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Teeemu


- My last submission was over 8 years ago.

Comments ( 24 )

The fuck are all the DV's for? This shit was epic...

Words connot describe how epic and awesome I find this to be.


So I read this fic from top to bottom. It was well written and an excellent story. My only concern is these 9 downvotes that seemed to have cropped out of no where. Why don't people ever just say why they downvote instead of clicking that icon and running off? Who knows. But this fic was incredible as deserves the highest praise.

It could be cause of the weed but then again that's why we have the mature tag.

I loved this :heart:

Wow... just... Epic

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Glad you enjoyed it you little druggy

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I'm so glad you enjoyed it :heart:

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It IS most likely due to the weed. I've branched into a few controversial stories these days... I don't doubt that drug use may offend some but it IS a mature fic as you say so... I cant do much about the nay sayers. Although I do appreciate feedback over dvs. :ajbemused:

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:heart:

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Screw the nay sayers, bro.

The good shit hardly makes the feature anyway. I don't even know what half that stuff that ends up there is.

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Spoilers for those who hath not read

Part of it might also be the cheating at the end, and it being cheating on Rarity. Honestly, though, I can't really blame Spike. I won't proclaim to know a whole lot about functional S&M relationships, but from what I know they're supposed to be a lot more about trust and being able to entrust yourself to your partner, but this seems to be less trusting her and more sacrificing himself. Not saying Spike went about this in anything resembling the correct manner, but neither did Rarity (Seriously, letting him touch her hair is in no way on the same level of him letting her choke him the fuck out)

Yes, finally. I was wondering when your lazy plot would get this published. I have been waiting for days.:raritydespair:

But I love it. This fic reminds me a lot of my friends. I personally don't really smoke weed. I have only done it five times in my eighteen years of existence. It was nice, and I had a good time, except for this one time when my nephew rolled it with a type of tobacco paper and I got a vicious migrane. And I have always wanted to try edibles. But for me, I enjoy the psychedelic dextromethorphan hydrobromide. It is cheap and easy to get, isn't illegal, and doesn't do major damage to my physical processes. This is important to me because I plan on making MMA my career for as long as I can fight. But I really enjoyed the realism that this provided. It was a very invigorating read and easy to become immersed in.:twilightsmile:

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I made it seem superfluous for that very reason. Spike was going to cheat on Rarity. That was the main plot. But instead of making him seem like some lecher who had no moral back bone, he did it out of both desperation and love. Too very powerful motivators.

The whole hair thing was a plot symbol that only few seemed to notice. She gives nothing of herself and takes everything she wants from him. In the end his actions were almost heralding rather than something you would look down on.

Can i just say that this was a fucking beautiful story...seriously keep up the amazing work!!!

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I am indeed planning to. :twilightsmile:

Glad you liked it.

Glad to see the story turned out well. Glad I could help! I'm adding it to groups to give it more publicity,

Can we has a second chapter, epilogue or something? I really like it a lot!

6231232 Yea man this clopfic was amazing and the writer should make a part 2

Well written. I like.

Whelp...he's fucked

Spike glared at her. "You know nothing, Twilight Sparkle."

That's a statement I never thought Id hear.:rainbowlaugh:

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I was going through some GoT fever when I wrote this

Spike packed another one and passed it over. Twilight levitated it from his hand and up to her lips, giving him a wink before a spark of magic from her horn lit up the contents of the pipe. Slowly, Twilight began to pull it through, separating the pipe from its chamber before inhaling the rest of it. Once again, her horn sparked and as she exhaled, a thick plume of rainbow colored smoke gushed into the air. The whole display was perfect up until the point Twilight started coughing out the rest of the smoke.

Y'know, for some reason, I actually pictured Twilight, in all her alicorn glory, sitting cross-legged on her bed and doing that, sort of the stereotypical Native American position, as if she and SpIke were meditating or something. It was actually a pretty cool image.

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You know, for a moment, I didn't even realise that passage was from my own story. Clearly I had been spending way too much time "meditating" while actually writing it :rainbowlaugh:

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