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Twilight has been in love for quite a while now, but she's been having a bit of trouble coping with who exactly she has fallen in love with. When the Princess of Friendship is struggling with her emotions, who better to talk to than the Princess of Love?
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so she fell for Chrysalis?
And I'm guessing the "thing" Twilight's crushing on is Queen Chrysalis.
Great story!
And so did Twilight Sparkle henceforth be known as Princess Narcissus, the One Who Carried a Mirror With Her Everywhere. (Seriously, it's the only answer that fits)
After this exchange, it has to be Chrysalis. If Twilight meant herself, she'd have known where she was.
6149551 Or else Twilight Sparkle, Co - Ruler of the changelings ;)
Why is this tagged tragedy? Tragedy implies that the ending is sad.
If it was Chrysalis as everypony seems to be assuming (and I can't really think of another with wings and a horn), then when did Twilight hear her sing? As far as I recall, Chrysalis only sang during the "This Day Aria" and Twilight wouldn't have heard it since she was in the caves with Cadance.
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I'm an idiot, clicked the wrong yellow tag when creating the story.
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I actually went back and checked to make sure before writing that - when Chrysalis sings the "This day has been just perfect" reprise part, Twilight (and the rest of the Mane 6) are actually present.
And yes, it is Chrysalis.
Twilight's got one hell of a Stockholm Syndrome going on there.
I would have liked seeing Cadance probe more for how Twilight thinks of Chrysalis. If she only saw her at the wedding, that's one hell of a jump from the traumatizing impression Chrysalis left. It sounds like Twilight spent a lot of time fantasizing about her and building up an image of Chrysalis that is probably far from accurate. Then she fell on love with it. This kind of parallels Rarity and Price Blueblood. Why isn't Cadance more worried and alarmed?
Now we just need the follow-up of Cadance and Shining's awkward and uncomfortable first re-meeting with Twi's new marefriend.
That was an acceptable twist, I guess. OOC though.
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Tell that to this.
6151448 This guy.
How exactly did twilight grow feelings for the queen who tried to enslave her country?
The one time they met chrysalis injured her beloved mentor Celestia, mind controlled and drained her brother and kept her friend and foalsitter Cadence captive under canterlot. My disbelief could fill a lake.
Like it is a heck of a twist. It just doesn't make any sense.
I could stand to see a fallow up to this story!
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I didn't say that Twilight was OOC. Cadance is OOC. Also there is no accounting for another fans shipping habits.
Huh, go get em Twily!
Hmmmm. A decent enough story. I didn't see the twist coming, probably because I was hoping there wouldn't be one. I agree with the others saying that this is out of character for Twilight, and even Cadence. Both of them have had naught but negative experiences with Chrysalis, and simply acting like none of those matter in so short a story simply make it feel... forced.
There were a few places where I thought the sentence structure could be improved, but it didn't detract from the story too much.
Twilight was also a little too... happy? to spill her guts once she got started. It was more a 'You'll never guess who I love!' kind of thing than Twilight actually being conflicted about it (something which was quite well established in the first part of the story)
I guess, I would've liked it more if it really had been Cadence in the end, but it wasn't bad.
Before reading the comments, I thought it was Sunset. Like apart from the wings (Unless Twilight saw them after Friendship Games) it all fit. Except for Cadance's reaction.