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The card holder


"I'd stick my penis in her vagina, if you know what I mean."

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Equestria is home to many a strange creature, and is bordered by many other countries.

But this is nothing compared to the city on an island that just appeared off the coast of Manehattan.
A city that seems oddly colorful, and fishy...









Notice: Contains Splatoon spoilers

Chapters (2)
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Comment posted by Saint Kelly deleted Jun 27th, 2015

The one wearing purple smiled a bit wider at the sight. "You think anyone wonders why the great zapfish is back, now, Marie?"

The other one, wearing green, shook her head. "Callie, I honestly don't think a single inkling really cared too much in the first place."

Marie=violet
Callie=green
You mixed up those characters a bit , but great story:pinkiehappy:

I miss shattered horizon :(

Their eyes also had an usual black outline around them, giving the impression that they were wearing masks. And their ears were pointed, though one of them was wearing some sort of covering over theirs.

Pretty sure it should be 'an unusual'.

I'll track.

SPLATOON! I love this already!

Comment posted by mrkillwolf666 deleted Jul 17th, 2015

So... what's the point of even bringing up the fact that they speak different languages if it's just going to be solved immediately?

I was kind of hoping some one would do a Splatoon/MLP crossover.
I can only hope that this story gets completed and doesn't turn out like "FOR SHOVELRY" where there is only a few chapters and then will most likely never get finished.

6145767 Yeah, I agree. It makes no sense, and is just a waste of text. It messes up the flow of the story.

6143096 Damn, my eyes went wrong again :derpyderp2:

Great story please continue!:yay:

Thank god that a Splatoon crossover has surfaced... *no pun inktended*

6143096 Here's some advice never let the neigh sayers get you down keep up the good work Also I hope the next chapter comes soon!:pinkiehappy:

Dangit, you beat me to the punch.

I am intrigued.

I also like that the transition wasn't smooth, and that it 'felt like an earthquake'. Given the nature of how they were transported that seemed very fitting. Here's hoping there is much more of this to come.

I'm loving this so far! I'm excited to see more.

6145767 Isn't it just to show that in some universes, that problem is still a 'problem', but can be solved already?

6155557

It's not really a problem if it can be solved immediately. Right now, this is as interesting as writing about someone's morning routine.

6145767 It's probably just to avoid the completly illogical set of circumstances that would have to have arisen in order for two vastly differing and utterly alien species to have somewhow miraculously developed the same language.

A coincidence like that would be completely unbelievable, and ruin the credulity of this story about metamorphosing ink-fueled Squid-kids and magical flying rainbow horses.

This has sparked my interests, keep it up! :twilightsmile:

I'm about 2/3 of the way through the chapter, and I've noticed one glaring issue - you need some sort of division between the scene changes, even if it's only an extra blank line. One of these might be better, even:


To get that, put 'hr' with brackets [] around it on a blank line. It helps to put a blank line above and below.

Edit: That said, I like it and will be following the story.

when I searched for a Splatoon/mlp crossover, I was hoping for a displaced story, but this is just as good.

6193563 I'm not sure, I just want to see someone learn and adapt to having squidling abilities.

Comment posted by mrkillwolf666 deleted Jul 23rd, 2015

I need more now, before i explode. Also octolings. Need those, because they are cute. And angry, should provide some plot and character dev. Need imperfect mollusks

splattered horizons ch.2 now plz

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I agree. New chapter plz. And the card holder, you have the responsibility of the only splatoon fic I could find.

I'm trusting you
-CactusMan

There needs to be more stuff like this! Splatoon has so much potential!

You have earned my approval for this story, now start making more puns. They amuse me to no end.

Not bad! Definitely interested!

Le Squid puns are amazing.

The chapter drought has finally ended!


I'm waiting for more
-CactusMan

Wouldn't there be a mayor for the town?

so far so good, keep up the good work. this story is definetly gonna be good:pinkiehappy:

6264831
I think Judd is the mayor


I'm still waiting
-CactusMan

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Well i think that Judd will make a good mayor since inklings come to him for advice and he does judge turf wars

This society was a full democracy? Sure, she was no stranger to the idea, but in all her years she had never heard of one being fully and successfully enacted.

*looks back*
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Nah, that's too obvious.

Great job! Now, how would the ponies react to the latest American Splatfest?

6272828 That would be GREAT!

6354878 Exactly HASBRO CROSSING OVER INTO A HASBRO CROSSOVER. GENIUS.

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