Part 5 (Oliver) - Chapter 3
Oliver had many reasons to dread using the phone. Talking with strangers was near the top of the list, though it wasn’t quite at the top. There was not yet an entry on the list for “negotiating with the possibly insane for the return of his friends.” He didn’t say anything, just stared at the screen, trying to figure out what he should say.
The speaker on the line sounded familiar, though he still couldn’t put a name to the voice. Maybe it would come to him as he spoke. “When will you be returning to Alexandria, Oliver? Your presence is urgently needed here. One of your friends hurt one of my friends, and we have no doctors.”
It was all he could do not to continue to stare in silence. “What happened?”
For someone whose friend had been hurt, the voice didn’t sound upset. More like he was commenting on a bit of inconvenient rain. “Adrian the pegasus attacked several of my ponies with human weapons. Two of my friends were injured. I think there is still metal in their bodies. We did our best to stop the bleeding, but we really need you back.”
Oliver nodded, though he knew the speaker couldn’t see him. He spoke without thinking, the words almost automatic. “Of course. We should be back in four hours. Did you take them to the hospital?”
“No, they’re in the library. We would not take them near that human place.” Pause. “We are prepared to trade you Adrian in exchange for your help with our wounded and a visit from the filly.”
The filly? Oliver knew from Cloudy Sky’s insistence on using horse words that a filly was the equivalent of a girl, and he only knew of one of those. “Riley isn’t with us. She stayed in Alexandria. Why would you want her, anyway?”
There was a brief silence, accompanied by a chuckle. Something sounded sinister about it, though he couldn’t have said why. “No, not that thing. The crows will have her soon, and we don’t need any pact to make it so.” Oliver felt cold, like a chip of ice had suddenly been lodged in his heart. It wasn’t just that the speaker casually spoke of harm to a child. It was the matter-of-fact way he said it, without the slightest doubt. No human or pony was meant to sound that way. In an unpredictable world, most ponies spoke with at least a little reservation. None could know all things.
This one sounded like he thought he did. “Your leader, the thing that calls itself Lonely Day. Your master must speak with ours. For this, we offer Adrian's life in exchange.”
Oliver muted his microphone, long enough to shout down the hall for Alex. He wasn’t sure she would hear, but he yelled a few more times. If nothing else, Joseph would’ve. He wasn’t really fit to be doing this negotiation stuff. Oliver was a healer, and maybe a gardener. Politics was beyond him.
Still, there was something dark in the image the speaker’s words gave to his thoughts. He couldn’t help but feel anger. Insinuating that Adrian had attacked them had been one thing; that was an accusation of action (which they would probably learn was false as soon as they spoke with him). This was different. They hadn’t accused Alex of anything, they were just insulting her. Perhaps a little bizarrely, but the intention seemed clear even so.
He switched the mic back on. “You must mean Alex. She’s not our master, she’s just our leader. Those aren’t the same thing.”
There was always a long delay with satellite communication. “Her kind do not lead,” said the voice. “They own. Equestria has bowed to its own for long enough, and now they wish to seed your world with more of the same. We’re here to put a stop to it. To protect you. To do that, we must speak with it, and we must have your help to treat the injuries our friends received.”
Again he nodded, though there was nobody to see. “I will help regardless. I’m not sure who you really are… if you came with the immigrants, or if you’re somebody else. But in my country, doctors are afforded a certain level of respect. I have no desire to get involved in politics. We take an oath to ease pain and treat the wounded. I would have helped anyway.”
“And the filly; will it speak with us?”
“She will.” It was not his voice that answered. Oliver glanced over his shoulder, heart suddenly pounding in his chest. How was Alex’s… Of course, the answer came from the screen. She wasn’t doing anything magical; she had just joined the call from the other room. Evidently his shouting had accomplished something after all. “Though I believe you may be technically mistaken about terms. I have my cutie mark; I’m grown.” She sounded more defensive about that then being called an “it.” It was almost enough to make him laugh. “Whatever you want to say, Ryan, say it now.”
