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Just a writer who lives in a small apartment in New York City.  

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Finally finished!  As her friends find success, Applejack begins to worry that her life as a simple farmer makes her the least special of her friends.  Rainbow Dash comes up with a plan to show her just how special she is- and discovers something about her feelings for the country farmer in the process.


My first story!  Please let me know what you think!  Chapters will be added once every three days without fail.

Edited by Clavier

Cover Image by Derpii Hooves  

First Published
21st May 2012
Last Modified
12th Jun 2012

I have had those feelings of jealousy before it hurts:pinkiesad2:

This is a story i can get behind keep it up:pinkiehappy:


Thank you so much, 501st, I will!  


when might i expect updates? weekly, daily, or whenever you get around to it?


I'll be updating this story a few times per week.  You can expect a chapter in the next few days!

I love this story! Great characterization, a sweet story, I might just have a new favorite AppleDash fic. Keep going!

(I always love AJ and Dash teasing each other. Great job on that.)

(Edit to add: Ignore the haters. There are people who thumbs down every ship fic, or every AppleDash fic or something. All I know is that mine always get a few thumbs down, then a bunch of thumbs up. Strangely, my gen fic gets no thumbs down.)

Wow, this is really good so far! Like some others said, great characterization, and an interesting idea that I could actually see happening. Plus, Appledash. Can't go wrong with that :derpytongue2: Keep up the great work, I'm definitely gonna look out for more of this


Oh, thank you for telling me that!  I was wondering why I was getting so many "thumbs down" so fast, I was worried.  

I'm glad you liked it!


Thank you, Ladyhart.  I think I have some good ideas for the story, I hope you like where it goes!

Yay for Appedash

I hadn't realized it was just the one chapter up so far. :ajsleepy:

I'm liking this. Not only as a sucker for shipping, but it feels nice. It feels like it could lead into a well rounded situation, not something entirely shaded one direction or another.  :ajsleepy::ajsleepy: Is nice.


Sorry to trick you, ambion!  Don't worry, I'm already starting on the next chapter as we speak, so you won't have to wait too long.  I'm glad you like it!

This definitely has potential.  I'll be watching :scootangel:

I will be most certainly be keeping an eye on this.


I can't believe no one is commenting about the plan.

Rd will try to run the farm? XD

Your characterization is spot-on, and your dialogue is excellent. The pacing is also pitch-perfect, so the story flows naturally; it doesn't feel like you're rushing anything, nor does it feel like you're lingering too long. I'll definitely keep an eye on this one.


Thank you for the kind review, De Carabas.  

I have been writing sad stuff all day, and I needed this like you wouldn't believe!

That was hilarious. Great job! :rainbowlaugh:


I'm so glad it cheered you up, Bookplayer!  I'm didn't know it was going to be so silly, but I liked how it turned out.

It's decided, I'm definitely watching you. :pinkiehappy:

Seriously, I love this story and the characterisation felt spot-on to me.


Thank you, Lone Ranger.  I'm glad you liked my characterization, I worked hard on getting it right!

This was adorable! and sweet jesus did it make me laugh... I love the story! Keep up the good work! :ajsmug:


I'm glad you liked it!  So what do you think, should I add a "comedy" tag to the story...?

Oh shit son!




Are we to be expecting some rainbowjack or appledash?:rainbowhuh:


Well I don't want to give anything away, but... probably.

Another awesome chapter! I'm really liking this so far, and your characterization is really accurate. Can't wait for more, keep up the great work :pinkiehappy:



Glad you like it, Trinary.  Thanks!

As always, perfect. Poor Dash, I just want to read more right away so that I know it gets better.

Keep up the great work!


Can't wait for more?  *poof*  Well here's another chapter!


Don't worry... I have a feeling it will get better.  But we have to get to the "Adventure" part of the story first!


Didn't have to wait long for your Appledash part of the story!  


Thought it was gonna progess through the story and she confesses feelings for her toward the end but still great job:scootangel:

Oh wow, this is shaping up quite nicely. Love how you're handling slightly-in-the-future head's-just-a-little-bit-bigger-than-it's-always-been Rainbow Dash. Very true to the spirit of her character.

You could probably use a good editor though. There are a few minor stumbles, like miscapitalizations and such.

No! NOOOO! After all that?!       You must upload more. You must, you must!  I need to know what happens!


New Chapter once every three days!  

Gah! Cliffhanger! I'm glad you update quickly. Super awesome job, yet again. I actually leaned closer to my computer screen in apprehension at AJ's reaction, until I realized what I was doing and laughed :derpytongue2: keep it up :pinkiehappy:


Glad you liked it.  You can expect a chapter to be sent in sometime tomorrow!

I really love this story becauso its so different besides the other appledashfics =)

Cant wait for the next chapter!


I really love this story becauso its so different


besides the other appledashfics =)


Edit: :)


Why the sad Face?

Its a good thing that the story has a completly other plot than other Fics, it a reason why i love this:rainbowkiss:

English is not my first language and a make a lot of grammatical and spelling errors, so maybe you misunderstood something.... ;)


Oh, I'm sorry, it sounded like you were saying "it's so different, but it's not at all different from other appledash fics" which sort of made it sound sarcastic.  I'm glad you like it, I misunderstood!

Just amazing. The black dragon is awesome, and I LOVED AJ talking to Big Mac.

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