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BlueSkyHeadLeft010


Hey there! I like to write stuff, sometimes... Don't take my work too seriously, just enjoy it. ^^; [I also write non-pony stories on Ao3~!]

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Well great.
One minute I'm playing a video game on my computer, and then next I'm suddenly standing next to my town's Sonic drive thru and i'm a freaking Pegasus.
I want answers. And if I still had hands that'd be great.
Strangely everyone is gone, and all I have are the annoying woodland creatures for company.
Guess life could be worse though. Wait, what do you mean I can't eat meat?!

An official Side Story to "The Last Pony On Earth"

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Hmm, quite interesting, this is. Write more, you must. Or find you, I will. And end you, I will also. Keep Yoda waiting, you should not!

I was just having long discussions on intelligent animals that were never transformed humans, Deer being one of the prime examples. Nice to see others had the same idea!

This seems interesting.... :yay:

Interesting start. I'm wondering, though, where is this story located? Other than the east coast (based on the timezone).

Oh my, another one!?!?

Please add to the summary a statement declaring if this is an official or unofficial side story!!!

And are we sure it's still 2015?

Some issues - that may be resolved.
'freezer' - unless they've come across one maintained by ponies, freezers are unlikely to be running.

Not I guess impossible in principle - if the store has a _lot_ of solar panels to run all their freezers and AC during the day, it might just cope, if you assume a slightly unusual inverter setup and everything failing just right.

But - canned meat works just as well in this case.

Secondly - Ipad will need charged after a couple of months, though it may retain the time once charged.

If the Sonic for some reason has power during the day from solar, I guess both of these issues would be fixed.

'It has lots of solar panels on the roof, and a 'we get all daytime energy from the sun' poster'' - perhaps?

A base with power, and preserved food would be really handy.
Though dumping most of the chilled aisle might be annoying.

GPL

Well grate.

ftfy

Now... Can somebody tell me why we're starting with this grated well?

One minute I'm playing a video game on my computer, and then next I'm suddenly standing next to my town's Sonic drive thru and i'm a freaking Pegasus.

Teleporting to your local Sonic Drive-thru alerted you to your... full transformation into a Pegasus? Wow.

I want answers.

Number One is A and so is Number Four. Three is B, but I'm sort of stuck on Number Two myself...

And if I still had hands that'd be great.

Hands are pretty great, aren't they?

Strangely everyone is gone, and all I have are the annoying woodland creatures for company.

Don't worry, Phallusus, soon they too will leave you to die.

Guess life could be worse though. Wait, what do you mean I can't eat meat?!

My Little Pony is of the traditional persuasion.

Your average store is going to need quite a large generator indeed.
You're not going to be able to load it into a cart, and pull it.
And the fuel to keep it running several weeks is going to be quite noticable, and also not very portable.
Also, no store is going to keep a generator fuelled for a month.

This pony needs to preen his/her wings. ( i can't remember the gender of the character right now)

Raiding the stores for all the games? :pinkiecrazy: Maybe this character is related to me...

Huh... I found this on the 27th. Chrony that.

Bluey became big dog, huh? Good for him. Nice little pack to keep her company.

The buck snorted at me as he tilted his head up and jerked the shovel from my grip, sending it flying. It dropped a few yards away, but frankly I was too terrified to act. He locked eyes with me and stared for what seemed like eternity; his gaze boring into mine and mine flicking back and forth anxiously.

He finally let out a noise like a sigh as he shook his head and then walked off. The other deer looked up and began to follow him as I just stared shocked at what had happened. Bluey came down to check on me soon after, as I just remained frozen for a good twenty minutes.

Mr. Deer is having none of your crap. That was a firm lecture from an adult to an unruly youth. Kids these days. When he was a fawn, he would get his rump kicked for that kind of behaviour. XD

Glad to see this is still being updated.

I've expanded my idea of Deer quite a bit since my last comment. One of the key points is that there are a lot of Deer in the US. Over 30 million alone. That's a very large number, especially if they are sapient, just lacking language (for the moment), and they'll probably outnumber ponies and their descendants for a long time, probably at least a thousand years, if not more.

Based on the title, I can't help but wonder if you are going to move the story in a direction of the MC becoming friends with them. I'd hate to see such early racism though, just cause they never talked before now. He has never flown before now either, but you don't see the Deer hatin'.

Yay, there was an update! :pinkiehappy: Finally... :twilightangry2: But glad it came.

That deer part though... "You're supposed to run! Not fight back!" Yeah, what a shocker that'd be...

Maybe they have been secretly plotting to overthrow humanity in one swift act over all these years? :twilightoops: I take it they won't like finding their brethren's skulls mounted on our walls...

We feel....so sorry for you, you sad little pony.

Sincerely, The Deer.


If the deer manages to comprehend written language, and left a note saying that, I would laugh.

Still, I do admire the fact that this is the first story so far to see deer advance into a sentient species in a fairly decent-length encounter. Bravo. I'll have to think about this in my story....

First people vanishing, now sapient deer?!?

Count your blessings, if it'd been a dumb animal, it wouldn't have stopped at a stern warning. :fluttershysad:

This story's cute. :yay: If you're bothered about the idea that a store's backup generator would be too big to transport, hardware stores always have portable generators.

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