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When Pinkie Pie declares that she's taking a day off to have some alone time, her friends can't help but be deeply concerned--after all, what is Pinkie without a party to throw? But, as far as Pinkie's concerned, a party is a party, even if there is only one guest. Even is that guest is herself!

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Hmmm. Very interesting. Its good to see that they do get along. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

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Brilliant. Just brilliant. You, my good sir, get a standing ovation. Few fanfictions ever evoke any serious emotion, (My Little Dashie a prime example,) and you did it in not only just one chapter, but in less than 2,009 words. You should consider making a sequel to this story. You could get an entire 10 chapter story if you tried hard enough! This is an interesting new side to Pinkie that I've never considered until now. You have something unique, and in the words of the only rap artist I listen to:

"You better lose yourself in the music, the moment
You own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
This opportunity comes once in a lifetime yo"

I hope you continue this story. In the event that you actually take up a new chapter, I will attempt to hug you through the internet. No joke.

(Also, I would love to have your opinion and rating of my own fics!)

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Holy Fuck.
My Money. Take it all. I don't even.... know what to say.


you win. something. I don't know what, but you win.

My god.

Im gonna go....

I don't know.


Wow.



Don't stop writing.


Jesus.

:pinkiesad2::heart::pinkiecrazy:

A one-shot?! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Please! Make more...

I enjoyed this so much, but it was just too short! :fluttershbad:

I need 10,000 more words for this concept! GO!

I'm sorry, I just didn't want it to end. I feel like there should be more to this story... Still 2008 words and you've managed to capture my full attention? That's some great writing, right there.:pinkiesad2:

I find myself pondering a sequel where Pinkie decides Pinkamena needs the chance to make some friends. Now she just has to figure out how to go about it without everypony thinking she's crazy...

Also, there's another fic by Butterscotch Sundae called 'Party of Two'. Dunno if you care or not, but figured you should know, at least!

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Yeah, I realized that after I wrote this. Ah well, there are only so many titles in the world. :derpytongue2:

And in response to the possibility of a sequel or continuation... Yeah, I might write a sequel or at least something else along these lines. Pinkiemena is my OTP, so yeah, this isn't the last time I'm going to visit this sort of territory.

By the way, all the good comments this got made me sooo happy. :pinkiesad2: I'm worried about what you guys are doing to my ego, here.

But seriously, thanks. It means a lot. :heart:

Excellent, excellent. This is relevant to my interests :moustache:

You should totally write more.

Just a suggestion.

32308 To continue what this pony said about the story being brilliant, this is my response.

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It's strange, it says two chapters but I only see one. It's a shame, I would have liked to have seen what happens next. Poor Pinkamena just wants friends.

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Yeah; there's a blank chapter in there that I added on accident. I don't know of any way to delete it, so... yeah. The chapter count lies. :derpytongue2:

Comment posted by Flamingrain27 deleted Mar 15th, 2017

Why is there not more!? WHY!?

Drop what you are doing and take my Dalek money and write!

I just couldn't help but check out your other story as well :twilightsheepish: It's really good. As you can probably judge by my avatar, I'm a big Pinkamena fan, so this story is relevant to my interests (admittedly minus the shipping part, but whatever)

"She wouldn't be surprised if, miles away, Trixie was doing the same"

Relevant:
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I read a Trixie/Trixie fic once. I quite enjoyed it, but I'm not sure if that has any bearing on the actual quality given that I have a thing for selfcest. Er, I mean... MY FETISHES ARE COMPLETELY PREDICTABLE AND NORMAL YES. :applejackunsure:

A note: this has been edited as of 1/21/12. Nothing huge, just an extra sentence here and a word substitution there. Gearing up for a possible sequel.

Great story! Well-written, unique, and certainly a curious look into Pinkie's psychology.
I know everyone else is saying "WRITE A SEQUEL", but... I feel as though it's good as is. If you have inspiration for a sequel, I'd love to read it, but try not to force a sequel just for the sake of having a sequel. Because sometimes, less says more.

