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When tragedy strikes, Lyra Heartstring's world gets turned upside down as she's thrown into a shadowy underworld of top secret agencies, aliens, serial killers, donuts, and revenge.

The prequel to my Secret Agent Macintosh saga, but don't worry, you don't have to know a thing about that to read this! Although, you're welcome to check them out Here and Here.

A ponified Torchwood crossover.

Sex and Gore tags only for stuff you'd find in your average James Bond movie or Torchwood episode.

Cover art by Bio-999

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Comments ( 6 )

Poor Benjy. :pinkiesad2:

Hoboy, Lyra's in for a whopper as soon as she wakes up.

Ooh new story!

your dentist was a super villain

So Colgate is the Master/Rani?:rainbowhuh:

A young Lyra Heartstrings

How young? 12? 15? 18? 22? This feels kind of vague.

She gulped and grabbed an umbrella for self-defense with her magic form the stand near the door.

This sentence is really wordy. Probably best to split it in half.

Other than that, it's your standard Lyra-and-human-story-but-with-promise-of-Torchwood-awesomeness-fic.

Waiting for more.

6161596
Hehe, actually the dentist thing is a reference to Dan vs. If you have the time, definitely check it out, it's freaking hilarious.

As for her age, she's about 20 at this point.

Also, just found out about your Lyra story! I'm not sure what you mean about it not being published, I can view it fine on fimfiction.

6161614
I mean that my story failed moderation and won't show up on the front page or in searches. Technically, it's not even a story.

6161651
Ah, well I'm reading it, and I'm liking it so far. Expect some feedback soon.

6161596 she's under 6000000000 years old

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