• Member Since 11th Jan, 2014
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Darksoma


I enjoy telling stories, about my characters, my universe, and my ideas. I want to see them all told as best as possible, but I don't claim to be a good writer. I'll try my best to get there, though..

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A normal walk in the rain, one day suddenly turns into a very odd one for a single brony named Liam King, as he finds his favorite pony stranded on the side of the road, confused and crying.


I got bored, so I made this. And yes, the Liam in this story is supposed to be me.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 16 )

That short description you had up sounded pretty psychotic, to say the least.:unsuresweetie:

I'm loving this so far! Very few details, but just enough to make it bearable and you included my favorite pony Pinkie Pie!

I applaud you good sir!

'Claps hands'

At least you're honest about the self-insert, I'll give that.

7110543 Eh, I might change it.
I've re-read it multiple times, and I can see why you say that.

7110805 I was very sceptical about this story being posted on here, and for good reason. Writing self-inserts feels wrong, but I decide to post it because my friends thought I should.

To be honest, I was expecting this story to get hate.

7110560 Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

7111624 No wait, I wasn't being sarcastic. You're being honest about the nature of the story and you've clearly realized that it's not the best layout. I can't speak for anyone else, but the amount of chumps here writing themselves into their fics (I'm looking at you displaced "authors") and try to deny/defend it really makes the honest writers here a breath of fresh air.

7111898 ah, okay. Still, I'm very surprised by the positive responses this story is getting.

New, different, I love it! Will there be more perhaps?

Was this inspired by 'My Little Dashie?'

I'm just curious, it is totally fine if this story was.

:twilightsmile:
:rainbowkiss:

7112933 I know it's an odd thing to say, but I've never read 'My Little Dashie'.

7112927 Yeah, there will be more. I'm working on the next chapter.

This looks pretty good story i looking forward to the next chapter goodluck

I don't if you stayed here until you figure it out.

Don't mind?

I explained, as she watched me.

Don't really need a comma.

Anyway, nice to see this updated again! Really enjoyed the first part and waiting to see how this unfolds!

7728191 Ah, thanks for the feedback. I'll fix up those problems as soon as I can.

And, thanks for sticking around. I haven't really been active, so it's nice to see someone who still cares.

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