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Harmony Split


Love has no desire but to fulfill itself. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving

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Well, that's definitely an interesting idea. ^^

D'awww, this was sweet. :twilightsmile: Much like the sweets Bonnie and Lyra create. The end managed to give me a good chuckle as well.

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I told you^^


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Thanks! Sometimes, my imagination or my dreams go weird ways. Sometimes even both^^

Well then, no wonder BonBon's shop is always full

Have to say, kinda saw that coming, but was not disappointed at all! 10/10!

totally knew wat tat secret ingredient was it was so obvious :facehoof:

6211639 I know you did, but when you told me the premise, I didn't understand what you had meant. Still, well done as always. ^^
<('.'<) (^'.'^) (>'.')> Kirby dances in approval. :twilightsmile:

Such an adorable story. And sexy, too.

Can I try some Bon Bon specials?

That's the problem with selling food made out of sex. No matter what you do, kids are going to eat it.

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I'll ask if they got some for Tavi and me and you get the spares xD

:rainbowlaugh: at the ending.

Sex candy? Might taste better than the Party Time Mint Alls I'm used to. Perhaps I'll ask Bonbon myself, and Lyra. *giggle*

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You've been a very naughty stallion! :rainbowlaugh:

The rest of her shift went quick, and not really to her surprise, most of her sweets were sold out over an hour before she would close the shop. Like every other day, some of her customers left with ears flat against their heads and a sad expression on their muzzles because what they wanted was sold out.

I'm a sales associate. If any customer were to leave my store because I don't have a particular product, I wouldn't give a sh*t. Were a pony to leave my store looking like this, I'd quit my job and travel the world with them until I found exactly what they wanted and I would buy it for them.

Pony happiness > human happiness

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lol, they might have to... increase production.

Oh my :yay:
W-Would there be more left for me to have? If y-you don't mind that is~:yay:
Awesome story~:pinkiehappy:

“Sweetie Belle found the stockpile I bought from you, so yes, I had to come back for more,”

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Aw man that's just sick! So many lines were crossed in that single sentence.

I saw this and I thought how it would turn out.
No, I thought. Certainly it wouldn't go that route.
I look at the rating.
Okay, certainly this is leading me on. It can't be what I think it is.
I read the story.
Damnit. It is.:rainbowlaugh:

Lyra recalled how this had started, a quick nooner in the sweetshop followed by an accidental discharge into a batter of butterscotch

I don't know whether to be disgusted that they didn't throw that butterscotch away, or laugh because they decided to sell it anyway.

This is my first ever comment that I'm giving to anypony! I loved this story!

I can't change my profile pic! :raritycry: Plz help me!

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Thanks

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On the top bar right next to groups.
click on your fim-name and go to change avatar

Hehe...fun little story. Got a thumbs up from me...:rainbowwild:

Hm...it seems to me that Bonnie was tied up at first, but never released. But she could still move and hug Lyra etc... Just a small goof in an otherwise good story.

Hm, reminds me of a movie called The Green Butchers, where two butchers accidentally kill a guy, and end up selling him as their "special chicken dish". As they run out (the whole village just LOVE it), they of course have to get new supplies. A bit more morbid, I guess (although it was made in a way so you'd laugh rather than be horrified).

Wish the story had been longer. Also, I wonder what would happen if or when ponies found out the truth...
:raritydespair: "....and I even gave some to Sweetie Belle...how could you! Even though I must admit they tasted nice..."

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