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Life in Equestria is great Ponies are happy and the grand galloping gala is coming up.
But when Crysalyis and her changelings attack on such a specail night everything goes down hill. What happens when the element of kindness is kidnaped? How will Discord react? We'll see

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The grammar is really off, and there are some OOC moments.:unsuresweetie:

Good idea, though.

6431738 I tried my best to keep them in character. (This is sortof a year after 'Make new freinds but keep Discord' Discord' so if its Discord who is mostly OOC, well thats necausse he is truly reformed and has a crush on Fluttershy) As for gramar, I do my best to catch the errors myself. I dont have an editor for this so thats a reason some things may be off Plus you cant expect a middle school girl to write a perfect story

Comment posted by Dr midnight deleted Dec 9th, 2015
Comment posted by Dr midnight deleted Dec 9th, 2015
Comment posted by Dr midnight deleted Dec 9th, 2015

When will there be a new chapter

6713335 Yes there will be. I've just been so busy It's taking a while to write it.

Squee I love Phantom of the Opera :yay: That was awesome, Masquerade is one of my favourite songs - not that I actually dislike any from that musical at all! :pinkiehappy: Loved this chapter just for that song, and enjoying the story lots!

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I agree there are a few grammar errors, but other than that,......

"Attention all Fluttercord lovers, please fasten your seat belts, this ride will be full of fluff, if there are any tears or squeaks of joy during this, the author is not responsible, thank you, and have a nice day " :heart:

This is completely random but when you said “glittery gold gown with jewels” I immediately thought of one of my favorite fics “The Opera Phantom Discord”


Is the theme Phantom of the Opera?

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Although I absolutely love Opera Phantom Discord and pretty much all things musical, this story dosn't have much to do with Phantom of the Opera, other than using the song 'Masquerade' and perhaps a coupple of refrences now and then.

Please continue! You are sooo good at this! I’m jealous...😊😄

Comment posted by Marina Stars deleted Nov 11th, 2019

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I'm glad you like this story. Thank you so much for your comment and the fave :twilightsmile:

I’m not trying to rush, I’m just way to curios for my own good😓, but when are you planning to release a new chapter?

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No problem at all, I'm glad you are excited to see more, and to be honest, I dont know. I am trying to write whenever I can, but life gets so busy. I have been working on a new update recently and hopefully I can have it out soon, we'll see :pinkiehappy:

I totally get having not enough time to do fanfics! Just take your time and I bet it’ll turn out great😁👍🏻!

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