Sequel to Pattycakes. You didn't really think Rainbow's mental state would degrade that easily, did you? Find out the truth, filled with insanity, details, and copyrighted drinks. On a side note, BUY GUMMYADE, NOW WITH 20% MORE AWESOMENESS!!! Pic from Newgrounds.
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DEFINITELY inb4featured.
Not really that good of a sequel. Also, no gore, so might as well remove that part of the message.
I suppose I'll be a sport and vote anyway, see where you planning to take this. Fluttershy was just mentally unstable, Rainbow was a straight up murderer and demolition mare.
Vote's for Fluttershy.
Not really the type of continuation that Pegacorn would have in mind, but I found it entertaining nonetheless
If you check my stories out, I've recently written a humanized remake of Pattycakes and I have nearly finished it.
If Pattycakes was the creepiest story you've ever read, I wonder about your priorities. Not bad for a revenge story, at least. The plan was interesting, and it was carried out okay. Neither like nor dislike.
Its.... okay in my book. Not much of a gore fan though but a fan of Pattycakes. I think Angel should side with Fluttershy.
Thank you for your opinions! The gore rating is there because I'm pretty sure the implied horrific death of Fluttershy counts as gore. Also, there was no insanity tag, so I went with the next best thing.
I'll decide who Angel sides with by next week.
I think Angel should side with Rainbow Dash. Fluttershy was mentally unstable and forced her to do things she didn't want to do.
Depending on what he will do if he sides with dash he cant do much but if he sides with flutters he'll probably kill dash so make it both (give two endings).
643560 HMMMMMMMM....... I'll think about it.
Rainowdash never loses!!
both more fun expose them both for it
keep it up
644093 in this sequel what happened to scootaloo?
740837 WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT. Kidding, she'll pop up at some point. (Hint: Apple Bloom ans Sweetie Belle apprenticed under other killers.
, respectively.)
Rainbow Dash must win this, all the other Pattycake fanfics and spin offs have her loose. Its time for some Justice!
Fluttershy. She just wanted a baby it's not like she was going to KILL dash....
DEFINATELY FLUTTERSHY!!!! she never did any physical harm to rainbow dash, she just wanted to experience what motherhood would be like.
Wow, amazing. love this fic, so much better.
ALSO, DASH.
UPDATE: There will no longer be an Angel storyline. I've come with something much worse...
Rainbow dash rainbow dash rainbow dash rainbow dash
Pros: good grammar and spelling.
Cons: Too quick, OoC, how could Dash turn a shed into surveillance centre? A lot of telling instead of showing, uninteresting style and poor execution. This needs a great deal of brushing up.
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The funny thing about this is that those cons appear in %90 of the horror stories on this site. I just happened to give a shit about grammar. Thx for teh review tho
3968645 That doesn't make it okay. Maybe your story would stand out if it were less like the other 90%, hmm?
I think I want Angel bunny should side with Fluttershy I read Pattycakes and Fluttershy wasn't evil just desperate for a child of her own. At the end of pattycakes one Fluttershy made it clear that after a week she would let Rainbow Dash go with no hard feelings
interesting ngl :/