Equestrian Ant-Man

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Scott Lang works to redeem himself by doing missions for Princess Celestia, while being lead by Hank Pym, creator of the Pym Particle. (Two-Shot)

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Issue #1 - Second Chance Man (Part 1) · 8th Jul 2015 · 1,237 words
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Issue #2 - Second Chance Man (Part 2) · 8th Jul 2015 · 1,115 words
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re- Yamsmos

re- Yamsmos #1 · Jul 8th, 2015 · · · Issue #1 - Second Chance Man (Part 1) ·

Say it once I'll say it again these are like the exact same helmets.

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Blondlionezel

Blondlionezel #2 · Jul 8th, 2015 · · · Issue #1 - Second Chance Man (Part 1) ·

6180501 What is that thing?

re- Yamsmos

re- Yamsmos #3 · Jul 8th, 2015 · · · Issue #1 - Second Chance Man (Part 1) ·

6180506 Elite Riot Gear helmet from Fallout: New Vegas. Your Antman helmet looks a lot like it and its variants in the game. And there are like seven different variants.

Blondlionezel

Blondlionezel #4 · Jul 8th, 2015 · · · Issue #1 - Second Chance Man (Part 1) ·

6180510 I've never played any of the Fallout games Though the helmet I chose was because it looks like the MCU Ant-Man, who is my favorite Ant-Man, Scott Lang.

Thunderbolt Sentinel

Thunderbolt Sentinel #5 · Dec 2nd, 2015 · · · Issue #2 - Second Chance Man (Part 2) ·

6180501 So true.

Rainbow Potato Cake

Rainbow Potato Cake #6 · May 14th, 2016 · · · Issue #2 - Second Chance Man (Part 2) ·

It wasn't especially bad or anything, the problem is that it wasn't very good. It was just kind of, well, meh. It had an interesting premise, but the story felt rushed, and the grammar could use some work. Keep improving though, and you'll be writing top-notch stories in no time!

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