In a time before the return of Nightmare Moon, Equestria is a growing land. A growing land filled with corruption and disharmony. Once an outlaw but now having turned over a new leaf. Joan Derpston is given the mission to rid Equestria of her old gangmates or risk losing the last thing that matters to her in the world, her daughter. From rapidly growing Ponyville to rebellious Nuevo Equestria and even to the bloody streets of Canterlot itself.
Follow Joan as she battles death, corruption, and even royalty in this MLP Red Dead Redemption crossover
(Special thanks to Dutch-Duo~ of Deviantart for the thumbnail picture)
Hurray. Now we can be Rockstar game crossover buddies!!!!
OH MY GOD!
I'm such a fucking whore for RDR.
I look forward to reading the shit outta this.
And Derpy as Marston, why does this seem to fit?
Brown Alive Redemption
Blue Poo Atonement
Green Spleen Submarine
Purple Monkey Dishwasher
There's an excellent pic relevant to this of Derpy dressed up as John and riding Big Macintosh. I think it was called John Mareston. Regardless, I'ma pounce on this story starting now!
This is nice; the flow is a bit blocky, and there's a couple of mistakes here and there, but still quite nice. Liked, needless to say
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i wonder if that means Dinky will be Jack
636759 Personally, i think these are the parents of the mane six and other characters. I mean, they did say how DJ-HOR53 or whatever her name is is gonna have a daughter named Vinyl Scratch (DJ-P0N3), AKA the DJ with the purple glasses and magenta eyes... It would most definitley be a great starting point for a sequel, with Derpy as the main character.
636987 someones on the right track. And I doubt there will be a sequal, maybe side stories but a full sequal, most likely not. Im only 1/3 done with the story and i have put a lot of time and effort in this. Plus, I'm planning on multiple endings, like Silent Hill.
636555 /)
643275 multiple endings sounds good... only thing that doesnt make sense about your fantastic idea for the parents theory or what not is Dr. Hooves... but hell, hes a timelord, he knows his stuff.... no complaints, really liking your story though so far
rederption...i just...*facehoof* good gravy, this is ridiculous on every level...and i HAVE to read it!
After Playing Red Dead Redemption, this really sounds good
647892 yay! Im glad you like it :3
643399 What i'm thinking about going with is that this Dr. Whooves is not the same Doctor we see in MLP. So by the time one of the endings happens he has died and regenerated.
great job, keep goin and stay golden^^
Lol Zecora as Seth, I wonder how that is going to played later on, Love this
Even better with Luna as Landon Ricketts
Though good choice for Red/Blue Blood as Captain Vincente de Santa...Blue Blood...
Keep it up I want to see which side Joan Derpston will work for, but I know how that's going to end.
741240 thank you, glad you like it. And for those who have played the game yea they will see how most of the stuff will work out. But the story has my own flair still. Hope you like the future chapters too(when i get around to writing them >:3)
i remember seeing the first charapter on deviantart.
Aannnnnd theres 11 ch to read now.
Alt. Titles: The Ecstasy Of Muffins and True Derp and The Good, The Bad And The Bubbles and It Came From The Mailroom and Spaghetti Muffin and The Letters Of Melquiades Equestria and, finally, The Pony With No Name
1783960 After 26 weeks...I finally understand this comment...I fail to hard!
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Hey are you going to do a few chapters or spin off on undead nightmare?
The next line from Joan Derpton should have been.
"You'll never see a more wretched hive of scum, and villainy," Joan replied, winking him as she squee'd, and stuck out her tongue.
The doctor's line would be the perfect set up for Joan to use that Obi-Wan Kenobi Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope quote.
659130 Several times, I'm sure, knowing how the Doctor is always being fatally wounded, and then regenerating.