DF

This was heartwarming. I look forward to the possible sequel if it happens. :)

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Dear Celestia, I had no idea there were so many typos left in my stories! :raritydespair: Thanks for pointing them out to me! I'll get right on that.

Darn, I thought there would be super hot shipping. That's what is wrong with this story. Couldn't we at least have some real kissing? You may have my 5 but you'll need to earn my trust.

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Eh, real kissing is a bit difficult when half of the couple doesn't exist. :twilightblush: My fics aren't usually of the "super hot" variety, so if I were you I wouldn't expect any clopping or what-have-you out of it. Glad you liked it though!

...Mother of god. Split-personality shipping. And it works.

I...I think I love you...:pinkiecrazy:

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Love you too, man. :pinkiehappy:

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Also, just as a general comment, I happened across this poem on dA today and it reminded me of this story. It's very well-written, too.

um um um um um...tth was that man i am officially freaked at pinkie pie now thnx alot.. now i wont be able to see her in the same normal party pony she is anymroe...(HAHAHA yeah right we always knew pinkie had a phyco/weird side to her) bravo man bravo. this purly protrayes her in the correct light of what she really is a raging phycopathic pony that can snap at any minute. hehe.

Hm.

I think this is the first story i've seen - well, the first where they're completely seperate ponies except in body - in which these two weren't trying to be rid of one another somehow. I like this take. The kissing a mirror thing surprised me but I guess it makes a sense - noone else can honestly say they've been through as much with Pinkie or know her better, after all.

Also,
:pinkiegasp: You're jealous of Fluttershy?
is an awesome line and you should be proud of it. :moustache:

Good work

"Pinkamena could only continue on recklessly." - I see a double space :trixieshiftleft:

82786 Hey, while we're on the topic of shipping a character with herself (himself?), do you know of any good Twilight Sparkle × Twilight Sparkle stuff? The only one I've found so far is Perfect For Me, and it's perfect for me! :twilightsmile: (but it's too short! :raritycry:)

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I swear these typos multiply when I'm not looking. :ajbemused: I'll get that.

And Perfect For Me is the only one I've seen, too. We need some more self-shipping out here!

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I have DID. This is bipolarity. DID, considering the first word is dissociative, means you generally don't communicate with the others. I don't count them as me. I've had to kill a few.

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DID is what used to be called Multiple Personality Disorder, which is exactly what it sounds like. So yeah, in this context, Pinkie has DID. Are you thinking perhaps of Antisocial Personality Disorder?

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Nice try. In this conext, Pinkie does not have multiple personalities (although you're correct in saying that DID and MPD are the same thing). She has one alternate personality, which is an extremely strong indicator of bipolarity or a slight indicator of borderline-personality. No schizophrenia, mind you; that's hearing voices, seeing false signs from God or Satan, or having visual hallucinations. Huge misconception there.
Also, 'dissociative; and 'antisocial' are close synonyms.

Yes! This is the Pinkamena I like, rude,insecure and sad "personality split" of Pinkie.
Great story, loved it!

I am ashamed to say that I expected this to be bad. Now I humbly ask for it to be continued :twilightblush:

This was a good story... I wish it was longer. :pinkiesad2:

Plz do a sequel! :pinkiehappy:

I am happy I noticed how old this was. Would have been questioning characterisation.

*Sigh*
Do you have a sequel?

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And probably more,
There is a story called Pinkie Personalities. It includes Surprise and Pinkamena.

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Thanks, but it's not a sequel or by the same author :derpytongue2:

456014 That's....not Bipolar.

An idea. What if Pinkie's friends, the CMC, and a few of my favorite background ponies discovered this truth while being in invisibility, and reported it to the Royal Sisters with evidence?

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A Selfcest fetish?:trixieshiftleft:

:raritystarry: I think we have something in common.

Good work on this story btw.

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