Silence

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Something is troubling Luna to the point where she can't sleep. She decides to go for a short walk around the castle.

Cover art is not mine; will take down if requested.

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goaway

goaway #1 · Jun 27th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Stop making me feel stuff!

Straw Dog

Straw Dog #2 · Jun 28th, 2015 · · ·

I wish I could give you an extra upvote for making this exactly 1000 words.

the dobermans

the dobermans #3 · Jun 29th, 2015 · · ·

Very nice! Added to Sad Luna.

DerpyEngi and Redd

DerpyEngi and Redd #4 · Jul 6th, 2015 · · ·

this is a very beautiful story and it is worthy of more praise than it gets.

I am very interested to see the rest of your stories as this one helped me out with a block on mine and that is always good (btw I don't mean this story gave me ideas, as in stealing your idea, but it relaxed my mind so I came up with ideas easier.)

short, nice, beautiful and soothing this story gets a 9/10 and is Derpy approved, the only thing keeping this from being 10 is that i felt unsatisfied with the ending otherwise it was great

The Wandering Bard

The Wandering Bard #5 · Jul 26th, 2015 · · ·

Now this... this was beautiful. In such a short amount of time, you've managed to convey such a wide range of emotions. From Luna's frustration, so sadness, and then to peace. That is the mark of a great writer. Bravo!

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