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At some point you must have thought to yourself "I could break into that house and nobody would know it was me."

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To have your life ripped apart, have it crumble around you while you scramble to pick up the pieces.

It can drive you a bit mad. Make you do things.

Even if you have somepony to lean on.


Prequel to Magic Duel.

First Published
10th Jul 2016
Last Modified
10th Jul 2016
#1 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·

Huh, Maud and Trixie pairing? That's one I never would have thought of.:rainbowhuh: This fandom continues to surprise me. (On another note, wonder what Starlight would think?:rainbowlaugh::derpytongue2:) This is so going in my favorites list just for the pairing alone, and that's not counting the good writing as you can really feel Trixie's emotions here.

#2 · 41w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

Oh geez, DEI Caboose.

As short as those sentences were, I could feel myself being slapped about by the tag of sadness.  With the back hand, too.

I surely hadn't thought of how it builds up to their actual duel-- only merely what happens after Maud meets the equal unicorn.

A fine job.  Except you have two typos I see, and I won't tell you where.  :twilightsmile:

#3 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·

I loved it.  Trixie and Maud make a wonderful couple.

#4 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·

That was good. Trixie felt so sad.

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