<---- Drawn by mix-up. All I have to say is disappearing is easier when its a crowd of people that are exactly like you.
Isaac is a nice person to nice people that is how he is, however he isn't to pleased with him and his companions having to watch over the entirety of the main six and to be more specific twilight sparkle. Why did the princess decide to send twilight and friends into hiding, why does Isaac agree to it in the first place, Who is making dinner tonight because Isaac is a horrible cook. Find out next time on Fimfiction.
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We are interested in this start, though wonder if the story will reveal more as to how this came to be. Or even why the royal sisters would allow technically a 'ambassador' or his species to be out in a hostile environment instead of in canterlot to be watched after and learned of?
For foreign relations would start off poorly if say the last human who came ended up dead, or hearing of poisoning attempts/etc.
6167417 And that was the reaction I was hoping for and as for why he isn't in canterlot and/or why he's in the badlands will be explained in later chapters of course. Anyway thanks for commenting and reading I hope to make this story one worth your time.
So far this is pretty good, i do wish you explained who certainty people where a bit more. Like i have a feeling i know who Luca is but i am not sure and things like that.
But hey! I cant judge, still much better then my stuff
Edit: Nevermind, i dont know who Luca is
6169422 Who'd you think she was originally? I'm asking out of curiosity, and as for explaining characters I was planning on having chapters dedicated to when they first meet Isaac early on such as Luca's next. Anyway thank you for reading and commenting I hope to make this worth your time.
Oh and I just read your story or what is out now by the way and I like it just have to work at it and i can tell it will be a good read.
Been a while since I last played New Vegas, so all I really remember is the Bomber guys with Mortars, hiding in an old air-base.
And now, isaac turns into nightmare isaac. Mwuhuhuhuhuhu!
6192381 Gotta love them. Even when they try to kill you on your way to meet them.
6192579 Yes, Isaac shall be the villain of villains the shadow in shadows, that cannibal trying to eat one of my hands right now, bad Isaac. Anyway glad to see you're enjoying the story, and I can't wait to write more so until then (insert inspirational and/or funny saying here)
It gets more interesting every chapter.
more please!
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you actually think that? I don't know what to say except I'm happy you're enjoying this. Every time I write a chapter I get worried that it will ruin the story, but I guess that I haven't yet, eh. Anyway thank you for taking the time to read and I hope to keep this story interesting for you.
6196369 i look forward to it! Keep up the good work. And dont worry if it might ruin the story. If is sounds right to you, then it will not ruin it.
More please!
Its good to know how 'kind' silvers old tribe can be when they think they are lied to.
6199860 This was the specific type of chapter I was referring to earlier when I said I was worried of ruining the story. I'm just going to be direct about this so thank you so much for the confidence boost that helped me write this chapter I really appreciate it, and as I seem to have an obsession with saying I hope to make this worth your time.
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allways happy to help!
Yay! Its good to see that you are explaining how the group came together instead of just rushing to continue with their current situation, while at the same time moving the story onwards in the plot.
(sounded much better in my head...)
more please!
6203771 Thank you. I always intended to go into their history together, but since I come up with the ideas as I write it makes it a little bit difficult to fit in their history at the right points instead of just shoving all of it into a chapter especially since they were gathered over time instead of at once. Also it sounded good outside your head too, but that could just be the fact you were complimenting my writing. Anyway thank you for reading another chapter of this story, and I'm excited to write another one for ya.
6204411 i look forward to it!
I have but one question.
when will the next chapter come out?
6207454 It shall come eventually, I might try to write the next chapter later today if I don't get distracted but I'm not making any promises. Also I'm glad to see you're still enjoying the story it makes me feel pretty good knowing that I can get someone to enjoy what I think up. Anyway glad to talk to ya again, and I hope to continue to keep writing chapters you will enjoy.
6208058 .
Zombies! Yay!
more please!
6211189 viva la dark magic! I'll write more eventually so don't worry I'll get it done and hopefully keep up whatever it seems you enjoy about the story. (Seriously I have no idea, what the heck is it?) Anyway as I keep saying thank you for your comment and I hope to cotinue making this worth your time.
6212341 what is it i like abo6t the story?
we... thats for me to know, and fo no one to find out.
