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WingsPony


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Wings, is a one winged pegasus, she was forced to live with her grandmother in Canterlot. After falling out of Cloudsdale for the second time. This is a story about the struggles that Wings goes through due to her disability. Follow her journal entries to see what this crazy things this little pegasus will do next!

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I'm really sorry to say this but this story seems a little confusing to me.... But continue!

I like the way you just sorta slipped in that this was set in the past with the Octavia reference. Good story. One small (really small) criticism: You need some kind of visual break to seperate what she's writing from what she's doing. The transition at the end confused me a little, otherwise it was a nice story.

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Thank you! I know I do need to fix that small problem. I'm kind of new at this so I haven't figured out how to do that :twilightsheepish:

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