How old is the Red Dragon from Dragonshy? And why did he cry so much when Fluttershy scolded him?
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Arreis Of Avalon
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Well, it's certainly more thought-provoking than anything else about that episode. I get the distinct impression this was a rush job, though, and it shows.
This is a very nice touch on the idea I gave you, Arreis. However, it's a little too... well, deep and sad. But great job, I loved it! ^w^
6192345 Just a bit of a rush job. I sort of finished it just last night, and the idea was quickly running away from me.
6192552 Eh, I tried. It was kinda late when I wrote this one, so it wasn't the greatest.
I still liked it. Rushed and a little ambiguous but also animalistic and the punchline climax certainly wasn't expected. Very thought provoking, though - kinda makes you wonder if the difference between an adult and a wyrmling (D&D term for lack of better words) isn't size and power but maturity in regards to greed and hunger, but also soundness in emotion. Maybe, as they grow in actual age, they grow in complexity and deepen in stability, creating that regal and almost stoic image commonly seen in dragons. That's why an actual adult can horde and not be swayed by it; it can gather jewels and not become possessed by them - as we see here with our little wyrmling.
In that light, the rushed pacea actually helped the plot to play on the whirlwind of a child's emotion, especially one who might not even understand what or why its emotions are literally attacking it. Deep!
Overall, job well done (to no surprise)!
6196026 Thank you! ^^ I realize it was a bit rushed, and given more effort (and perhaps the sensibility to write when I'm fully awake) it could have been better. However, it's nice to see that the main idea of the piece got across to the readers.
I completely forgot this was a one chapter story, you could easily continue with this because of how you left off.
6580680 I'm not sure I will. I wrote this on a prompt and didn't really settle down into the idea. Even now, I'm a bit hazy on the details. I might just let this lie.
6580914 Yea thats fine. I wasn't really getting any Ideas on how the story would progress either.