1396703 OR it's the question made the story update. At least from my perspective it's creepy as hell. But I'm already used to it - such stuff happens to me all the time.
Wha? Some "Eldritch Abomination" brought Lero to Equestria? The heck?
Bonus points for having more Lyra in this chapter but I am left rather confused as to what happened to Lero. I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapters to have that explained to me. Hopefully we will get more of "EPIC LYRA" along the way... and maybe some more Pinkie Pie please?
Finally! It's been so long since this last updated, I nearly forgot what was going on. But since this is the only story I've read that is like this, it was easy to remember.
I have to imagine that Honeydew also received a fine for providing a blatantly false testimony towards someone she had a grudge against (which could have turned into any number of things), as well as indirectly wasting time and resources on nothing. Please tell me I'm right. I absolutely hate it when these bully characters act stupid and get others in trouble and then get away scott-free. Good chapter, though.
Hmm.... so... Lero got to Equestria at the manipulations of Those Who Live in the Cracks Between... the Bearers of Forbidden Colors.
As written in the Cthäat Equidingen:
Above the tortured heavens So full of silent waiting Howl screams of birth and triumph Unlock the faceless hating Bred in the depths of ocean Of giant strength and tread No hooves defy their windstorm
Heh. Anyway, all joking aside, adding a mysterious, terrifying, dimension spanning entity that Celestia knows enough about to be cautious of is NOT a way to make me less interested in this story, Thanks for writing, man. Seriously. You rock.
Well now, that was well worth the wait, I did think something was hinky with the fear he was feeling towards Tia, and as someone else said, yeah I have to admit that does sound unpleasently like he got himself caught by the Fae, I'd say Winter Court if thats the case, though Summer can be just as bad. anyway, I for one liked where this went and what it covered, I'm hoping the three chapters left *this being one of them* won't be the last we see of Lero and his ladys
Wonderful as always. I REALLY need to find a way to give this more than one thumbs up.
But now I really want to know what brought him to Equestria. My bet's on Cthulhu. And I really think his decision to have those memories repressed is gonna come back to bite him in the ass. That warning from Celestia just reeks of foreshadowing.
I didn't think Lero was falling into the reversed gender role all that much, but it was definitely a nice scene to see. You captured the mood really well, I found myself clenching my hands in sympathy with him.
I really didn't expect to ever find out how Lero got to Equestria. Really didn't see it coming, probably because the story hasn't focused on his arrival. I've kind of got a guess for how the story will go now.
I have to wonder if Lyra is hitting on Lero or just trying to stay close to the Princess' student.
Oh god plot without plot! Err, without clop/plot not... gaah you know what I mean! Still good chapter. Show that Lero can stick up for himself, some interaction with Lyra (am I the only one that thought she was extremely unsubtly asking to stay with Lero et al as a show of romantic interest?), and of course the beginning of a bigger mystery. Might be bad that when Celestia mentioned do not think of them my first reaction was comparing the circumstances and thinking of every possible species of similar capabilities and modus operandi.Also kinda odd that Honeydew had no fear facing down Rainbow Dash and Lyra previously but stops from just one glare from Applejack. Some thought inspired by earlier chapters as well. Did think it somewhat unrealistic that ponies would be attracted to the scent of humans sweat until I thought back to "Over a Barrel" and remembered that Ponies can get inebriated from salt.
I really loved it, It's great to join our herdmates again after 2 months of waiting Can't wait to read more
But there's one thing that scares me millions times more than Celestia had been scaring Lero:
as we approach the end of the story
...the end of the story... (echo x3) ....(pause for a dramatic effect) NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! For Pete's sake, it can't happen! Not now! I seriously hope that until you finish the story we'll see at least around 50k more words... Please, I just love this story, it can't be the end!
At least you're making side stories!!! It's sooooooooo awesome and I appreciate it, but release date... still unknown...
I hope we won't be forced to wait next 2 months to read another chapter
I hope that, if a way is found back to his home, Lero will be given the choice of whether to stay or not. I'm also loving the way you write in the tension between the species.
Interesting, his reaction to Celestia and the plot threads it dangles. I just can't get enough of the society crafted in this story. It's just amazing the detail and thought that goes into everything and how much sense it all makes. I loved Twilight and Rainbow's reactions when Celestia first came into the room and the supernatural fear overtook Lero, what their instincts were telling them to do. Just awesome world building, all around. Yeah, I've said that before, but I'll continue repeating it.
