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And another straight Gilda clopfic unenjoyable with her having breasts almost as big as her torso.

6272653
Sorry you didn't enjoy it mate.:pinkiesad2:

6272763 Hyper-breasts are a big turn off to me.

6272985
Quite sorry about this mate. Do you think I should put a disclaimer? :twilightsmile:

Sequel? I wanna see Gilda get knocked up like she wants. X3

6274934
Only if requested. :twilightsmile: This was a story commission so the idea was someone else's I only wrote it.

good, but the perspective was a bit distracting. 'As I, I said, I asked' using a tense like this tends to break immersion. Especialy when one is making something along these lines. Just some advice.

6275126 I liked it overall it was a good story and I've seen much worse on hear

6275126 so anyone can get more of this if ask for and a commission

6797949
Well the customer has requested a sequel.
But generally, if enough readers demand a sequel and I see a way, I'll write one.

6798139 idk if this help but I want to see a sequel of her panicking of her getting knocked up

6798151
Talk to Ebony Stallion about this idea and see what he thinks. He's the requester, so he decides.

That triple titfuck...

Me gusta. :ajsmug:

Wait a minute.....

No, it can't be you.... could it?

9502959
Depends on who you're looking for.

9503336
Nah, found out later who it was. Seeing the pic of Eclipse down there made me wonder if you were a certain person - you aren't, they're actually Ebony Stallion.

9503668
Well yeah, this story was a commission for him.

9503708
I hadn't put two and two together first, amd the last time I read this was before I knew who they were. Add in that I was too stupid to see if it was a commission or not, and ypu have the situation we're at now. Sorry for the bother.

9504082
Oh it’s no problem at all.

This was a epicly spicy chapter you just had to love can't wait to see the sequel.

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