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but I want to know because of reasons. Well I guess I'm just going to have too keep writing and hope I keep doing whatever it is that makes you want to read this. Also Just a heads up I wont be posting a chapter tonight or the morning, sorry but I have something important to do tomorrow and I got to get up early for it so again I'm sorry 
6214230 you dont have to worry about it! Poste it when you want to poste it! Who ares about a small delay?
6215260 you'd be surprised at who does and I do hate it when I am caught up with something. Luckily though I've found away that I can go ahead and work on the chapter as well as deal with what I need to so it will be up in a few hours, hopefully.
EDIT: maybe longer actually. This chapter is going to take awhile if I get it right.
6215496 im sure it will be a good chapter! Take as long as you need!
6215596 well I certainly hope so considering which chapter it is, before I forget I want to thank you especially for taking your time to read this story and staying while I wrote it. Thank you and I hope to see you next time because I've still got ideas and I'll get started on one of them a day or so after this is completed.
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no thanks required for me!
6215611 yes there is because if you hadn't come along I wouldn't have worked so hard to make this story good because I wasn't getting a response that I could understand. So again thank you for reading and keeping me in good spirits as I wrote this.
6215624 [repeat oof previous comment] every one needs support every now and then. Nd im happy to have helped!
great chapter by the way!
6216856 I'm still grateful for your support and I'm happy to have provided a story you enjoyed and I hope to provide many more.
6217105 Oh I got a lot more ideas some are more adventures, some are slice of life, and there is one in particular I have in mind that I'm holding off on that is... wait it's a secret! how dare you try to get me to reveal it to you through my rambling!
6217459 darn! So close!
Sequel?
6221529 I wasn't planning on writing a sequel originally, but that doesn't mean there wont be one I just have to come up with a basic idea for that story. With that I thank you for reading and hope to bring you many more stories you will enjoy!
6222124 Well, as long as there's a chance of a return from the Freelancer Contingency Unit, I'll be content.
Also, just as a heads-up, you've set yourself a minimum standard with this fic. Every one after it has to at least match its quality.
Surpassing it is an unnecessary precedent, but is always welcome, but if you do a worse fic, you'll lose watchers hell-western-crooked.
I'm not trying to intimidate or dissuade you, just letting you know the worst possible scenario, short of getting shut down by an admin'.
6222153 Really I set a standard? I didn't think I wrote this story very well whenever I go back over it, but that could just be my self esteem trying to be a butt again. Oh and i didn't say they would never return I'm making them like mascots so they will occasionally come back for specials probably as one shots though. Also as for the worst possible scenario I follow a certain philosophy of assume the worst but hope for the best. Anyway thank you again for reading and I hope to make more stories you will enjoy and with that I hope to see you next time.
6222408 First fic sets a standard expected from you, but if you feel this isn't the best it could be, then good.
You will strive to be better, meaning the only viable outcome from you is improvement.
On the topic of personal philosophies, mine is 'Plans are an invitation to disappointment, but guidelines are necessary'
6222428 A wise philosophy to follow. I know this is setting the standard on what I can do which is probably why I'm looking at it as worse then it could be since everyone wants to put there bet foot forward and all. That reminds me though if you don't mind my asking what did you like about the story exactly? If you don't wish to answer just say so I'm just curios as to what my strengths here are and what I need to focus on more.
6223466 I liked the progressive nature of it and, despite the length, the 'flow' of the story, given how consistent it was.
The characters were also likeable in their... uniqueness.
6224323 Thank you, the flow of the story was actually one of the things I was most worried about thinking. At one point I thought I was making it take too long then another I felt I was rushing it and now I'm rambling sorry about that. again thank you for taking your time to answer my question.
This is an interesting story, but work on your grammar and punctuation. Also, break up your sentences more, and work on your pacing, don't stuff so much information into a whole paragraph....
6293020 Thank you for the assistance!
Lovin the story so far.
Interesting group of companies you put together.
6215624 This story is short but, it's still pretty good. It progresses in the present while showing the past.
It keeps the readers on the edge of their seats.
6581362 Been awhile since anyone commented on this story. Thank you for the compliments, and I know it's...not the best. I've been trying to improve with my other stories so maybe you'll like them even more. Thanks for commenting and I'll see you later.
This is pretty good for it being your first fan fic story.
I will definitely fav this story. Also you got another follower.
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Really? well, thank you. I don't know what else to say so...Try another one of my stories? I don't know, thanks again though.