That one guy who writes twenty stories, and doesn't update any of them.
{This story is on Hiatus until further notice}
Equestria has been invaded by creatures calling themselves, Kaijin, who's only goal is conquest. In order to stop this most terrible foe, the mane six will have to harness the power of the Kaijin's old enemy, the Kamen Riders.
My first story so be gentle
takes place after events of season 5 episode 12
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I GET IT! And this story is interesting, can't wait to see where this goes. I like how it's trying to be different even though it includes real Kamen Rider parts, such as Yggdrasil Tower and Urataros
That had me laughing hard. This looks to be a promising story!
This part above in the story need to be all in upper case letters because it is the name of the institution. The other thing is you have a short bit in the middle of the chapter where Pinkie is talking and you have her lines in pink and it is nowhere else in your story so far. Otherwise this is a great job for your first attempt and I would encourage you to keep at it and I will be following this story!
Not bad for a start, but I'd recommend getting a beta reader to help with the spelling and format errors. Like the idea, and so far, characters are coming across well. Just got to work a bit on the finer points and I'll be all over this fic! Looking forward to more, and best of luck!
6248286 The pink part of the story is actually a fourth wall joke but thanks for pointing that out.
So are these more riders or more villains?
So will the rest of the mane 6 becoming riders in this story? I know there are several different riders so there are many different powers to choose from.
Okay, unless I'm very much mistaken, Fluttershy = OOO, and Rarity = Ryuki.
6503579 Recommendations: Dash = Drive, AJ = Gaim, Pinkie = Den-O/W.
6503579 Yeah the rest of them will be riders too.
As for which riders, Wait and see.
Great just great. Now little miss Stalin has a device that will bring out nothing but trouble.
6637328 that is until kaito eventually steals it back
next chapter please
You need a beta reader bad. I too suffered that with my first story. It will cut out a lot of the downvotes caused by people who are really turned off by it. Keep pressing on bro!
wait wait wait... so rarity will be ryuki ???
So the question is what did Rainbow not hear before she put on the belt and activated it? Nice to see another chapter in this story!
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More like a warning.
In the first episode of the original series, when Yusuke Godai put on the Arcle -Kuuga's Rider Belt- it caused him tremendous pain because it was bonding to his nervous system directly.
It lasted until he finally transformed into Kuuga's Growing Form -the beginning for for anyone who becomes Kuuga until they unlock the true base form. It is the weakest of Kuuga's forms forcing the user to attack the enemy with multiple Rider Kicks to defeat them.
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I think it would be a interesting idea for her to be a 'balanced' fisticuffs Rider whose basically modeled after a knight. 
Okay I have to ask... what do you have against Rarity becoming Ryuki?
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I just wish that I could find a legal site for these shows, but all I can find are the pirate sites. Also for somebody to do it correctly when porting it over to the States. Zyuranger was far better then MMPR season one. Diaranger had a better plot and direction the MMPR season twin as well.
6984312 i dont have anything against it but if she likes knights and stuff i was thinking by the lines of blade
Nothing personal, but I would have thought that Kabuto might have been a mite more appropriate.
Why do I think that in the end Rarity will deny the snuggling under the wing. She will admit to everything else but that she will draw the line on. So it makes me wonder which rider's power Rarity will get?
Pretty curious on what happens next.
Shame its on hiatus though..
Curious on which Riders would Applejack and Pinkie Pie would be.
Would Spike get to become a Kamen Rider too?