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Twilight really hurt Moondancer's feelings by not showing up to her party. Even though she had other friends, Moondancer had planned a very special party for her very special friend, Twilight Sparkle. This party was going to be the place where she finally confessed her secret feelings to Twilight.
This is what might have happened if Twilight had made time for her friend.
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You did a really good job on this! I love it!
cool story I loved it ;)
That's a good story which show how one can overcome the fear of being rejected. I order the following!
Seriously, I really like your story. Using Moondancer's experience with Twilight to be the power which gave her the confidence to tell her feeling was well imaginated. 
If you work on this story by continuing it, you can consider that I already read it! 
Keep going like this.
,Peace from Midnight.
Nicely done and cute
I absolutely lost it at this point
6199206 Yeah, I wasn't expecting very many people to read or like it, but the positive response is encouraging. If people like it, I'd like to write more.
So I just posted my own first person one shot Moondancer fic, checked 'Also Liked' tab on the side, and found this fic. Glad to see another person with exactly the same take on Moondancer's exclusive focus on Twilight. Though I'm pretty sure there are legions out there that caught the same subtext. With that episode, the shipfics pretty much write themselves. It all but screamed that Moondancer felt VERY close to Twilight in a way she didn't to the rest of her friends.
i really expected this to be a introspective of how moondancer went on her path of being a introvert.
I like your characterization of what Moondancer likes about Twilight.
Aww, this is sweet!
Super sweet like sugar! Nom
Pretty good.
I honestly want an entire series based off of this that shows how the show would have been different if this had happened.
That would be great.
Somebody please make this!
MY LIFE NEEDS MORE MOONLIGHT/TWIDANCER!!!
THE WHOLE WORLD NEEDS MORE MOONLIGHT/TWIDANCER!!!!
6736535 MOONLIGHT/TWIDANCER NEEDS TO TAKE OVER FROM THE LARGE AMOUNT OF TWIDENCE FANART AND STORIES!!
Not bad.
6203658 you should add moondancer tag.
So, do Twilight and Moondancer (and Spike) all move to Ponyville after this?
Seeing this and having read the story, there really should have been an AU tag on this because it firmly falls into the category of AU-what ifs.
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Sorry, I wrote this in 2015 and never came back and checked on it. Tags have been updated to more accurately reflect the content.
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Danke. It's always nice when an author pokes back in, especially to update things in any way.