Interesting... Wait... Didn't anonauthor say that it had several chapters up for revision to FimFiction's format? Or was it just the one? Either way, it's all good.
I have to say, I'm in complete love with the way the author set up the world of Equestria. The relationships and inter-personal communication are all so believable. What I want to see, is Lero and Spike's relationship....
As well as Lero and "Horny's" (LOL) relationship develop.
1396653 Wooh, new chapter. Wait...Fear of celestia's mane, kidnapped and escaped, referring to the one that reminds him of his captors as Lady, mentioning them may cause them to appear. Lero was kidnapped by the Fae wasn't he?
Enjoy your new chapter my yearning little ponies!
I think this chapter might assuage some of the claims that Lero is too passive and quite the little bit of dangling plotline to boot.
More chapters will be coming in the next few days as we approach the end of the story.
YES!!!!
I know its gonna be SO AWESOME!!!!i
EDIT: It was!
Woohoo!!! A new Chapter!!!!!!
Starting reading right now!!
Thank you AnonponyDASHIE!!
WHAT?!?!?!
YEAH! FINALLY UPDATED!!!
Reading it NOW
WOOOOO!!! NEW FUCKING CHAPTER!!! NOW TO READ!!!
EDIT:That was incredibly exciting. If he gets sent back somewhere I am going to be so pissed.
SQUEEEE!!!!!!!
Freaking Fae. Grumble mumble mumble. Although it also explains his incredibly thick skin when it comes to taunting.
Awesome Chaper is freaking amazingly awesome
Dangling plot is not a good thing when this story doesn't update more than once bi-monthly.
But as always, it's amazing. Thanks.
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OR it's the question made the story update. At least from my perspective it's creepy as hell. But I'm already used to it - such stuff happens to me all the time.
More chapters?
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1396779 Quick! Ask again!
what the story is going to end so soon no we need more.
WOOOOOOT!!!! UPDATE!!!
:Reads chapter:
Wha? Some "Eldritch Abomination" brought Lero to Equestria? The heck?
Bonus points for having more Lyra in this chapter but I am left rather confused as to what happened to Lero. I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapters to have that explained to me. Hopefully we will get more of "EPIC LYRA" along the way... and maybe some more Pinkie Pie please?
Finally! It's been so long since this last updated, I nearly forgot what was going on. But since this is the only story I've read that is like this, it was easy to remember.
Approaching the end? But, but, but I love this story
1396653 Don't take this the wrong way but, DEAR LUNA, WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG!?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rarity.png
Good lord, a chapter without clop.
Still, nice to see some story progression. I'll admit to being worried that the story was pottering about last chapter.
Either way, I enjoyed this thoroughly.
Well, Lero is fucked in future chapters. I cannot wait to see what kind of beasts torment him.
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And how he tends to deal with them :) IF ANY DO SURFACE.
I have to imagine that Honeydew also received a fine for providing a blatantly false testimony towards someone she had a grudge against (which could have turned into any number of things), as well as indirectly wasting time and resources on nothing. Please tell me I'm right. I absolutely hate it when these bully characters act stupid and get others in trouble and then get away scott-free.
Good chapter, though.
Hmm.... so... Lero got to Equestria at the manipulations of Those Who Live in the Cracks Between... the Bearers of Forbidden Colors.
As written in the Cthäat Equidingen:
Above the tortured heavens
So full of silent waiting
Howl screams of birth and triumph
Unlock the faceless hating
Bred in the depths of ocean
Of giant strength and tread
No hooves defy their windstorm
Heh. Anyway, all joking aside, adding a mysterious, terrifying, dimension spanning entity that Celestia knows enough about to be cautious of is NOT a way to make me less interested in this story, Thanks for writing, man. Seriously. You rock.
At work when phone goes off. Whoa, Xeno updated?! PFT! Fuck work. Must read!
Well now, that was well worth the wait, I did think something was hinky with the fear he was feeling towards Tia, and as someone else said, yeah I have to admit that does sound unpleasently like he got himself caught by the Fae, I'd say Winter Court if thats the case, though Summer can be just as bad. anyway, I for one liked where this went and what it covered, I'm hoping the three chapters left *this being one of them* won't be the last we see of Lero and his ladys
LEROOOOOOOOY
Plot progression..... I LOVE IT!!!
