• Member Since 23rd May, 2014
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TheCrimsonDM


Artists sometimes spew creation like a fountain of colorful vomit. Other times we must work, and toil, and practice until our fingers paint our keyboard and our story red with our efforts.

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Everything was taken away from her, little by little, piece by piece, until there was nothing left. Seeing as the future holds nothing but pain for her, she's decided it was finally time to take one last trip to where it all began.




Special thanks to Arcelia for proof reading. XD

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Comments ( 11 )

*sniff* Such a great story!!! :raritydespair: Earned my favorite!

Wow. Though I find the romance coming out of left field. I would have actually liked to see them become friends first. Other than that, this was a good story. Have a like.:twilightsmile:

I am curious as to the contents of the letter that Trixie sent Twilight.:twilightsheepish:

VERY HEARTWARMING !!!! MORE PLEASE !!!!!

Good to see this up. Nice coverart by the way. :pinkiesmile:

6233002 Thanks, I usually draw my cover art myself. I kinda needed something quick for this, and found an exceptionally great base. XD

This was very wonderfully written, excellent story.

Rushed with grammar errors etc.
I'm a sucker for twixie though :pinkiehappy:

There's the butterfly's :raritystarry:! This was a beautiful story, You get a favorite my friend! :pinkiehappy:

6558254 Thank you for your comment. It's not my 'usual' style, even if I do tend to do a lot of darker themes. So I'm glad that you enjoyed it. XD

Rushed to be sure and Trixie's thoughts about rainbow were the same that ran through my head. Still though I'd love to read more with this. Seeing Trixie get over her depression would make for a wonderful story. Especially if she like relapsed and tried again at some point thanks to I dunno a panic attack or something. Sad things with good endings always make me smile.

But yeah. As is I'd say six or seven out of ten

Trixie looked over at the princess. Why is Twilight Sparkle being nice to me? Why did Rainbow Dash take me here? I just wanted this to end and now I’m here… why?

From experience, her help is not for you. It's usually for guilt and personal gain. Not saying that's always the case with twilight but it's usually the case with others

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