do, and I can't wait to see this story get fleshed out.
Awesome so far
This story is awesome! Good job dude, I think it's even better than mine. Which is probably true considering I don't write much and my chapters are really short. Keep it up!
6295510 Thanks a ton. I still would recommend everyone reading your story. It's short but good.
Looks promising. Besides, I love the theme of truth vs. rumours.
Goddamit Rainbow Dash! Quit making adorable kitty cats cry!
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As you can clearly see, she's left a trail of crying cats in her wake...
Is this cat the feared monster mentioned in the previous chapter? Or is it Angel?
i like it and i think you should Shy's true nature in the next chapter or when ever you want to
6477479 Maybe to one pony.
6477481 ok
Reveal 'Fluttershy's true nature'? It sounds like history was rewritten by the victors, like has always happened. But, that's probably just me.
are you going to update anytime?
sorry if this annoyed you
Please update, I just started reading this today and it's already over.
And it was just getting good, please update soon.
come on i want to see the next part of the story
UPDATE IT'S TO GOOD. X_X
When are you going to update this?
When will you update this? Please update it soon
6477481 hey I was wondering when will you update this I've read the 3 chapters about 50 times please update soon.
I still believe that this will continue, so i'll just click this button and track it. Update when it best suits you. Or don't. I won't judge.
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