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DEI Caboose


At some point you must have thought to yourself "I could break into that house and nobody would know it was me."

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What are those ill feelings you have? Directed towards the one you love most in the world. It's wrong isn't it? To feel that way?

Isn't it?

Princess Luna doesn't know anymore.


Set 1000 years ago.
Audio reading by TheDizzyDan.
Audio reading by Plagen Shiki.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 8 )

Oh my God. This was amazing. I really can't say much.

I love this.

This was pretty damn good. I like how you wrote Luna here, and how she is clearly and realistically struggling with her feelings and trying to stop her love towards Celestia from wavering.

Typically Luna is written as almost completely blameless, but you've created a good balance by simply writing her feelings instead of trying to appease some melodramatic, symbolic ulterior motif.

Added to Sad Luna.

Very well done.

This is very nice. I like how she isn't written as the perfect pony ever the shining beacon of the fandom. It's a good balance and doesn't write Celestia as an evil bitch as other fics do.

Hey. I blogged a thing and your story showed up.

6696400 Not even exaggerating, this was really touching. Seriously it's things like this that make me want to keep writing.

I give you . . . you're well deserved 50th like! :pinkiehappy:

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