There was shocked silence from the other end. “A fictional name for a fictional pony. My true name is Night Speaker. You have no true name.”
“Not true.” Alex took a breath. “Princess Luna of Equestria named me Archive.” She said the word slowly, as though it were something heavy she were putting down. It wasn’t a name Oliver had heard before. Just how much did he know about Alex? “What do you want, Night Speaker?” Oliver expected Alex to be more confrontational, perhaps getting angry about the fire-dragon that had attacked them on their landing. Perhaps she would demand an explanation for what had happened in Philadelphia, even though they still weren’t sure yet if these ponies actually came from there.
She did none of those things.
If he expected reference to the Equestrian royalty to soften Ryan’s voice on the other end, he was disappointed. Instead, the unicorn’s voice came off harsh and clipped, as though barely containing his emotions. “She had no right to tamper with this world!”
“You’re not the only one upset with how Luna did things,” Oliver interjected. “I’m probably never going to see my mother or cousins again because of her. My whole life was uprooted. She’s not our favorite pony either.”
“No.” That cold amusement was back. “She should not have interfered with your world at all. Fate’s judgement was clear. But she interfered. The vultures of the void will not be cheated. Odium forgives.”
Oliver tensed. In two words, this “Night Speaker” had confirmed all of their suspicions. The same message had been scrawled in Philadelphia. Ryan could not have been there when the fire started, so some other pony must’ve been responsible. At least a dozen people were dead because of the actions of whatever group he represented. How many more deaths did he want?
“What do you want from me?” Alex asked again. “I already know what you want of Oliver. You have hurt ponies. I’m no doctor, I can’t help them.”
“You lead Alexandria. I wished to warn you of an urgent danger and trust you to remove it. Our… more entrenched disagreements can wait.”
“I’m listening.”
“You have among your number a dangerous parasite called a changeling. These beings caused devastating wars in Equestria. They enslaved and devoured the minds and hearts of ponies. With the help of the pony Cloudy Skies, she has escaped into the wilderness. If she is allowed to survive to reproduce, her kind will infest your world as they did ours. But you’re her leader. If you can find and kill the parasite before her filth spreads further, you might prevent countless deaths. You claim to lead the ponies here; show wisdom beyond your years and protect the ponies of the next generation.”
“I thought you said fate had judged humanity.” Oliver wasn’t sure where the words came from, but he said them. “What do you care if she causes some of us to suffer down the road? Wouldn’t you want us to experience as much pain as possible?”
The voice sounded shocked. “Of course not! Odium forgives. Even you.” Oliver felt something then, as though a force was traveling through the phone into his head. Like thick cotton was filling his brain and making his thoughts slow down, making it harder to consider anything important and trying to dredge important memories from the last few days to the surface.
“He will wipe away the stains of the pretender princesses and their pretended compassion. One day, he will make this world even greater than the fallen place I come from. On that day, we might be enemies. But not today. Today, our interests align. Destroy the changeling, Archive, and protect our children from her spawn.”
Alex didn’t answer for some time. When she did, it sounded like the young mare was fighting whatever strange sensation was invading her mind as much as he was. “I-I will consider… your suggestion.” Pause. He felt something shift in the aircraft, and another sudden wave of discomfort. He felt the icy chill of the anti-thaumic shield on his soul, strangling the strength from him. Yet as it did, he felt his mind clear. It was the best the shield had ever felt, like being splashed with cold water after having a little too much drink.
Alex’s voice sounded clearer too, and twinged with just a drop of satisfaction. “We arrive in three hours. I will give you an address when we are ten minutes out. You may bring your wounded there, and Oliver can care for them.”
“No.” Ryan’s voice was callous, with only a twinge of regret. “They’re too hurt to be moved, and must remain in the library. You must send Oliver there. You may accompany him if you wish.”
