A fluttercord story

by Koya mai

chapter 1: prologue

Long ago lived a king and a queen in a magnificent castle, their names were Celestia and Sombra. They were kind, gentle rulers who treated everyone equally, except 1. Discord. Discord was the spirit of chaos and disharmony he was a creature made up of all sorts of animals, he had a grey head of a pony, yellow eyes with red pupils, a goat beard. A lion paw on the right, an eagle claw on the left. A brown serpent like body, a cloven hoof on the left, a lizard leg on the right, and a red snake tail with fluff at the end. And on his head he had a goat horn and an antler. He was banished for trying to overthrow the king and the queen with magic, but did not succeed. So now he lives his life in the Everfree forest waiting to get his revenge.

Author's Note:

Hello everypony, this is my first story EVER written so I hope my story will go well. Hopefully haha! Thank u for reading and I'll continue soon!

Comments

[ChaosQueen]

I wonder did Discord try to overthrow Queen Celestia and King Sombra because he's evil or because they didn't treat him equally.

[Scooter Dracon]

Good so far!!

[Enchanted Tails]

except 1. Discord

except one, Discord.

It should be written like that