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Pegasisters


Sometimes it seems as if the whole world is against you, and everything is gone. But it's not as if everything is gone. For it is in those dark times that you find the true meaning of hope. #ChaseLife

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I let my sister die, pretty much killed my own Mother, and to top it off, my Dad abused me for all of it. Maybe I deserved it, but will he ever forgive me now that I put him in prison? I want to forget, but why is it so hard?

Her disabled sister, her uncaring mother, and her abusive father. Rainbow Dash wants to tell her friends about her past, but what will they think about her?

First story of the series:twilightsmile:

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 8 )

Ehh, seems good so far. But you should try not to use abbreviations so much, and try to check if you have the correct punctuation. :ajsmug: I'll be keepin' track of this one.

6193065 Okay good to know. Yay!!! You're my first comment. :twilightsmile:

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If you want, you can message me the next chapter before publishing it. That way I can correct your mistakes :raritywink:

6195048 Ok, I'll be sure to do so. Thanks. :twilightsmile:

AMAZING Already. I can relate to the parents because i didn't grow up with the best ones either.I can see a great story with tons of emotions but it's all life:ajsleepy:

Qhy dose RD's dad have to be such a big menie pants?:fluttercry: and is this gonna be a SoarinDash story?!:pinkiehappy:

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