“Absolutely not.” Alex sounded equally uncompromising. “Assuming all the ponies who arrived with you are somehow working with you, you outnumber us two-to-one. You can’t possibly expect me to put Oliver into that situation; we would be trading one hostage and medical care for one hostage. A very poor trade.”
Oliver felt the fury building. “No, Alex.” He spoke calmly, except that his voice shook a little. The only clue to the anger seething under the surface. “If there are hurt ponies there, I’m going. I don’t care who they’re working for. If trading me for Adrian is how I help them, then that’s how it’s going to be.”
Alex did not argue with him, not then. Not until they’d hung up and she made her way over to him in the cargo area did she finally say anything.
Oliver didn’t stay angry long. Alex still smelled furious when she rounded the corner from the cockpit. At least, that was what he thought she smelled like. The smell of anger was so close to another smell that he very nearly couldn’t tell the difference. Her face told him which of the two emotions she was really feeling, though. Her eyes bulged wide, ears faced forward, and teeth bared. Did she even realize she was doing that?
“Absolutely not!” She was only slightly more than half his height. Still, her shout was enough to sound quite clearly over the engines. “Oliver, you can’t go! Nevermind not presenting a united front to a homicidal enemy, which might’ve cost us big. There’s no guarantee they won’t just kill you the instant you get close. There’s no guarantee Adrian is even still alive. You can’t go in on their terms!”
Alex might be raging like waves, but Oliver was a rock. He withstood all of it, without escalating to anger himself. It was only at the outset that her presuming to speak for him made him upset. Now, he was only resolved. Ryan had said Alex was his master. The word nagged at him; he wouldn’t allow it. He would prove their world was better than that. There were no masters in Alexandria, and no slaves. Only friends.
“I don’t care what might happen,” he said, so calmly that he could practically hear the hot air leaking out of her. “I’m going.”
“What?” She blinked up at him, the teenager that had once been their confident leader. “Why?”
“Because ponies are hurt. They’ve been shot, and I’m the only doctor. I don’t think I’m in danger; even evil cults need doctors.”
Alex sat back on her haunches, making her look even smaller. At least she had a cute angry face. He would probably have to wait until she was calm enough to hear something like that, though. “You’re helping them. They already outnumber us; wouldn’t it be better if they’re in worse shape?”
“We don’t know that.” Oliver removed the headset, turning away from the computer. “Maybe the others were just complacent in whatever they did. Maybe some of the immigrants are prisoners too, and they don’t even know. But even if I am helping them, I don’t care.” He glanced briefly at the reflection of his cutie mark in the screen. “I swore to guard growth and ease pain; to put away death for life. I won’t see that oath violated, even if it would be convenient for me to sit by and let our enemies die.”
Master, Ryan had said. How would his master respond?
Alex opened her mouth, chest puffing out again as though she was going to argue with him. She didn’t say anything, though. Instead she nodded, and he could hear the crack in her voice when she spoke. “I don’t… I don’t want anything to happen to you, Olive. But I’m glad you’re willing to fight to be you.” She nuzzled his leg, then hurried away.
Oliver looked down at the place she had touched, rubbing at the strange feeling there. Of course, Alex’s logic was sound. He probably would end up a hostage. He just didn’t care.
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scrunchy scrunchy
Smug villain talk aside there'd better be a proper explanation as to how these exiles know Alex is a nascent alicorn.
Oooohh... Archive... Now that's an alicorn name, right there. I approve.
And that last line, where Alex touched Olive's leg, makes me wonder. Merely descriptive writing? Or did he perhaps get a bit of divine protection?
Also, I ship it. I ship it like Fed Ex.
Ugh, specist death cultists.
Have to admit I hope there's more to the prick and his cause than that.
Because frankly? A member of a species that's terrified of clouds moving on their own ravingly mad about 'the natural order having been defiled?' Rings just a tiny bit false, and I hope that's intentional hypocrisy this crazy zealot is using to control his followers rather than the true agenda.
