• Member Since 11th Apr, 2015
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Jazz


Save me from the nothing I've become!

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In Ponyville, Sweetie Belle wakes up in her everyday home, only to discover that she's been left alone! She quickly turns to her friends who do their best to help... But it isn't enough to bring Sweetie Belle's heart back up from the shadows.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 11 )

Rarity's so going to get it.

6174862 Lol.

Working on the second chapter, so be ready for some angry mobs!!!

They could've ask Twilight for Spike to watch over them.

The third chapter is on hiatus, sorry. The laptop I use to write with is not accessible at the moment. Sorry for the inconvenience to all. Also, I can't do stories on my tablet... :ajsleepy: Sorry.

Sorry that the third chapter is so short. I'll make it up with #4! P.S. This is at school, so......... Bye!

Uh....in my honest opinion, this fanfic kind of fell apart when it got to the fire part. It just felt out of place since then and I think it should have a Tragedy tag unless this is all one crazy dream or something.

NOT SWEETIE BELLE!!! Please tell me this story has a happy ending!

Your story started out pretty good, but it started breaking down around the fire part, and just fell all to pieces shortly after. This is a case of "take it back and do it over again."

Thumbs down to what originally seemed to be a promising story, but ended up as a disappointing pile of crap.

7216130 I'm sorry, but I was just a little upset over how this story turn from promising to...what ever this is.

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