I'm a huge fan of some actually good cartoons, such as Animaniacs, Freakazoid, Tiny toons, Scooby Doo, Pokemon, Pinkie and The Brain, MLP, and all other good cartoons, back when tv was actually good
When a human thug with an uncanny resemblance to Toby commits a crime, and switches places with him, Toby is wrongfully thrown in prison. However, his trouble doubles when his counterpart takes the place of Toby, in order to get closer to the Princess's and Silver Spoon jewelry. Can Toby stop his double before his good name is tarnished?
Co-written by Crash Bandicoot
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Based on Muppets Most Wanted
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Good story!
Where's the second chapter?
6212496 Working on it
Isn't is supposed to be, "most of all Toby"?
What's so dark about this story?
6212714 Hmm, you're right, I will make the changes
Isn't Toby 8 years old in these stories?
6216095 I lost track, so I'm making him 10 years old in this story
To make him 10, he would need to have that birthday at the second chapter at this story before the stallion comes.
6217657 But what if was 10 prior to this story?
He was 9 in A New Home 4, so he should be 10 in this story.
6218935 And in Birthday Bonanza, he turned 10
Oh. OK. How should George steal the jewelry?
6219509 Well, he has Bowser doing all sorts of stunts in a bodysuit laced with a mirroring substance, while George distracts everyone at the party
Will Ashley and Fluttershy be heartbroken after George does not spend time with them like Toby does?
How should George get back to Toby's family before they realize he's missing?
6221934 He goes back through the house an hour before Fluttershy wakes up
6219548 Yeah, they will
Can I work in this fanfiction with you?
6225394 You can, but you'll need to explain to me what we'll do
OK. After Toby's family hear that "George" is back in prison, they celebrate in Canterlot Castle. The real George asks Pinkie Pie to find the party favors and she accepts. When he leaves, he goes to a bank with Bowser. He starts destroying a wall nearby the bank with an pickaxe. George and Bowser steal the paintings but set off alarms. Before escaping, Bowser leaves a coin with a turtle on it in the floor. George returns to Pinkie with the party favors, telling her that he had to take some pauses dragging them all by himself, and he parties with the others while Bowser goes to their hideout. The next morning, Doctor Hooves and Flash Sentry try to find who stole the paintings. After they find out that they don't know who, Toby's family wakes up in their castle and read their newspaper. The CMC and "Toby" decide to go to Ponyville to have fun. George does some strange things such as being scared by Lyra, grabs Depry's falling muffin before it falls to the floor and gives it to her, and asks Vinyl Scratch why she likes being so loud. The three fillies gives each other confused looks, as Apple Bloom asks her "little brother" if he's alright. George responds that he's fine until a scream is heard. The three fillies and human boy rush back to the castle seeing that Rarity is crying that she lost Opal. "Toby" volunteers to find the cat.
6225849 Ok, but as for the police, I was thinking of using Gilda, Greta, Iron Will, Shade and Will as the investigators. But for the other stuff, I think I can work with it
Maybe I can put more chapters in your story with permission?
6227102 I don't know how that works
I just gave you the full idea fro Chapter 3. You also listed the characters and roles they will have in the story.
6227398 Ok, and I had the most awesome brainstorm; Bowser Nate will introduce himself to the family as a host for an event that none of the mane 6 can resist, including animal meet and greet for Fluttershy, Fashion Expo for Rarity, Daring Do exhibits for Rainbow and Twilight, etc.
6227667 They'll all tag along as well
About chapter 6, everyone will go to their favorite spots and party while George and Bowser steal the key by smashing every statue from the statue room. The next morning will have the police investigators trying to find evidence until they realize the Mane 6, the human adults, the children of harmony, "Toby", the other children, and the fillies are involved with the crime since their party/event was next to the crime scene. They ask them questions and they find out none of them do it until they decide to question further Nyx.
6229053 Ok, I got everything except that last part with Nyx, could you explain to me in steps?
When the police investigators are done questioning everyone else, they still are questioning Nyx what happened to the stolen paintings and the statues. They are suspicious of her since she was part of Nightmare Moon.
6229527 Ah, ok
>>darkmage1997 In the fifth and sixth chapters, "Toby" does some strange things with his family, causing them to be confused by his behavior. Meanwhile, the real Toby tries to get the mole off his cheek but fails. He then plans on to escape the prison. In a secret room, George watches Toby on TV to make better impressions of him.
6229564 Ok
What should Chapter 4 be called?
6230516 I'm just gonna call it "The Big House"
6231680 OK. And Chapter 5?
6232846 Not sure yet, but I'll possibly call it "The Expo Begins"
My second story has started!
6233279 I will have to read it some time soon
6233443 Well, I don't know when college starts for me, but school is starting that early?
Obviously, yes. And since school is happening, it might give us less time to do our fanfictions here. It will be slower than before.
6233596 Yeah
"Cried" is past tense. You should have put, "As he starting crying".
6236166 Whoops, I'll go ahead and fix that
6236673 Ok
Is the fifth chapter coming in three days?
6241338 I doubt it'll be done that quick