Wow, there's a lot of the population of Alexandria lacking in much of a sense of self-preservation. By my count, it's at least Alex, Moriah and Oliver, and possibly Adrian. Certainly it makes sense in light of what they've lost, it's just kind of sad to see.
Also, Oliver is right. Angry Alex is adorable.
Since we've just seen the anti-magic help so much with the mind-control, and since it seems likely some of the group with Night Speaker are mind-controlled humans, maybe they won't be outnumbered quite as much as they think if they can use that.
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Alex doesn't really count on the "self-preservation" thing since she's basically immortal at this point. If anything, Alex has an incredibly strong self-preservation instinct since she's got a purpose now. That wasn't true in the first story, but ever since her trip to Equestria she's changed in more ways than just gaining some new magic. Moriah has no self-preservation because she's borderline suicidal. I'm reasonably certain that if it weren't for Joe (and now the kid) she would have killed herself already.
Olive is actually very similar to Alex in this case. It's not a matter of lacking self-preservation, it's that his convictions are more important to him. His role as a doctor is much, much more than just a job to him. His conversation with Alex about when he watched that person die while he was in med school was a big tip off that he would choose what he did in this chapter.
Oh, yeah, cause that's totally different from what Odium seems to be doing.
Still, it's not very clear whether Night Speaker and gang are possessed, misled or genuinely malicious. Especially considering his hatred for the concept (hah!) of alicorns. Can't tell if they really don't like immortal rulers or are just ticked off that Luna and Celestia had effectively ruined their plans to colonise a new magical world without competition. Could be both.
Heck, it's not even clear whether Night Speaker's knowledge is due to an Equestrian background or that he's an ex-human who's been fed information by Odium...
Man, do you enjoy tormenting us with all these questions?
Okay... So, I'm sticking with my theory that Odium is a Chaos God (see WH40k for more details). Probably its kind were exiled to Tartarus or worse when the Princesses consolidated their control over the world - A being of pure, malignancy would find no place in a world defined by the magic of Harmony.
Did the Old Ones trigger the Event? We'll probably never know. Even if they were to say one way or the other, the probability would be that they were lies. What is certain is this: Killing and death is the only means they have to achieve their ends. They cannot build, only destroy. That alone makes nothing they have to offer worth considering.
I think this could all be solved if the HPI dropped on large anti-magic bubble right on top of the library. Let's see Odium survive that.
I have to say, when i started reading The First Pony on Earth, I never expected it to get this big.
Alex is the most adorable world leader since Natalia Poklonskaya.
Alex really does look cute when she's angry. Wonder what Cloudy will try to do with that third name Alex has.
Welp things are getting interesting. We'll have to wait and see how many of the new colonists are actual cult members and which are simply mind controlled. Also it kinda read like they might have a bit of mind reading too, which will make it hard to plan around them.
And concerning the relationship bits between Alex and Oliver, I do dub this the good ship Lonely Garden. May it sail forevermore. Since I had to give up my Cloudy Day ship a couple of chapters ago.
I wonder... The abrupt incorporation of another fundamental force may have had more effects beyond making existence lethal to humanity. The universe has always been passively hostile towards us. Beyond our world, it will either freeze or fry us, and it's only a matter of time before an untimely ice age or meteor impact kills us in our planetary cradle. Could that cosmic indifference have awakened into true antipathy? True Odium?
Probably not. The cultists seem to be Equestrian, carrying some sinister force with them. And it doesn't seem like their goal is possible. They may be able to tear down a few cities, but they aren't going to cause human extinction. Their numbers are too few, their lives too short. The sheer number of people and the time spans involved would require countless generations of sabotage. Sure, they might disrupt things at the beginning, but the race would live on... though the memory might not. Maybe that's what they want.
(Sure, they may decry alicorns, but their philosophy is twisted enough to open wine bottles. They could definitely make this hypocrisy work.)
Oh. Or they just want a Nightmare to support their cause. Freaking duh.
In any case, while I respect Oliver's determination to uphold the Hippocratic Oath, Alex had best make some contingency plan. This could go sour in any number of ways.
