Some men just want to watch the world burn. Me? I'll be standing at a safe distance with a marshmallow on a stick
A stranger appears in Equestria, blind and helpless. When Luna offers him help, both will get more than they anticipated.
But what happens when the stranger's past comes to get him...
Do not be wary of the 'Gore' tag. It's mainly to be on the safe side so the story would pass moderation. The story does contain a few 'Bloody' bits, but not things like chopped body parts and the likes
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Ah good. Was indeed wondering about that tag.
Saw that coming a mile a way. (no pun intended)
I look forward to more if you continue this
lol these guys look like characters out of "Friendship is manly"
A new task for Michael?
What, is Azazel going to go after Lucifer or something?
6177318 I thought about Azazel, but not in depth. Perhaps he would be another character (IF I decide to do a sequel) but not in a way you might expect
6177343 Sequel? You do realise that it's tagged as incomplete?
6177348 A little mistake. I was planning on releasing the first chapter separately but my editors finished with the second chapter earlier than expected. Fixed it now though
Still as awesome as I remember it!
*4/5 mustaches!
6185113 Thanks. The first chapter of the sequel is coming along swimmingly. I expect it to be finished by this weekend. I'll send it to you once it's done
>Morning Star
>Mace
I see what you did there
6408770 Thanks, though the name Morning Star is actually the translation to the word Lucifer. It was a subtle, almost invisible little hint
You had me then you lost me. Now I'm not sure what to think you wrote the story well but I don't think it's for me.
Well you had me up until he was explaining his reasons then it just set off my "bullshit detector" and I dropped it.
He didn't go aginst him for some noble cause or some grand belief that one should be a master of themselves.
It was simple pride, greed, envy and a lust for power when he realized that a few others felt the same way and sought to stomp out His precious mortal children that He thought were worth more then His immortal servants.
Doesn't matter what others say but he was the very first super villain ever.
Now kudos to drawing me in like you did and keeping me up to the reasons behind the fall but it's not my cup of tea when a story starts trying to absolve the Mourning Star over his titanic screw up.
7026398 I never tried to make Lucifer the hero. There is a very thin line between being the protagonist and being a hero. Lucifer had his reasons, and they weren't all that noble
You lie!!
Couldn't resist
7995257 yeah, I noticed this as I was writing this part XD