This story is great!!! Tbh, I'm generally not a big fan of stories when it isn't explained how the human ends up in Equestria (or if something nonsensical happens, like he gets struck by lightning and teleported there, etc.) but this story's romance makes up for it. THIS BETTER BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
Part of me thinks this would be where we find out this was all in Dash's head after she went insane because Lero rejected her. I've seen Shutter Island one too many times.
"Lero rolled on his side, draping an arm across her. He’d been intending to turn the gesture into a hug, but before he could settle himself to tighten the embrace, Rainbow stirred in her sleep. Her forelegs moved, her hooves finding his hand, gathering it up and pulling it to her chest. Her mouth curled in a smile, and he heard her quietly whisper his name before the soft snores resumed.
He felt like his heart was going to melt in his chest. Her forehooves were gently holding his hand against her chest, their slightly uneven texture indicating that she probably trimmed them herself, and he could feel the slow, steady beat of her heart under his palm. He still had no idea why she’d come to care for him so much, but he was willing to accept the fact that, for whatever reason, he brought his friend joy."
This passage shows the intensity of the love these two characters share more than any in the entire story as far as I'm concerned. Good job anonymous sir/madame, on writing what is without a doubt one of my top 5 love stories of all time, and being the first to convince me that not all Shippings/ClopFics are terrible.
im thoroughly enjoying this :D to be honest i wasnt a big fan of RD because of her cocky attitude but after reading this im really warming up to her shes so sweet so much feels in this story :3 not to mention i love the culture diffrences i find it very interesting to read on (and quite humorous to lol) and i cant figure out why but, i find the fact that when a pegasi is aroused there wings stiffen very arousing to me @w@ that and "horn jobs" haha xD
"Oh, Celestia, am I dead? Is this heaven? If not, I can’t see how heaven could possibly be any better." you know with 'As Celestia Is My Witness' in the featured box currently this line has some funny as hell possibilities. The idea of Celestia hearing and being aware of every time her name is used is either kinky, annoying, or incredibly heartwarming (in that she can hear all the oaths and swears of love between Rainbow and Lero)
Its a good romance but my superior reselience prevented any arousal... I call that victory. Good tic good tic... also what dus ex machina. Was involved?
I was going to make a comment about Earth horses not having gag reflex but there is no way it wouldn't come out wrong.
Anyway, the story is ... high quality interspieces erotica made from a children's cartoon. I have tried to wrap my mind around it several times and it keeps returning an *error* message.
Aren't they both a bit too skilled, considering their limited experience?
Hmm. Highly-descriptive sexual interaction- Impressed. Rainbow Dash- Okey Dokey. A Human WITH Rainbow Dash- Most fics of Human-pony pairing (sexually speaking) suck. This does not. I would read the next chapter, but I need to go to bed.
well well well i just bled 4 hours of my day off from school into ur fix. only the third part. i don't read very quickly, i like to swim slowly through my fics this has been amazing so far, with still11 parts to go i hope i don't stay up too long studying to compensate for the time spent reading ur fic. i may have to stay up all night c':
This is so far the best clop fic iv have ever read. Its not rushed into its taken slowly so it allows me to connect with the emotions that are being presented. Time to continue this great story. Off to chapter 4
This is a really good clop-fic. It uses a bit of a different detail than I am used to in its sex scenes. It is still in great detail, just different. I am used to the stuff of Twilightclopple.
I swear this was written in an attempt to kill me. I suffered so many heart throbs, I thought I'd die of a diabetes induced stroke from it's sweetness. And that's only the first 3 chapters!
awwwwww it so romantic that it hurts!
This story is great!!! Tbh, I'm generally not a big fan of stories when it isn't explained how the human ends up in Equestria (or if something nonsensical happens, like he gets struck by lightning and teleported there, etc.) but this story's romance makes up for it. THIS BETTER BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png
Whoever wrote this... IS A GOD.
One Hellva way to start out the day! Romantic hot morning sex is a always a plus! Rainbow must be living every Mares dream!
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I've always heard that shower sex is the best
Haven't had the opportunity to try though
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i wonder if when she sucked his penis she looked like this
Part of me thinks this would be where we find out this was all in Dash's head after she went insane because Lero rejected her. I've seen Shutter Island one too many times.
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LOL
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Why do you think that face is so popular?
I'm in alot of pleasurable pain right now.
I never got to read beyond chapter two, I gotta say... GNHKLHN LKGNSDFJLSJSDjlajf GUWADNANADFJK LAFDSL.
777411 Me too... Me too. i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/117/913/knowthatfeel.jpg
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IT. IS. SO. AWESOME.
"Lero rolled on his side, draping an arm across her. He’d been intending to turn the gesture into a hug, but before he could settle himself to tighten the embrace, Rainbow stirred in her sleep. Her forelegs moved, her hooves finding his hand, gathering it up and pulling it to her chest. Her mouth curled in a smile, and he heard her quietly whisper his name before the soft snores resumed.