YES YES YES YES MORE MORE YAY FINNALY MADE MY YEAR YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSssssssss
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The end of the story!
I really hope that it's a LONG way off.
Wonderful as always. I REALLY need to find a way to give this more than one thumbs up.
But now I really want to know what brought him to Equestria. My bet's on Cthulhu. And I really think his decision to have those memories repressed is gonna come back to bite him in the ass. That warning from Celestia just reeks of foreshadowing.
I didn't think Lero was falling into the reversed gender role all that much, but it was definitely a nice scene to see. You captured the mood really well, I found myself clenching my hands in sympathy with him.
I really didn't expect to ever find out how Lero got to Equestria. Really didn't see it coming, probably because the story hasn't focused on his arrival. I've kind of got a guess for how the story will go now.
I have to wonder if Lyra is hitting on Lero or just trying to stay close to the Princess' student.
Edit: my grammar sucks.
It updated!
There is a plot!
But more importantly...IT UPDATED!
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Can't Lyra do both at the same time?
Oh god plot without plot! Err, without clop/plot not... gaah you know what I mean! Still good chapter. Show that Lero can stick up for himself, some interaction with Lyra (am I the only one that thought she was extremely unsubtly asking to stay with Lero et al as a show of romantic interest?), and of course the beginning of a bigger mystery. Might be bad that when Celestia mentioned do not think of them my first reaction was comparing the circumstances and thinking of every possible species of similar capabilities and modus operandi.Also kinda odd that Honeydew had no fear facing down Rainbow Dash and Lyra previously but stops from just one glare from Applejack. Some thought inspired by earlier chapters as well. Did think it somewhat unrealistic that ponies would be attracted to the scent of humans sweat until I thought back to "Over a Barrel" and remembered that Ponies can get inebriated from salt.
1396942 Why didn't I think of that?
"End of the story?" Well, balls.
Yes. An update. My day just got a little bit brighter
FUCK WORK, XENOPHILE TIME
So much awesome! Thank you for making my day.
I really loved it, It's great to join our herdmates again after 2 months of waiting Can't wait to read more
But there's one thing that scares me millions times more than Celestia had been scaring Lero:
...the end of the story...
(echo x3)
....(pause for a dramatic effect)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
For Pete's sake, it can't happen! Not now!
I seriously hope that until you finish the story we'll see at least around 50k more words... Please, I just love this story, it can't be the end!
At least you're making side stories!!! It's sooooooooo awesome and I appreciate it, but release date... still unknown...
I hope we won't be forced to wait next 2 months to read another chapter
Great chapter! Looking forward to more (as usual! )
Did Lero get abducted by aliens?
*squeals in delight!*
I hope that, if a way is found back to his home, Lero will be given the choice of whether to stay or not. I'm also loving the way you write in the tension between the species.
Oh my god, his past. Now i must know more!
MOAR
Interesting, his reaction to Celestia and the plot threads it dangles. I just can't get enough of the society crafted in this story. It's just amazing the detail and thought that goes into everything and how much sense it all makes. I loved Twilight and Rainbow's reactions when Celestia first came into the room and the supernatural fear overtook Lero, what their instincts were telling them to do. Just awesome world building, all around. Yeah, I've said that before, but I'll continue repeating it.
Interesting... Wait... Didn't anonauthor say that it had several chapters up for revision to FimFiction's format? Or was it just the one? Either way, it's all good.
I have to say, I'm in complete love with the way the author set up the world of Equestria. The relationships and inter-personal communication are all so believable. What I want to see, is Lero and Spike's relationship....
As well as Lero and "Horny's" (LOL) relationship develop.
Commence Read.exe
WooHoo!
New Xenophilia chapter!
OhboyOhboyOhboyOhboyOhboyOhboy!
*Sees Xenophilia update* Well, my question of "What to read this evening?" just became ridiculously easy to answer.
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Wooh, new chapter.
Wait...Fear of celestia's mane, kidnapped and escaped, referring to the one that reminds him of his captors as Lady, mentioning them may cause them to appear. Lero was kidnapped by the Fae wasn't he?
Well, this takes the story in an unexpected direction.
At this point, I'm not sure what to expect, but I can't wait to find out!
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Finally, all those years of playing Call of Cthulhu/Alpha Green and reading the Cthulhu mythos pay off.
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End....? There is no end. What on earth are you talking about? A story this awesome can never end.
Ahh, the iron grip of the storyline is thickening!
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