Writing in my nest. Proofreading status: Avaible!
Scootaloo has not been able to fly her whole life; her wings haven't grown large enough. And she still hasn't gotten her cutie mark.
When it is found out that this is due to Scootaloo being born with a rare and horrible disease, she is determined to take one flight.
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I like the story so far! Keep going!
I like the way the "Tragedy" and "Sad" tags are Scootaloo colored.
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Thanks! I'll definitely be adding more chapters over the next few days!
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Huh, I never noticed that. But now looking at it, it does! And this is a Scootaloo fanfic!
;_; Why would you do this Birdy...
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Oh hey Vucub! Welcome to fimfiction!
Well, an idea just popped into my head. It was raining, I was reading depressing stories and depressing music, then suddenly, idea!
This story's still really good! Keep writing! :)
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Thank you! And I definitely will!
I concur, have a like
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Thank you!
A few new chapters will be coming out tomorrow, so stay tuned!
Uhh, who does Scoots usually stay with?
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You'll see; it's coming up in a later chapter.
There's a web comic that states that for herd animals, like horses, one of their worst fears is dying alone. Maybe that's Scootaloo's issue right now.
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Maybe it is, maybe it isn't
TWILIGHT! WHY?!
It's kinda painful to read Twilight saying all this stuff to Scoot.
Amazing story BTW, this is just what Twilight would do on the show if this happened.
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Thank you! I'm trying to keep the ponies reactions as close to how they would probably act on the show
"you'll" "you're"
Using more contractions in speech will make it come across more natural.
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Thanks. I'll try and remember that in future chapters.
Good chapter!
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Thank you!
Yes, a "pigment" of her imagination, because her imagination goes out of control when it comes up with the colors of the images she sees.
Figment, deary, figment
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oops
dam you illuminati, I know this is your doing!
Congrats man you made me cry
Fnish it plz It is actually really good.
When is the next chapter?
Pain sucks, I honestly feel bad for scoots
SCOOTSY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You've got to fight it scootsy!
I like the story, although it pains me to see scootsy in pain
I wanna cuddle with scootsy
ngh da feels
THE AGONY!
I'd like to see more of this story, but its no rush, take you're time with it
must...control...the...spot...to...hug...scootaloo...ah screw it *runs up and hugs the Pegasus filly*
I mean I hallucinated once, when I had my depression and wanting to kill myself, I saw a demon when I was dating it looked like my girlfriend, but with wings and claws *shudders*