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Alex is too friggin cute, 'nuff said.
I was thinking, and we've had an chapter for every Alexandria founding member, and one for the little girl. Will you keep going after Oliver's? Will there be a new story? Will Alex become even cuter?!?
Only the future shall tell... I hope soon XD
6332079 Nice plan, but what would that do to the Library? Would it just be suppressed? Or would the contents be lost?
Adrian managed to shoot up some of his attackers before being subdued? At the very least that should impact the negotiations, and possibly in a positive way. They need Oliver's cooperation at this point.
Ahh, great, so they're anti-alicorn revolutionaries come to spread freedom to another world. Ehh, I think I would have preferred Nightmare cultists, at least that type would have been reliably crazy.
That sounds like a major hint as to what Alex's Concept is. The living history of humanity?
Holy crap dude, and you do have that right? How, exactly?
No, wait, I was wrong, these guys are definitely crazy.
Dang.
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Such adorable angryness!
Oliver, you better not get yourself killed.
Alex shall now be known as Ivy.
So when do they get to sing Princess Archive cometh?
Remember Nightmare Moon isn't the only Equestrian villain who is now without corporeal form, there's also King Sombra.
Edited for spelling.
Archive... wow. As Riley 'said': these kind of names have power. A true alicorn name.
And mind control over satellite phone? Damn... and I'm not sure it's a positive development that Oliver just broke the 'fearless leader' facade. Bad timing I'd say. Then again, 'fight for what you are'.
That kind of cuteness is also borderline mind control. Just saying.
... Adrian's not the only hostage they have...
On the plus side, Angry Day is Adorable.
Alex isn't your girlfriend, Oliver. You don't need to worry about that... yet. (Shipping because shipping.)
6332652 The cute little mare with the power to erase you from ever have been known. No knowledge of you to exist, no one to have known you, or to have existed in memory. You will be nothing, not even a past memory. Not even dust to mark your passing from existence.
6332725 Hm... Master.... slaves.... yea this does have a Sombra vibe. Seem like since he lost his old empire he plan to rebuild it in this new world.
So it's definitely confirmed: There's a force of Equestrian origin running the show here, and I doubt it's pony in origin. (And it appears to legitimately hate changelings, rather than have an instinctive revulsion towards them.) Conjecture: If Equus has an avatar of Chaos, does it also have an avatar of Entropy? Because the two are not the same thing....
If I ship those two any harder I'll start belting My Heart Will Go On.
...no wait that's a terrible idea considering the circumstances
There's the ship...
Alright, so we have crazy ass hypocritical idiots, great, just great...
Okay, QUESTION, dear leader, here's the thing, if you DISAGREE with this whole interfering with the humans thing, you hate humans and all... WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU INTERFERING WITH THEM RIGHT NOW?!
You went to all this fucking bother, making flaming dragons, transporting dimensions, getting others enslaved, ALL in order to... what? Some crazy ass devil religion?!
And Oliver... you are just that good guy, I REALLY FUCKING HATE, sorry, there is this one story I know, the big theme of it is lying and truth and all that, and despite SO MANY TIMES the bad guy had lied to them, they still be this dumbass doctor who tries to help them through medicine.
Your admirable... but a reeaaally big idiot right now.
Urg...
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Anyway, assholes trying to kill a kid, don't even know that they all used to be human, or don't care, they just... are assholes.
Next chapter better kick these guys to the curb.
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daaaaaaaaaw. Alex tries to be serious and int intimidating but completely fails in every possible way.
I'd say the way instance I've seen of a pony even coming close to being intimidating is Steelhooves from Fallout: Equestria.
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This here is not like that at all. Alex is just coming off as adorable.
Quick question. Who the buck is Odium???
I love this story, but I hate that a situation like this would come to be. Guess I'm a softie...
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It hasn't been revealed yet. We don't know.
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Tried to watch that series, really did. It was so gross, though. Couldn't get past season two.
