Twilight looks back on her life- with her coronation just around the corner. With her Future unbeknownst to the knowledgeable mare, she turns to Zecora for wisdom. One Potion later- and Twilight gets to see what she missed out on all of her life.....
Author Speaking:
So- Yeah. Shameless Doctor Whooves from a Twilight Sparkle POV.
One of my First Stories I ever wrote for this site- but that I removed after it got literally no attention. After some coaxing from a friend (and some minor Life Problems) I'm reposting on the off Chance that something goes horribly right- in which I need to revive this Dead Leviathan....
Also- Although I want this to be an Adventure- it is going to be labeled under 'Slice of Life' since this is suppose to help show what Twilight could have had- and is a Romance.... Sad Tag is also for the Ending- SPOILERS
..... So um... Yeah.... Be Kind in the Comments? Criticism is welcomed and whatnot?
Artwork By: Nasty Lady
Cuz- I don't think they will ever see their awesome Artwork put to such a bad story
(In the Off chance that you do- I am SO sorry. >_<)
I found this chapter to be quite enjoyable. You say this was your first story? Well, good on you, then.
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Oh. Why thank you.
Fun Fact: You are the First Person to Comment on this Story.... As- no one did Last Time I posted it. :P
Any Interesting thoughts, or insights for the Author? XD
Cool idea.
Can't wait for next chapter.
To bad I didn't find the last one.
Well this is amazing for a first story and I see a lot of potential can't wait for more!
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Well- thank you both, very much. Honestly- I wanted to write more for this, but things are changing rather quickly for me. If this gets maybe.... 20 or 25 (ish) likes- I'll try my best to re-write the next chapter. I have one written already- but... Well, I think I don't want to really take the adventure route with this like I did last time. I want to try and make it more emotional- I'll leave the action to the comics. X3
Do what you think best.
I look forward to it.
Well I can't wait for more. Hope to see more of this.
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Thanks! I've already got the whole second Chapter figured out in my head- and I'm putting it to the Docs now. But- I'm still going to wait till I reach at least 20 Likes before I post it. X3 I hope that isn't too much... It seems close enough.
6171662 That's fair enough.
POST IT.
20 LIKES HIT.
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Shhhhhoooottt.... Someone ACTUALLY noticed.... XD Damn- alright. Now I gotta actually re-type the next Chapter.
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..... Eeyup.... So- This Happened.
http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/516667/-so-um-i-just-lost-everything
I can wait.
I have waited this long.
Do your best.
I noticed the 20 likes because I like the story.
You have my attention,
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..... Meep....
*Quickly starts scratching away at the Google of Docs again*
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(Oh, and thanks for the follow!
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Not a problem!
Also- yeaaahhh... Sorry about that- been really busy with a lot of things lately.... However- I will have a whole week to myself next week- and will probably be able to work on it a lot more. X3 I really need to refine the next chapter before I put it out there.
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.... Heh-hem.... Gentleman~ ....
You all should seriously follow me- so I can keep you up to date. :P
I'll make sure to follow you but wow glad your still continuing this story
Glad to see this thing's still alive. And it's still good. I may just give you that follow.
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Glad to see you still like it. I'll admit, there was a lot more to this chapter, but I decided to end it there for the time being. I will be certain to update again sometime this week.
Such a nice story
i love it so much 
There was at least one incident where a character knew what they could not have known, seemingly to just progress the dialogue (like how Spike automatically knowing how Twilight was thinking about the one stallion who ran into her, when Twilight was worrying in the library. I mean, people running into each other seems rather "normal" in a relative sense). Then again, if there is a reason for this, then just ignore this first paragraph.
On a good note, I love the way you have done a lot of the narration, especially in the book. ^^ >"With a gung-ho to his gallop, he took off towards the Moon itself, his craft unlike any we have ever known before. It groaned, and sailed through the wails of the night’s winds, escaping our world, and traveling to the embodiment of the Light in the Darkness."<
Overall, although the background does contradict the official timeline, this is DOCTOR WHO that we are talking about here. XD I heard the voices very clearly, as well, and was able to visualize a really nice scene.
Anyway, I absolutely love where you are going with all of this, and definitely look forward to the next chapter. ^^ (the scene with Celestia at the end was priceless, might I add.)
((At the beginning, you may have made a typo: "But looking back to the Left- Twilight could also tell that there was something too this stallion." Grammatically, it should be 'to.'))
Hmmmmm. I love it.
Spike asking if he could have Twilight's room was just priceless I can't wait to see how things pick up.
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Aww, thank you! X3 I tried to think of a clever way to bring that chapter to an end.
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Knives. Bro. -Hits his chest and makes a peace sign- Still a Fan. Love you for it.
Either of you too want to help me out here with the next chapter? I'm trying to just- think of a basis for the next chapter, where the adventure begins, but I need something totally impossible to base it off of.
8180694 I have a silly idea. The adventure begins where they travel to the sun and get a smoothie. Then the sun goes out and they have to fix it. I have another Idea.
After they get to know who each other and Twilight has saved the doctor a few times. The Doctor would give her a treat and go back to the one pony she loved more then The Princess... Start Swirl The Bearded~ Then some sort of evil attacks them and the three of then team up to defeat it.
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..... Um.... o-o Well... Those are both... Dandy Ideas. (No I'm not doing a Space Dandy Riff) What I meant to ask for was just...
What do you think would be something just. 'Impossible'? .... Like, if I ask you to define the word 'Impossible' what kind of Examples could you put with your definition? What impossibility could you come up with?
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So happy it's back!
Was the last line supposed to be if he needed his own assistance or was it supposed to be if he needed her assistance? Either way great chapter.
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Thank you, it's nice to be working on this again, after all this time.
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.... -Shrugs- Bit of both in all honesty- still deciding for myself what Twilight's 'purpose' down this other path is suppose to be. She's the Doctor's Assistant now (or 'Companion' whichever you prefer, but Assistant sounded like it had more possibilities) and I feel like there might be a little editing in the future on my part to this to clear that up. Not Sure at them moment.... And, thank you.... It's nice to see someone say something about the story. Just- anything.
I like this story so far, always been a fan Doctor Who cross overs but unfortunately they always wind up getting abandoned. Still I look forward to the next one.
This was a good chapter. Love it.
By all that is holy you must continue!
No exaggeration, your characterization is spot on.
Please proceed. DON'T LEAVE US HANGING!!