This story is a sequel to Fly on the Wall
Several months after the invasion of Canterlot and being shipped to Saddle Arabia, the surviving changeling has retired from fighting on the front lines. Due to this, the changeling is still required to work for the Equestrian Army as a wartime strategist and doesn't have to directly see combat anymore. The Princesses acknowledge this, but the new job and retirement from combat can't prevent them from sending the changeling into a tense area ready for combat to bring several lost soldiers back home.
Rated T for violence, language, and an off-page sex scene.
Cover art by TheDoggyGal
Chapters (8)
Great story.
One of the few that I read that I'm not questioning the ending of a chapter for. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Thanks! That means a lot. Thanks for the favorite, too.
don't even need to read this yet to know it goes on my favorite's list
I feel so bad for not reading the recent chapters yet.
I've had the time but keep forgetting to read them because i do or I'm drawing at the time.
Five new ones! Fuck!
I need to make time for this.
Will there be a sequel to chronicle Changeling's next adventure?
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Probably. I've got an idea for what the next one would be like. If the Season 5 finale puts me in a good position for it, then a sequel's going to happen. I've also been toying with the idea of making a prequel for the series, but I haven't done anything with that idea yet.
Why did I keep reading this? I don't like it, but I couldn't stop reading. All the canon characters were way out of character, except maybe Luna. Celestia was especially OOC. She was too heartless and emotional in both of these stories.
I don't understand why the terrorist was killed. It would make a lot more sense for her to be sent to Tartarus like everyone else who tried what she did. Also, you kept switching back and forth between "her" and "him" when referring to her.
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Honestly, I love comments like this. Sure, it's mostly negative, but it gives me things to improve on. Thanks for not being an asshole and just saying this story sucks.
I'll be working extra hard to improve my future stories. I won't be editing this one, or any of my others, to show how much I improve as a writer.
6796911 Your writing is good, as evidenced by the fact that I read both stories all the way through despite my dislike of them. It's just the specifics I mentioned of this particular pair of stories that I dislike. As such, while they're not getting any upvotes from me, they're definitely not deserving of downvotes from me, either.
I can oddly picture the villain here. Sitting in a chair, stroking a cat and saying, "time to die, Mr. Bond."