• Member Since 5th Jul, 2014
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the-great-grey


At this point I'm just an old solider

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Comment posted by Flint deleted Jun 29th, 2015

Oh my god, thank you for reminding me to read the latest Tokyo Ghoul:re chapter. Cx

A good read will continue to read if you continue to produce.

well, that's what you get for going out with a stranger at night when there are fucking ghouls on the loose. maybe next time you'll use your head.

I dont even know what Tokyo ghoul is, but this fic is making me go check it out.

6147252 Basically, pray to god that you never have to count backwards from 1000 by 7

half ghoul half human. Born from a human

Is there a human tag on this or did you just forget your word change? :pinkiehappy:

6211269 FUck. See kids. This is why we have editors. Anyway fixed.

One again thanks for the link to the story, loving so far :pinkiehappy:

Re-reading.

My mortality was being unraveled.

unraveled

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I simply love this! Please try and update soon!

6208245 i cant stop laughing at your profile picture, its so great!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

One day I'll get back to this. ONE DAY!

Comment posted by KyuubiMakai009 deleted Jun 11th, 2017

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"Human OC"
Ehhhhhhh

Comment posted by KyuubiMakai009 deleted Jan 13th, 2016

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I'm not saying I don't belive you.
Do what you want.

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Look bub, Human OC stories... Are not seen as quality around here. They don't generate a higher emotional responds from readers. You either make everyone human or make everyone a pony. You don't believe me? Well you can look up many of writing "Horror" stories where human OC's are introduced. Their usually trite and self-insertish. Take my advice. Don't do it. But you won't, fueled by a sense of righteousness in proving yourself right. Or the arrogance that comes from creating something; I mean you came to a public place with a fully fleshed out idea; 99% of the time people only do that to show off. And thusly you've already made up your mind on whether or not you want to make it. So do whatever. I just advise you don't do it.

Comment posted by KyuubiMakai009 deleted Jan 13th, 2016
Comment posted by KyuubiMakai009 deleted Jan 13th, 2016

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You know if you really wanted constructive criticism you would stop trying to justify your story and rather ask questions of why or how. Attempting to justify a story just tells us you've made up your mind. I'm just going to say it your idea isn't very good and the premise has been done to death. Also saying things like "emphasis on "sad", just makes you look like a Sad fic tool.

Comment posted by KyuubiMakai009 deleted Jan 13th, 2016
Comment posted by KyuubiMakai009 deleted Jan 13th, 2016
Comment posted by KyuubiMakai009 deleted Jan 13th, 2016

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This is like talking to a wall.

Comment posted by KyuubiMakai009 deleted Jan 13th, 2016

First time creators lack humility.

Some more of this would be nice......

7463502 I'll finish one day.

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You've had a year.

Where did you get the artwork?

I think they need more then just mask to hide fact that a alicorn is ghoul..... the whole wing and horn thing will let people knew right away

Please, update this story. I like this )

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