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Sunset Shimmer loves Twilight Sparkle. Twilight was her first friend, the first one to forgive her. And yet Sunset rarely sees her. She misses her dearly.

This feeling in Sunset's heart soon turned to love, and nothing could stop this love from growing stronger. But a simple mistake, a misinterpreted exchange of words, could be all that is needed to stop it from blossoming.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 47 )

But Sunlight is such a great ship! :heart: Sorry, I'm not a big TwiDash person!

6172105 w-What do you mean? Why are you mentioning Twidash?

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This is my first story to feature SunLight, and most of my followers have mentioned how great I am at a TwiDash ship, and that is the reason they follow me.

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I agree! However, I am a big TwiDash person :rainbowwild:

6172584 I like both.(I stopped liking individual ships to increase the amount of stories I can read. I now proudly have an almost fully read favorites folder with 6 million 8 hundred thousand words, and an estimated reading time of 2 weeks 5 days.)

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:rainbowhuh: someone likes my work...

:pinkiegasp: Someone likes my work.

:twilightsmile: This pleases me.

6243597 August my friend... it shall come in August

6386337 Lol, I will try to live up to that quota you've established...

Oh wow. Sunset has wings. I can't wait to read more.

6386425 Lol! PLOT TWIST

Also, if you don't mind, can you try to put that bit in spoiler block?

6386432 Oh sorry. I didn't know how to do that but never mind. I did it.

6386438 Um... like... how you did it?

6386450 Yes I figured it out with the edit bar. And I finally figured out how to reply.

6386456 =D There ya' go! I knew you could do it!

6386467 But yes. I love where this is going and I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you'll update soon.

This is off to an interesting start. I'll track it and see how it plays out for a bit.

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the alicorn thing caught my review sense off guard

6489285 Ahhhh... The almighty

REVIEW SENSES...

I forgot I had this story on Tracking and I had to re-read it to figure out what the hell was going on. Also....

PLOT TWIST TO THE MAX!!!

That was actually a more appropriate punishment than her becoming her human self. That was a little too harsh. I like where this is going. Keep up the good work.

I like it, my other problems like the punishment have been improved. Although I do think Sunset should've been allowed to keep her wings. This could lead to a moment with her being taught how to fly by Twilight. But this is just a minor nit pick. I love how you kept everything else like Sunset with that little bit of evil still inside of her. Also like I said before I'm fine with this different Celestia. So overall good job and a little bit better than the previous attempt. Keep at this story and I cannot wait for it to continue

That was so funny! I actually thought it would be like HIV or cancer.

No offense, but this is "tribalist." As the Season 4 Finale has shown us, sapping ponies of magic takes away all their cutie marks and abilities as well as making them super weak. Earth ponies are not magicless; they have strength, ability interact with the land itself, and probably a ton of other skills that the show has yet to capitalize on; in the Season 4 Finale, Earth ponies that lost their powers could no longer farm or buck. Taking away magic doesn't make ponies lose body parts; the pegasi and unicorns and alicorns simply lost the ability to fly or use magic, but they looked the same just without their cutie marks.

Also, the fact that Celestia can so easily take away a pony's powers, even that of a fellow alicorn, is worrying and makes her drift toward Tyrant-Celestia.

7256101 Uhhhhh... fair point. I guess that was proven... dammit... I just re-wrote this too...

Also... OOC Celestia is OOC for a reason

7256115 Cool! If she's meant to be OOC, this is gonna get interesting! :trollestia:
Anyways, still a decent story, and I'm tracking it!

7256128 Cool, and thanks for the follow!

( You got me to 69 dude xD )

good story, i be wait for mroe

I'm glad you finally updated. I hope there'll be more soon.

Is this story on Equestria Daily?

Heeeeeeey!

Good to see this back. :pinkiehappy:

"N-no!" she said quickly. "No pony can see me like this!"

she said, standing in the middle of an Earth Pony town.

Damn, Sunset, racist much? I mean, I could buy that it's just body dysphoria if you hadn't just spent five years as an ape.

7940964 Dunno. That would be a nice surprise if it was :pinkiegasp:

7941417 Glad to finally get it back!

Ha Sunlight Fans is even more upset SHE DIDN'T EVEN GET TO CONFESS! Though you are forgiven🤣 for this is a Sunlight fic after all

Hahaha that was hilarious but not unexpected for someone with a teens mindset🤣 an alicorn sunset plus a sunlight fic well this series just got even more awesome 🎉🥳

Well she did kind of came home to conquer if given a chance😏 Conquer Twilight's Heart!🤣

Nooo COME BACK MORE PLEASE🙏😭

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