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I'm sure she's in desperate need of stress-relief, that's true. Though she seems a little more resourceful than to get caught that way. Seems like she'd have taken more precautions, with her personality. I can understand from your explanation how people took it the way they did, though. And they might not be wrong; who am I to say? The scene only started after the door opened. I was writing Oliver's perspective, so I didn't get to see it either X.x
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Odium Forgives
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All of Alex's ponies, broken again. She's going to have to put them together again.
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Me too! X.x One of those traits I really wish I didn't share with my characters, that's for sure.
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Oh, there is. Several different ones, I'm sure.
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Galurung
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Might be something to do with medicine being his special talent. Or maybe it's an earth pony thing. Probably a mixture of both.
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Yeah, intimidation isn't generally Alex's style. She either does something or she doesn't, no pressuring people in-between. It's all or nothing with her.
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Kill, though? I dunno if we've seen her do anything violent like that. Or any trace of violent thoughts. She doesn't fantasize about harming the people who annoy her, at least, not in the journal. Unless I've forgotten something. Though I remember in the last story she did say something like looking forward to "rubbing Moriah's face in how wrong she was." I don't think that was a physical thing, though.
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http://lotr.wikia.com/wiki/Huan
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My fault, not the artist. I chose a code with real-world connections. I used pigpen in the last story, so I used the zodiac in this one.
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I talked about past sins in my response, so I'm glad you said not to so I could edit it out. I really like the audio version of that story. Not many brony stories have good audio versions, but that one really does.
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We just have an unfair sample, because we got the ponies who came back the fastest. The most pony-like of all, the most like the bodies they'd been sorted into. Lots of them seem like they're probably a pretty good fit. Probably it won't stay that way forever, though.
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There will be! Well, an explanation, anyway. I don't presume to judge good or not good, but it isn't something I haven't thought of.
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I'm sure the face we're seeing is only the one they want us to see. I won't spoil anything about what's really going on, though. We'll just have to see it all play out.
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It might be ponies are just naturally selfless! Well, except Moriah. I don't think there's anything "selfless" in what she was thinking about doing.
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I might enjoy it. Maybe a little. >.>
Also, all the questions in the comments make sure I don't let any information slip by. Since I write the story along with the comments, ponies can stop me from screwing up. Not that I'll ever admit I used a comment suggestion, even though I do all the time >.>
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We've got some smart ponies. I wouldn't underestimate their ability to come up with the really useful ideas.
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Me neither! There are so many side stories right now, lots of them exploring themes I'd never even considered! I read several of them myself... I never thought anyone would want anything like that. I just thought I was writing a cute little story about journals.
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Oh, I'm sure it will go sour. Murphy's Law would be a great name for a pony. Maybe that should've been Alex's pony name...
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There will be a third story! This story is going to end after Alex's section, and possibly a short epilogue. The next story, the last in the trilogy, is going to probably star Alex alone, rather than changing perspectives all the time, and take place about four years after this story ends. That's what I plan on right now, anyway. We're getting to see the initial aftermath, then we'll get to see the first signs of long-term stability.
After that, I guess we'll see. I plan on using that story to explore the future of the universe, both because I'm curious to see it myself and because I want to give other writers inspiration for what hey might do with the vastness of future time (10,000 years vast in fact) ahead of the returning human race.
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Alex would be really angry then!
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Ivy would be a great nickname! If... she wasn't already Lonely Day, that is. Would have worked with her color scheme and everything. Sadly, the name was taken by a character way cooler. #Ivybesthuman2015
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She ain't no princess! Alex works for a living!
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Too bad it wouldn't work on Odium. Alex doesn't seem like the sort of pony to abuse her cuteness even if she could Now Riley, on the other hand. IF she thought she could get some love out of it...
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Now that ain't right! Alex ain't old enough for that! Er... I guess she's still twenty-three mentally, or... Maybe? It's hard to tell. She acts like a kid sometimes.
