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Kelvin Shadewing


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Derpy Hooves decides she wants to write fanfiction, and asks Twilight to be her pre reader.

This is something I made out of complete boredom. I know it's terrible. I'm just so bored that I felt like writing something that was bad on purpose.

Rated teen for Derpy's suggestive typo, just in case.

Enjoy!... or don't.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 19 )

"Quake with Doom" - you were perhaps thinking of certain video games when you capitalized these? :derpytongue2:

I'm with Twilight, what the buck did I just read?:twilightoops:

Like Twilight said, that was definitely something. Is it a good or bad sign that I was able to understand the majority of what she was trying to say? :derpytongue2:

I hope Celestia is not in a bad mood, or the moon might have a new inhabitant. :trollestia:

Epic with epicness
:derpytongue2:

MY LITTLE PONY: FULL PONY CONSEQUENCES

639902 :eeyup:

640034 I thought that title might be overdoing it, so I went with the other instead. ^^ Should have expected somepony to bring it up.

I.....I think I love this.

Poor Derpy tries so hard... :derpyderp1:

Stylistic Suck: Mastered by Derpy Hooves. :derpytongue2:

I almost feel sorry I chuckled at this... :pinkiehappy:

:facehoof: Oh Derpy... Weall, at least she tried.:derpytongue2:

:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:
So beautiful! someone get me a tissue...
waitaminuteDerpybrokethe4thwall

Next up: MY LITTLE PONY: REPERCUSSIONS OF HARMONY

Dear Princess Celestia,
:derpyderp2: I think that explains it.
Your Faithful Student,
Twilight Sparkle

Ship happens. I C WAT U DID THAR

I hated Derpy's story. I loved the story around it. You got a thumbs up for the one liner at the end of chapter two. That was the tie breaker.

Hahahaha Luna was So happy

Well um... :twilightoops: it has... something..:twilightsheepish: keep on trying derpy!:yay: oh god I know it was derpy but.. oh cud, is this thing still on?:facehoof:

651649 Yay! I'm not the only one who noticed!

Meta End: Derpy Hooves looked over her work, deciding that, yes, this would do. Publish it anonymously, and nopony would even suspect that she was the one who wrote it. And if all went according to plan... well, the third installment would be more than fiction.

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