He felt like his heart was going to melt in his chest. Her forehooves were gently holding his hand against her chest, their slightly uneven texture indicating that she probably trimmed them herself, and he could feel the slow, steady beat of her heart under his palm. He still had no idea why she’d come to care for him so much, but he was willing to accept the fact that, for whatever reason, he brought his friend joy."
This passage shows the intensity of the love these two characters share more than any in the entire story as far as I'm concerned. Good job anonymous sir/madame, on writing what is without a doubt one of my top 5 love stories of all time, and being the first to convince me that not all Shippings/ClopFics are terrible.
Cannot wait for the next chapter!
Lucky bastard got to Taste the Rainbow...
not to mention vice versa...*coughSovietEquestriacough*
895233 I swear, the next time someone makes that pun I'm gonna...
If I wasn't already naked, my clothes would explode from the shear hotness that this fic provides.
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uggh i fapped too much my dick hurts
this fic is pure genious like a blessing from god himself
im thoroughly enjoying this :D to be honest i wasnt a big fan of RD because of her cocky attitude but after reading this im really warming up to her shes so sweet so much feels in this story :3 not to mention i love the culture diffrences i find it very interesting to read on (and quite humorous to lol) and i cant figure out why but, i find the fact that when a pegasi is aroused there wings stiffen very arousing to me @w@ that and "horn jobs" haha xD
"Oh, Celestia, am I dead? Is this heaven? If not, I can’t see how heaven could possibly be any better." you know with 'As Celestia Is My Witness' in the featured box currently this line has some funny as hell possibilities. The idea of Celestia hearing and being aware of every time her name is used is either kinky, annoying, or incredibly heartwarming (in that she can hear all the oaths and swears of love between Rainbow and Lero)
Ending face:a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/a/daawplz.png?1
"Mmm"
“Y’know, I’m not sure whether it’s more fun when you’re in charge or when I am. We’re gonna have to trade off until we figure that out.”
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Its a good romance but my superior reselience prevented any arousal... I call that victory. Good tic good tic... also what dus ex machina. Was involved?
I was going to make a comment about Earth horses not having gag reflex but there is no way it wouldn't come out wrong.
Anyway, the story is ... high quality interspieces erotica made from a children's cartoon. I have tried to wrap my mind around it several times and it keeps returning an *error* message.
Aren't they both a bit too skilled, considering their limited experience?
1402827 But these aren't earth horses are they?
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Hmm.
Highly-descriptive sexual interaction- Impressed.
Rainbow Dash- Okey Dokey.
A Human WITH Rainbow Dash- Most fics of Human-pony pairing (sexually speaking) suck. This does not. I would read the next chapter, but I need to go to bed.
well
well
well
i just bled 4 hours of my day off from school into ur fix. only the third part.
i don't read very quickly, i like to swim slowly through my fics
this has been amazing so far, with still11 parts to go i hope i don't stay up too long
studying to compensate for the time spent reading ur fic. i may have to stay up all night c':
I am reading a clopfic... And not running away screaming!
TGIF, I FUCKING LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KUNST
Fuck me. This is too sexy for my own good.
And to top it all off, quite possibly one of the sweetest romance stories I've ever read.
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if you didnt undestand a thing of that, just ignore this comment
Genitals; what are u doing.
Sthap.
GENITALS NO; STOP!!!
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And the cries of ecstacy when ponies scream her name when having sex. Yeah... Not sure if she'd enjoy that kind of power.
"Aah, this is such a nice dream"
"OH CELESTIA THAT FEELS GOOD! DON'T STOP! I'M SO CLOO-HO-HOOOOOSE!"
"Oh come on, again?"
This is so far the best clop fic iv have ever read. Its not rushed into its taken slowly so it allows me to connect with the emotions that are being presented. Time to continue this great story. Off to chapter 4
This is a really good clop-fic. It uses a bit of a different detail than I am used to in its sex scenes. It is still in great detail, just different. I am used to the stuff of Twilightclopple.
I swear this was written in an attempt to kill me. I suffered so many heart throbs, I thought I'd die of a diabetes induced stroke from it's sweetness. And that's only the first 3 chapters!
THEM FEELS!
I LOVED the ending
Dude, you owe me a new keyboard. This story made me soak my old one in tears.
You know, for having such a weak premise, this story is far more entertaining than it really has any right being.
It's surprisingly well written, and makes 'main character falls in love with an OC, sexy times happen' actually interesting.
I can see why it's so highly rated.
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I'm sure others suffer a similar situation, though there's is soaked with something else
1871652 haha det e roligt hur jag e svensk o jag fattade ändå vad du skrev (if you don't understand what i just wrote ignore this comment)
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3570093 va fattar inget vad är kunst
3592872 Antar att det är något sexuellt. Min svåger är norsk så jag fattar bara hälften av vad an säger. Dem som pratar inte inom min släkt.