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One can only hope she ends up more balanced than her namesake. No losing her life and being erased by the identity of her responsibility. I hope. That would be an unfortunate fate for her.
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It is true, Odium is not chaos. Harmony might have an opposite in chaos, or it might not. Does that make Odium the opposite of friendship?
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Next chapter? Ehh, maybe, maybe not.
I can say that if anypony does anything to Oliver, or any of her ponies, Alex is going to be really upset. And very likely to act swiftly and decisively. The hard part is that she could prevent it if she could get Oliver to act rationally. But while she was willing to help for Adrian to get medical care, she won't force Oliver not to give it to somepony.
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I'm sure somewhere in her mind, Alex still imagines her "true" self, who was probably more intimidating to glare at things. That true self is gone now, though, transforming more and more every day into a form more pony. Eventually she's bound to realize it. At that point, she'll... probably have to come up with something else.
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We know very little about it. It's some sort of powerful being that can influence the minds of ponies even from a distance. We know the word odium means hatred (but more complex than just hating something). We know its been telling ponies to do things all over the continent.
We don't know what it is, yet. When the main characters figure it out, we will too.
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Yeah, I was debating going this way with the story at all. Ultimately I decided that the interpersonal drama of Alexandria alone really wasn't enough to carry the story. In the last story, we didn't really see any evil. The Equestrians and the HPI and the other survivors might've been flawed and misguided, but nobody was really bad. Everyone was being nice and trying to help each other and live together as best they knew how.
I felt it would paint an unrealistic picture if that was the case forever. There is evil out there. Sooner or later, the characters were going to rub up against it.
Except the third story to have more of the peaceful feeling through most of it, if that helps. I hate putting my characters through what's coming for them as much as people hate reading it. But their struggles have to be genuine.
I suppose princess of the book learning is a little less dangerously specific.
One must exercise care lest you be princess of the sun rather than princess of the sun.
...Welp, I know how to fix this.
1. Find a spaceship.
2. Ask Equestria for the Elements of Harmony.
3.Cannibalize a satellite.
4. FIRE!!!!!
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The night is not his to speak of...
6331944 I still say that three of the four Chaos God's would adore Changelings - Tseeszh would like their racial dishonesty, Slaanesh the whole destructive love vampirism angle, and Nurgle the way they look like enormous cockroaches. Only Khorne would be ambivalent, and given that the overwhelming majority of canon appearances of them have been in the midst of bloody handed invasion and brutal conquest, you've at least 50/50 odds of sweeping the table for the proposition "Chaos Gods love Changelings".
Me, I'm going with the theory that Odium is some sort of abstraction of anti-life, like the Nightmare in Contraptionology.
This Odium stuff is bad news. Also, fuck their changeling-phobia.
Odium is codename for their stash of Opium.
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Oooooh! Do you think they might have some marijuana too?
Is Odium a form of the Latin word for fear? "Odium Forgives" seems to be in the same vein as Oderint dum metuant ("Let them hate, so long as they fear"), the personal motto of the Roman Emperor Caligula.
You know what, I got a fridge logic moment about this and the last chapter, it doesn't make sense that they take four plus hours to arrive to Paris IL from Philadelphia. They are supposedly traveling in a supersonic jet, probably one that can travel way faster than the speed of sound considering what it's using as it's energy source, and the speed of sound is roughly 767 miles per hour while the distance between those two cities is 747 miles by car according to Google maps so they would have had to have being able to get there at the most in less than an hour.
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Lol!!!
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Lol!!!
Hey that's not the Hippocratic oath, that's part of the Wizard's oath!
Considering how similar the world's of MLP and the Young Wizards series. I'm sad that I haven't found crossovers of the two.
reminds me of the Archive character in the Dresden Files books. she knows EVERYTHING that has EVER been written down. including all magic spells. she once fought SIX of the nastiest monsters in the books at once, and would have won if they hadn't surrounded the entire building with an anti-magic field that eventually made her run out of energy.