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Regina Wright


Waterworn doesn't mean squat when you're an eternal flame, baby!

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Pinkie and Noteworthy learn some moves as they dance around each other, sharing just about everything but love.


Rated T for tender somethings under the summer sun.

Written for romantic fluff practice without the angst and from the prompt of the week from the group Hazardous Writing Materials and Challenges .

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Comments ( 7 )

D'aw!:twilightsmile: This was adawable.

(Try using an em-dash instead of the hyphen for the cut-off thingies, though. You can type it by holding alt and then type 0151)

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Woo, thanks for reading! I remembered your lessons on fluff, Hap!

(And I will make the changes:pinkiehappy:).

Very cute lol nice job though. You earned a follow :D

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Thanks! I hope you enjoy following me.

Pacing's kinda off, but other than that I'll give it a meh. Not bad, but not good either.

Noteworthy was heavy, straddling her waist as he tried to yank his horn from the little hole it made through the dusty wooden floor. With her hooves on his chest, two tugs got him free and he moaned, blinking the saw dust from his eyes. She groaned, dragging her right hoof to push the furry furnace off. The stallion slid to the patio floor like a puddle going down a sewer drain, splashing his complaints on the way down.

But I thought noteworthy is an earth pony

I would say this was a pretty cute short story and a very rare shipping between Pinkie Pie and noteworthy and basically learning how to dance and having a little moment this was pretty nice keep up the good work

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