It is my duty...

by SweetyBelleluvsu

Telling her family, (epilogue)

Sweetie was in a state of shock. "You let my little girl just.... Do that?!"

Valiant had to duck, sweetie could pack a punch when she was mad. "I couldn't stop her!"

"Well you should have tried harder!!!"

"Sweetie," Rumble interrupted, "Emerald was being stubborn!"

"But-"

"No buts!" Rarity cut in, "Valiant, we must go after her!"

"My thoughts exactly."

"But how can we do that?" Rumble asked, rubbing Sweetie's back to comfort her, "Its not like I've been retired for a few years."

"I took that into consideration. Now, here's the plan..."

Comments

[SweetyBelleluvsu]

6499332 I know.... Mind pointing some out?

[Valiant Charge]

6499347 "!ark my words Flight Path... I will be her back..."

Valiant had to duck, sweetie could pack a lunch when she was mad.

[SweetyBelleluvsu]

6499360 fixed

[SSparkle]

(I saw your forum post.)

Good story (although I haven't read this 'Emerald-verse' thing). Although there are capitals missing from time to time in this story. And, even though my current story suffers from it, you should try to use more descriptive details in the story, and a little more show-dont-tell.

But of course then again, half the stuff I just mentioned is stuff wrong with my stories. Anyway, good story. Followed.

[SweetyBelleluvsu]

6499412 yay! Oh, and emerald verse is the land of my ocs. Emerald isle, me lol, and all the rest. If you wish to learn more about it you can always start with cmc growing up. Oh, and welcome to the luvulots!

[SSparkle]

6499427
Okay, I'll check that out later!

[SweetyBelleluvsu]

6499491 blame my tablet