♪ Kingdom of ships around me and it looks like I'm the queen ♫
When Twilight is preoccupied by her duties as organizer for Ponyville, Spike is asked to fulfill an errand for her in her absence. However, when the errand spirals into a series of bartering and favors, Spike fears he might never get the task done on time!
Will Spike be able to finish his quest and be a hero for Twilight?
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Nicely done.
It's good to see things occasionally falling a little more in Spike's direction for once (though I personally will argue that despite Princess Spike's overt statements to the contrary, Spike did astonishing well in that episode considering; and having just watched through season four, it actually was pretty good to him, actually...)
I like SpikeBelle better.
Well done! It was quite enjoyable to read. It also seems like Spike would be most likely to interact with background characters for some reason.
I take it you're a fan of Silver Quill?
I would consider this Princess Spike done right if it weren't for one major thing holding it back. Sure, it's pretty humorous, and unlike the episode, nothing felt especially contrived. The problem is, well, there's no moral. Spike didn't really learn anything from this excursion; he was just his usual helpful self. That's fine and all, and maybe it wasn't your intention to write an episode for the show. The premise alone still works, and it still makes for an entertaining story. Well, barring a few moments of confusion (such as Twilight using overly-complicated words when stressed, Spike's utterance of "I hate being helpful," or calling characters by nicknames in the narration when it's not really called for), but those are just nitpicks.
This might not work as an episode, but it still works as a nice little tale that shows the positive attributes of Spike while still putting him through the wringer at the same time. So, kudos for that.
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Twilight's over-complicated words came from the first episode, where Spike was having difficulty understanding what she was saying because she kept saying big words despite Spike's inability to understand her. I'm not defending what I did, I'm just merely pointing out where I got the idea, and now that I look at it, yeah, it does look a bit odd.
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Morals of a story are for the readers---Moral here is don't sweat the small stuff it always works out in the end.
THIS is how you do a Spike episode. Seriously this is better than anything we've gotten so far, even if the moral didn't come across in the slightest.
I really liked this. Good job!
Well done , a great spoke fic indeed