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coffee. desk. beat on repeat. and then i bang my head against the keyboard a lot, like don music from the muppets.

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On a stormy, overcast day, a yellow pegasus sings.
She sings for her love.
She sings for her sorrow.
She sings for the one who will never know either.

But when the mare who holds her heart overhears, will she have the strength to continue?

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 144 )

I love this. I love every little word of it.

I love how you've portrayed 'Shy - all her emotions and dialogue feel spot on. Also, I love the idea that she writes when she's alone. It seems fitting, somehow. And oh man, Dash is such a jerk here, but she's still so loveable and awesome and feels just right.

I have a lot of favourite stories, but this is one of my favourite stories. It's excellent. You should be proud.

This was very good. I didn't notice any major errors or spelling mistakes, and your pacing was good for what this story was aiming at. Good job you've added another good entry into the Flutterdash/Rainbowshy archives.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png

That was..wow. 0.0 amazing doesn't even do it a sliver of justice.
Fuckin A bro, fuckin A.:pinkiehappy:

Beautiful story. Have all my internets. :pinkiesad2:

Really nice story made me cry :fluttercry::facehoof::raritycry:perfectly made you knoew how to get the reader into the love scene and it was just perfect :heart::fluttershyouch::rainbowwild:

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I'm glad you like it! The characterization was the part that I struggled the most with, so I'm glad it seemed accurate/good.

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:/ I need to learn how to write poetry like that

Mother of flabbershook this looks interesting! :moustache: :raritystarry:
Will read later!! :twilightsmile:

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Aw, don't undersell yourself. I've read your stuff, you're great!

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:/ Thanks a lot. I'm looking forward to your future work. I'll throw you some attention after I finish promoting Stally. So many good writers don't get what they deserve.

638016 Thanks! I really appreciate it.:yay:

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:/ Well, if my followers are active. The most thumbs I have is 22

D'awwww :rainbowkiss:

Flutterdash is my favorite ship, right after Twinkie. Loved the song by the way.

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Thank you! Yeah, it's my favorite too, and I've noticed that it doesn't get enough attention (on this site at least).

Great story! The first part with Fluttershy being mad at Dashie could have been a stand alone story, but i enjoyed the ending.

this is cannon. nothing else is right. everything right is now this.
in the terms of fluttershy...
this is...nice.
no...not nice...
this is incredible

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This story needs to get featured.
Every time, I get more blown away.

Good story but several things
#1 I don't like Main6xMain6
#2 personal thing that is acutely kinda petty I think sexuality is something that is a choice not something you are born with.

But other than that i loved the story

Wow, I don't even like this pairing normally, but you made me D'awwww repeatedly! The whole thing was awesome and very well written. Keep up the great work :pinkiehappy:

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Both of those are opinions. I respect them, but that's all they are.

638533 and i respect you for respecting me

confound these peoples that got here first, they said everything I was gonna say so instead have my grats and some awesome
:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Good news: This song is stuck in my head! :twilightsmile: Doubtless, this will be featured. There's a couple of mistakes, but I had to actively look to find them. Nice piece here, and catchy song, too.

5/5 :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: and liked.

That was...beautiful. *sniffle* *sniffle*

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keep on trying. You'll get there one day.

Love it. Dash's character portrayal only seems off in a couple minor spots, and Fluttershy's is excellent. Almost all her feelings are spot on, as well as the way she expresses them. No painful grammar to suffer through either.
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: 1/2 out of 5 mustachioed Spikes.

Beautiful story. I loved the poem/song. I really like the idea of Fluttershy writing poetry in private, and her emotions, even her anger, fit. Dash was dense and even a little jerky looking at 'Shy's diary like that while still staying lovable. Great work! :pinkiehappy:

Whoo. That was pretty dang awesome.

So much loves :pinkiesad2:
Please write more novels of this type. Watching!

And another goes to my read later (64) place.... sigh*

People can stop writing FlutterDash now. It's not gonna get any better than this.

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Hey hey now, no need to turn this into a confrontation.
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This was a lovely read. (Professor Piggy sent me over, and I'm glad he did.) I thought both 'Shy's and Dash's characterizations were quite good, especially Fluttershy's slow build-up to her angry outburst. The duet was adorable and echoed the one they shared in "May the Best Pet Win." And Dash's reaction when she finally pieced together the truth was just perfect and beautiful.

Thanks for writing and for sharing this.

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That's nothing... *looks at his read later (208)* :pinkiecrazy:

Beautiful.
I'm going to be up-front and say this is not my preferred ship, but you've just written this so well, I can't really argue. Hat's off!

Superb read. I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish.:twilightsmile: I appluade you good sir! :moustache:

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Holy crap. I get irritated with myself if I have a Read Later backlog of 10+.
How on earth do you manage it?

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